Reincarnation Paradise: I Will Transform into the Only Sun

Since the author Ji is a newbie, writing a book for the first time, and has somewhat forgotten the original work of Samsara Paradise, there are some problems such as incorrect data, the flavor of Samsara Paradise is not strong enough, and the first world does not achieve the effect I want. However, I will review Samsara Paradise and other good fandoms recently to try to correct these problems in the second world. I will also repair this world in the future. If you want to see it, you can come back and watch it again. If you have any questions or suggestions, you can ask them. Thank you. Finally, thank you readers for your great likes, thank you!

Try to skip the story of Double Star, it is already a piece of shit now. I summarized the questions raised by the book review, 1. Regarding the author's intention to write about Lao Yinbi, everyone had a very negative reaction. They did not see how sinister the protagonist was but felt embarrassed. 2. Regarding technical ability, everyone has read a lot of paradise articles in recent years. The appearance rate of technical skills is too high, and everyone is tired of aesthetics. And there is a saying that goes well, those who learn from me will live, and those who imitate me will die. If the protagonist is highly similar to Su Xiao, there will definitely not be a good ending. The author's writing skills cannot be stronger than that of a mosquito, right? So I suggest that the author writes his own protagonist. Does his character have to coincide with that of Su Xiao and other old yinbi? The author has proven that he is not good at writing this. It is better to highlight the characteristics of the Sun God Cult and be more straightforward and reckless. If the author also arranges technical abilities, which are the same as Su Xiao's alchemy, I feel that it is better not to write it. Everyone will be tired of aesthetics. Su Xiao is almost at the top in the original work. It is illogical for the protagonist to find the same route as Su Xiao and be stronger than Su Xiao in the fanfic. It would be even more inappropriate if you let the protagonist be beaten by Su Xiao, so you can only take a new path. Techniques can be used, but they are not suitable as the main system. The main system should fall on the sun. , , , , , , , , , Then there are my personal private suggestions, which may not be in line with the appetite of the majority of readers, and the author should refer to them appropriately. Since the title of the book refers to the only sun, why not let the protagonist steal the sun in the world after he is strong enough, and fuse it into his own body. It can be a small violation, as long as it is not irreversible, and by the way, he can go to another paradise world. For example, the sun can communicate with the world, spread spiritual pollution, let the people of the world believe in the sun, and expand the sphere of influence of the Sun Temple. It can also be mixed with viruses and infect the people of the world into solar zombies.

I know that any fan fiction about paradise is not a technical one

Yes, you can specialize in heavy swords. Many of the bosses that Pi Pixiao encounters later are like this. For example, King Iron Feather beat Pi Pixiao very badly.

It seems that the author is not suitable for the old coin flow. Since the title of the book is called the sun, it is better to take the high road and overpower the semi-invincible flow. The sun can diffract many entries of sunlight, flame, light, high temperature, and is the main energy source of the living planet. The large-scale and long-range light technique (you can refer to Ultraman for the development route), the fire technique is famous for the true sun fire, and the sun shines for large-scale group healing. There is more concept of the sun in a mystical direction and has a lot of occult symbolism. Author, when you think about fighting, use light cannons for long-range and large ranges, use flame enchantment for short- and medium-range, use flame rays to transform soldiers, and then equip yourself with a light healing spell and a sun push.

Come on, author, and write well. Then don't imitate other fans who don't have much strength and just work on the native world or the void planet every day. In the early stages of the Paradise with Problematic Thoughts, you need to grow in a derivative world. Most of the violators that the Hunters need to hunt are also here. Because it is an external force that infringes on the interests of Samsara Paradise, it is a violator. As long as Renren uses that power to plunder other paradises, everyone will be the darling of the paradise!

The author is not suitable for writing about the genre of Lao Yin B, because the writing style is not good enough, and the first copy is written stiffly, especially the 21st picture is blurry and awkward.

Stars are not rare, there are many of them. If they were the only source of light, the universe must not be big.

1. First of all, I refer to the comics. Because the comics are drawn very slowly, the animation is actually equivalent to a second creation, so the subsequent plot will definitely be different, but I will not write it so complicated this time. It is a very simple story line, mainly the protagonist's cool actions, plus the foreshadowing of the world, to make up for the shortcomings. 2. I received feedback from readers, so I put some professional terms and character relationships directly in the paragraph comments. If you want to know more, just click on it. 3. I will kill directly in the next world and kill the world. Don't worry, but the income in this world will not be lower than the income in the world, especially some invisible income. The free ones are the most expensive, and they will also benefit the system and future development.

Eternal Burning Sun is one of the seven righteous gods in Mystery, right? It is also 1/5 of the path of the three pillars of God in Mystery. Eternal Burning Sun is the path of the sun, plus the Hanged Man, Visionary, Tyrant, White Tower, and the source of chaos sea, you can become an omniscient and omnipotent God, the pinnacle of the outer gods! !

It's understandable that you do this to prevent theft after it's on the shelves, but if you do this when your new book is free, there's no way you'll get follow-up reading data.

Regarding the second world, everyone can say whatever they want, and the author will choose a suitable world. Thank you all.

Maybe it's because I'm ignorant and I don't recognize any of these two copies. As a newbie, I'm a little confused because I'm not familiar with any of these two copies. I don't know how popular these two copies are. Can we write something that the public is more familiar with? For example, DC or Marvel or other famous names that are more familiar. No one knows these two copies. Do you think I should give up or not?

After reading the first 22 chapters, I can only say that the text is too superficial and the foundation of the language needs to be polished.

I don't understand. You can't guarantee updates. What's the use of releasing them in advance? Do you guarantee your perfect attendance? Click here and all the previous content will appear. Do you think there are still readers who will follow your book? If you can't write it, you won't write it. It's a grind. When I saw an update, I thought you had released a new chapter, but I still can't subscribe to yesterday's chapter. Anyone who likes to read it can read it 😐

I heard that writing fan fiction requires the copyright of the original work?

It seems that I have never seen a fan of Sun Moon Tongcuo. Will the author consider this copy?

I think it would be suitable for the author to write about "Steel Shell City Reggios"

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