Douluo: Play as Nie Feng and Reward Twenty-Three Swords

Author, the subject matter you wrote is good, but I looked at the table of contents and found that your plot setting is a bit "narrow". You are playing Nie Feng and Xiao Longnu, so don't focus on Shi Dake's gadgets, but leave the "legend" of the character you play. Of course, you can still abuse Shi Dake's gadgets, but don't lose the image of the character you are playing, otherwise the price will be too low. There are not many chapters yet, you can still make changes However, the most important point is that the above are purely personal opinions, you can just write according to your own ideas, and there is no intention to guide writing.

Nie Feng, who has inherited all his strength, can't kill Jiang Yuyan in seconds and can still let her run away. What are you writing, and why are you saying that your internal strength is not as good as Jiang Yuyan's? Writing blindly

What are you writing about? I read two chapters and he persuaded me to quit.