Rule-Based Dungeons: Starting with the Bride in the Mirror

Maybe I should change my name. Oh no, I've been kept by a beautiful woman and am now raking in a huge wave of online traffic.

There's a book called "My Wife is Eight Feet Eight" with an interesting premise, but it was abandoned.

This feeling

Can't it pass if the code is duplicated?

It's better to delete the books that have already been sent, as they might affect readers' ability to enjoy the books later.

To be honest, decent people are attracted by the name, like me 🙂

This book has the potential to become a legendary work! I won't dwell on the good aspects. Let's talk about the problems: 1. The environmental descriptions are somewhat lacking, and the scenes lack detail. For example, the small dungeons like the Daughter Kingdom and the Black Serpent lack detailed descriptions.

When will I be able to drive a big car? If I can't drive a big car, there's always a MINI and a supercar, right? 😃

Eight-foot Lady

Looking back at the previous book, I noticed a small problem with the author: the writing style is mostly short sentences with very few long paragraphs. This relates to the lack of detailed description I mentioned before. Environmental descriptions should use longer sentences, and the characters' actions, language, and expressions should also be consistent.