Fighting the Masked Man

I saw the chapter of Two Kun Years, which was so overwhelming that there was even a quarrel in the comment area. Super divine bloodline, plus a Dou Zong family resource, I just became a Dou Zong in two and a half years, and this is still the first stage of training. I read the author's analogy in the comment area and said that it would be speechless to go directly to high school instead of elementary school, junior high school. I am very talented, and I have already learned the contents of junior high school by myself in the second and third grade. Do I still need to hang out in elementary school like others? There are examples in real life. Others are in graduate school when they are in their teens. You are writing a novel and you are like this. You can only say that it is good, but you may not have read any books. You can read anything.

After reading the plot of Dou Po, I couldn't bear to switch to Wu Dong Qian Kun. For me, this book ended after Dou Po was promoted to Dou Emperor Invincible. I read it well and it was a pretty good fanfic. It's just that Xiao Yanzi was a little caught off guard when he went offline.

Why can't it be the heroine? I love this so much.

I'm a big SB, anyway, the post will sink sooner or later, no one will read it, it doesn't matter anymore

The author, I have found for you the fifth-grade to seventh-grade elixirs in "Fights Break the Sphere" and "Yao Lao Legend". They are basically the same when combined with the original works. At present, the top elixirs in the Northwest Continent are only seventh-grade, and only eighth-grade elixirs are available in Zhongzhou. I hope it will be useful for your works, keep up the good work! Looking forward to future articles. Fifth-grade elixir: There is an extremely rich fragrance of colored elixirs. When it is formed, it will contain too much energy and produce substantial energy ripples out of thin air. The fragrance of colored elixirs will linger in the sky near the elixir. The fifth-grade elixir Rejuvenation Pill (specially used to heal some serious injuries, and the medicine is mild and will not cause any damage to the injured body. It is simply an excellent elixir for healing serious injuries) The fifth-grade poison pill Black Weathering Ghost Pill (it can easily poison the masters of Dou Wang level, even the Dou King can cause their hearts to rot and their bones to rot, and their cultivation will be greatly damaged) The fifth-grade pinnacle elixir Burning Blood Pill (can be improved in a short time after taking it) A large amount of strength, even if it is taken by a strong Douhuang, it can barely increase one star's strength. The sequelae is that taking this pill will burn the blood and essence in the body, and will fall into a period of weakness afterwards) The fifth-grade elixir Qingyuan Dan (is a pill that can assist the cultivation of Douhuang levels. Although it cannot directly increase the star level of a strong Douhuang like Huangji Dan, it has a significant effect on accelerating cultivation and is a very good fifth-grade elixir) Fifth-grade elixir Peak elixir Dou Wang Dan (can temporarily soar the fighting energy in the body of the person who takes it to the level of Dou Wang, giving him short-term Dou Wang strength. Aftereffects: destroying the meridians and even Dantian of the user, and may not be healed for life if he is unlucky. Try not to take it unless it is necessary to save life) Five-grade elixir Blood Lotus (taken internally, it is an emerald-colored liquid, which can nourish the soul. It is not complicated to refine, but the medicinal materials required are too unconventional) Fifth-grade elixir Blood Lotus Dan (after taking it, a layer of strange energy blood flail will be formed on the surface of the human body, and this layer of blood flail can withstand extremely hot temperatures. Therefore, only with the help of its effect, can it be possible to get close to the strange fire, and look for opportunities to take the next step. The materials are blood lotus essence, ice spirit flame grass and third-level magic core) Fifth-grade pill Longli Dan (allows the user to have extremely tyrannical power in a short period of time. This kind of power It has nothing to do with the amplitude of fighting spirit, but is an extremely pure physical force. Therefore, this "Dragon Power Pill" belongs to the kind of pill that can directly act on increasing strength) The fifth-grade pill Resurrection Purple Pill (the fifth-grade pill can completely repair some strength that has declined due to seals or internal injuries) The fifth-grade pill Fengxing Dan (can cause a person's