Conferred God: Got Cramped at the Beginning

I finally know why I removed this book from my bookshelf in the first place 🙂🙂🙂 Let me first explain that I only read chapter 19 before I died of poison. The book was originally deleted because the protagonist executed the prisoners in the Dragon Palace on the charge of cannibalism. It was because the protagonists who traveled through time and became monsters during the Great Desolate River returned fire, harming the interests of their own race to promote the development of the human race. At that time, I was poisoned and died. Because this triggered bad memories for me, I removed the book from my bookshelf. The reason why I am here to post a chapter review now is because the protagonist is building a good relationship with Nezha. Nezha almost killed you back then. I can't stand it when you are still there to be Nezha's licking dog. Of course I can understand why the protagonist did this, but I don't feel comfortable with it at all. The value of online articles is for most people a place to release their emotions. This is also the reason why refreshing articles are so popular. Today's online articles are basically not unpleasant. Even those platinum masters will not write plots that are frustrating but are in line with human feelings. They will all create refreshing points, but the refreshing points are not the same. After all, life is so tiring. In reality, it is all about those frustrating human relationships, but it is still the same in the novel. Why do I still read it 🙂🙂🙂 Also, don't say that the early stage is a bit toxic like some authors do, just endure it in the middle stage. With so many articles on the Internet, why don't I look for a book that won't make me depressed and aggrieved throughout? Why do you have to endure this early stage of your life?🙂🙂🙂 The above is just my personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it.

No more, just read it yourself and help the author select readers in advance

I found that no matter the protagonist, Mrs. Nezha Yin or the author's presentation tendency, no one cares about the people of Chentangguan, only Li Jing. Only Li Jing cares about the people of Chentangguan. He can give up his own son, but he also wants to protect Chentangguan and the people. Even if the author says that Li Jing is not good in terms of presentation, I still think Li Jing is much better than Nezha.

First, water. There is not much practical information in one chapter. It feels like in order to complete the task of updating the word count every day, I have become a tool to pile up the word count. Second, I like to lower the protagonist's level and do some level-skipping challenges to show how powerful the protagonist is. In fact, it's just contempt. I write about how awesome the protagonist's golden fingers are, what awesome skills, foundation, etc., But this is not perfect, that is not perfect, and the level is not improved. It's so difficult for you even if you have a golden finger, so wouldn't it be true that the other great talents without golden fingers are just as talented and talented as the protagonist? It seems that the protagonist himself is just a loser who can only play games Thirdly, for the villain Wu De who appeared at the beginning, it is enough to drag it out for hundreds of chapters, and the treatment is too awkward. It has been paved the way for so long and you are waiting for you to have a good time. , The result is that you are a stinker Fourth, the plot before the end of Fengshen is given 8 points. The plot after the end of Fengshen is variously stitched, and the stitches are very stretched, so I can only give 4 points. Even if you use the plot of Journey to the West to connect it?

It's tasteless to eat, and it's a pity to abandon it. It feels more and more wrong, even the mechas have come out, and I've taken it.

I would like to give you a suggestion: don't rush to a different level or you'll feel like your level is being lowered! If you use a combination of human, earthly, celestial, golden, celestial, great, and so on, and then add a few lines of poetry, the style will instantly come to you. Just like those days when I was reading articles on cultivating immortals, you, who is in the golden elixir stage, would like to say: You have finally broken through to the third level. How low grade. A master wrote: Once a golden elixir is swallowed, my fate will be decided by me from now on! Don't you think the strong character will come out?

​​ Can this protagonist be resurrected infinitely? Why do I feel so indifferent to my own life that I keep focusing on the task? Either it is a robot, it just knows how to keep an eye on tasks, how to activate tasks, and does not care about any dangerous robots. It is no longer a human being.

I feel a little uncomfortable. The villain keeps causing trouble and the protagonist just doesn't deal with it or is slow to deal with it. I feel uncomfortable.

Can you collect the main character panel after it is put on the shelf? How many chapters have it been in a row? The word count is kept low in the panel. Half of one chapter contains repeated content. It's too much. It costs money. It's not easy to support the original version by workers. 😓😓😓

The writing this time really suits my appetite. I like reading novels about time-traveling and becoming gods. The writing is very good, especially some settings that made my eyes light up. Come on

At the beginning of becoming a god, the heaven and the earth opened, and the third prince was so powerful that he was powerful beyond the nine heavens. The divine power is as mighty as fire, and he is brave and fearless in fighting demons. Dragon scales shine like stars, and phoenix feathers fly like clouds. Holding a sword to slay evil spirits, slay all evil to protect the world. The clouds and clouds are swirling around me, and the heaven and earth are dancing to show their magical powers. The sword flashed and the lightning flashed, and the thunder roared and shook the sky. The third prince is brave and invincible, and vows to uphold the mission of becoming a god. Loyalty and loyalty forge a heroic soul that will last forever and be passed down through the ages.

The more I read, the more I feel like the author has changed. The protagonist has not appeared in several chapters. I scrolled forward a little, but the text has not been changed. It is as if the system and the earliest game world settings have suddenly disappeared. It seems that since the system and other things are no longer reflected in the article, the protagonist appears less and less often, and becomes more and more frustrated and boring. These chapters are like a group portrait at best, but they are just like water at worst. It really feels like the author has changed.

After reading the first few chapters of the book, the author said on the one hand that the Chan Cult looks down on the dragon clan (those who criticize those with scales and horns), and on the other hand said that the second-generation disciple Huang Longzhenren was his ancestor (accepted him as his disciple). Why is there such a contradiction? It is also said that Nezha was designed by Taiyi Zhenren to sever ties with his family (general monks who go up the mountain to practice Buddhism say that they must cut off the worldly ties), then might Huanglong Zhenren have nothing to do with the Dragon King of the East China Sea, or have already severed the relationship (but the Dragon Clan itself is a god, and is the Dragon King of the Four Seas) What is the relationship between Heaven and Chanjiao, or the system of mythology itself is messed up There are too many bugs

I've only read chapter 5 and a half, and I really have no interest in reading any more. Both panels and attributes, these things in the fantasy background of Fengshen are too confusing. When I saw that the first few chapters were so important and did not advance the plot to attract people to read, and spent a lot of time writing about your challenge levels and templates, I knew that this book was worthless... Some people will say, "Hey, you are so good at talking, why don't you write a book yourself?" Please, I am just telling what I want to read as a reader. What I normally want to see is cultivation, adventure, treasure hunting and fighting, or even vertical and horizontal combinations... The entire panel is there to study the attribute templates. Once is ok, twice is ok, any more will be fine. Bye bye. Actually, the starting point is quite good. I watched that movie a few years ago and I was quite interested in Nezha, the Third Prince. It's a pity.

I'm a little off topic. I don't know what I'm writing now.

Author, I admire you for not being in prison despite your poor grades, but could you refine your writing style and sort out your outline?

Regarding the part where Wude Xingjun framed the protagonist, he attacked and killed the executioner. The executioner represents the will of Heaven. Isn't it a slap in the face of Heaven to forcibly attack the executioner to survive? How could it not be pursued? And in this case, who would want to be an executioner for the Heavenly Court? But being an executioner is indeed a dangerous profession. Wei Zhengmeng killed the Dragon King in Journey to the West, and the ghost of the Dragon King of Jinghe came to seek revenge from Li Shimin. That is to say, after the execution, the heavenly court does not care whether the executioner lives or lives. I think this strategy should be explained this way. The executioner is an important position because he can accept favors from various bosses and retain people at his own risk (such as a civet cat in exchange for a prince). But the premise is that you cannot be reported. Once you are reported, it violates the rules of heaven and you will be executed. So this is what Wude Xingjun had in mind. If the protagonist is fair and honest, he will offend the boss and be settled by someone else. If he is corrupt and bribery, he will be open-minded and will be reported by him and die in violation of heaven's rules.

I really like the plot of the protagonist and King Wen's gambling battle to create a legend. It's really exciting and has a sense of mythology and epicness. However, I can't understand the various extraterrestrial Greek mythology that follows. What about the plot? Where is the plot? Sometimes I read more than ten chapters in a row and I don't know what the protagonist is doing. The pace is slow and the text is rich, and new characters and new names pop up one after another. What am I reading? I don't know!

Eating rice and smashing the pot, sitting and standing, holy bitch

Maybe it's the person's misfortune, even if the eunuch said it, he would say it and declare it over. Woohoo, the soul has returned. There is no fish to eat, so it is driven to another courtyard.

3 Million words, the ending is ready, let's start the next book

I don't have time to read when I go out. Why haven't I updated it in a few days when I wanted to read it? It's well written. Please wait a few days to read it.

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