speed to skyrocket in a short period of time. If someone is chasing him, he can definitely save his life. In the dark The Black Emperor Sect elder "Qi Shan" took it out at the elixir exchange meeting held by Qianyaofang in Jiaoyu) The fifth-grade elixir Qi Xiudan (it has some effects on accelerating the recovery of Dou Qi for Dou Huang and even Dou Zong, and is a relatively high-level consumable elixir) The fifth-grade elixir Seven-Star Spiritual Wood Pill (although taking this elixir cannot improve the level of Dou Qi, it can greatly strengthen the meridians of wood practitioners and improve the perception level of Wood dou Qi. It is quite beneficial to Wood practitioners. ) The fifth-grade elixir Sheben Guyuan Dan (after taking it, it can not only strengthen the body, but also enhance the talent of cultivation. The medicine clan, one of the eight ancient tribes, uses the elixir to cultivate young people. This elixir is so precious that even the medicine clan below the sixth-grade medicine can take the elixir at will, so it has to supply it in a limited amount) The fifth-grade elixir Diao Ming Dan (can temporarily revive the seriously injured and dying people, but it only makes the user breathe a sigh of relief. If not treated in time, it may be possible to return to the dead. Heaven has no skills) Sixth-grade elixir: When the elixir is completed, a strong fragrance of elixir will overflow from the medicine cauldron. High-level or peak sixth-grade elixirs will also produce strange phenomena of heaven and earth, usually in the form of circles of energy ripples with the medicine cauldron as the center. The heart bursts out in all directions, creating a thunderous explosion, and a beam of energy shoots into the sky from the medicine cauldron. Generally, sixth-grade elixirs have some spirituality. The higher the level of the elixir, the stronger the spirituality. The sixth-grade elixir, Demonizing Pill (the effect is similar to that of the Transformation Pill, can only partially transform Warcraft into human form, but this pill is also the most popular among some Warcraft families) The sixth-grade pill, Qixin Dan (within one hour of taking it, you will have a very keen intuition of the fire attribute fighting spirit, and gain a large amount of soul perception) Strength bonus. This bonus will decay after an hour, but it will stabilize to a certain extent. If you practice it properly, you can permanently retain this soul perception) The sixth-grade pill, Retrospection Pill, can reshape the meridians and target the meridians and Dantian that have been damaged for unknown reasons, restoring the user's physical condition to recovery. Status! Requirements: The duration of injury should not exceed three months. Effectiveness: Targeted at Dou Huang and the powerful below) Sixth-grade elixir Soul Resurrection Pill (can cure symptoms caused by the influence of other souls) Sixth-grade elixir Suppressing Gu and Transforming Divine Pill (can control demons and poisons, whether it is to suppress or expel poisons, it has miraculous effects) The sixth-grade elixir Qingming Shou Dan (can increase a person's life span by nearly ten years, and a person can only take one in a lifetime. This elixir is extremely rare even in the entire Dou Qi Continent. People who can possess this elixir prescription are very rare in the entire continent. The refining materials are Qingming Fruit, Longevity Royal Jelly and Ten Thousand Years Ivy) The sixth-grade peak elixir Earth Spirit Pill (the top-level pill in the sixth-grade list, is used to devour strange fires. Only with its effect can it be possible for strong men below the Douzong to approach the strange fires at close range. It is a must-have item for people of this strength to devour strange fires that are equivalent to the power of about fourteenth place on the strange fire list. If there is no high-level medicine cauldron to cover it when it is formed, , there will be a strange phenomenon in the sky and the earth, producing a blue beam of light about two feet thick, shooting into the sky, and producing many energy ripples, spreading from the elixir to the surroundings of the elixir. There are four refining materials, green wood fairy vine as the main material, earth core fire sesame, dragon beard ice fire fruit, and a sixth-level water magic core) Sixth-grade peak elixir Po Zong Dan (The top-level sixth-grade elixir can increase the success rate of those who have reached the peak of Douhuang by 10% when they advance to Douzong. It also guarantees that those who take it will be able to stabilize their strength at the level before the impact even if they fail to attack Douzong without the level being lowered. This elixir is also famous in Douqi Continent and has ten refining materials. Several kinds, including cold marrow branches, etc.) The sixth-grade peak elixir Huangji Dan (can only be taken at the Douhuang level. After taking it, the Douhuang strong person will increase his strength by one to two stars in a short period of time. However, this elixir also has the effect of strengthening the meridians and refining the bones. The residual medicinal power left after improving the strength will help the person who takes it strengthen the body. The Douhuang strong person will , in this level, there is only one chance to take the Huangji Pill. If you take it again, it will be wasted due to the resistance of the pill itself. This pill, like the "Douling Pill", is famous everywhere in the mainland. It is the most sought after pill among the strong people in the mainland. The prescription is naturally a sixth-grade or above refined medicine. A must-have prescription for masters) The sixth-grade elixir Hunyuan Bone Shaping Pill (has a particularly significant effect on the injuries of Warcraft, but the potency of this pill is too overbearing. Even Warcraft will cause some pain when taking it at the beginning, so only those with Warcraft physique can take it, and if you want to maximize the potency, you need to refine it. The special stimulation of the pharmacist) The sixth-grade elixir Breaking the Edan (has the miraculous effect of breaking most seals. After taking it, it can also form a resistance to this seal in the body. In the future, if you encounter this kind of seal again, you can have a small chance of being exempted) The sixth-grade elixir Fusion Spirit Pill (allows you to gain soul and body The elixir can be fused with the body, and can quickly restore the power of the soul, and can also completely repair the trauma that the soul has suffered) The sixth-grade elixir Douling Dan ("Douling Dan") is almost the most popular sixth-grade elixir among the strong men in the mainland. This elixir can only be taken during the Dou Wang level, and taking one during this period can completely To rise to a level without risk, of course, you can only take one pill between levels. Any more will be wasted due to the resistance of the pill. Think about it, at the level of Dou Wang, it is not impossible even if it takes several years to rise to a higher level, and this small pill can save you. It has accumulated over the years, and it has not had any negative effects. It cannot be tolerated that those strong Douwangs are not crazy about it. The refining materials are known to include blood python branches) The sixth-grade peak elixir Qinghun Dan (the top-level elixir of the sixth grade, can cleanse all the soul power in the body that does not belong to oneself, and also has the effect of warming and nourishing the soul. The refining material is Qing Body Grass, Ice and Fire Soul Melting Fruit, Water Spirit Lotus Seed Heart) Sixth-grade elixir Snake Marrow Bone Sloughing Pill (can integrate the medicinal power into and nourish the baby's body while the snake-human baby with strong Medusa bloodline is still in the mother's body, so that after the baby is born in the future, the strength will be more powerful, and the potential is enough to allow it to reach the Douzong level. It is the main medicine of the medium-level secret method of nourishing Medusa babies in the Snake Tribe) Seven-grade elixir: It has a certain spirituality and has the ability to condense the spirit of the elixir. When the elixir is formed, extremely terrifying heaven and earth phenomena will appear, attracting the elixir thunder, as if the doomsday is coming. After it is released, if the alchemist is not careful, it will fly away automatically. A pill thunder caused by a seventh-grade low-level elixir is almost equivalent to a blow from an ordinary five-star Douzong strongman, and a pill thunder caused by a seventh-grade high-level elixir is almost equivalent to a blow from an ordinary seven-star Douzong strongman. The seventh-grade peak elixir Hui Ling Dan (the treasure of the Medicine Clan, the king of seventh-grade elixirs. The higher the grade of the elixir, the harder it is to refine, and the seventh-grade elixir is already the best. Hui Ling Dan is also the king of seventh-grade elixirs. Even the Medicine Clan regards it as a treasure, so it is very precious. Usage: Even for the five internal organs People who are seriously injured and dying can be revived) The seventh-level pill, the peak-level elixir, the Life-devouring Pill (the seventh-level peak of the elixir, can forcibly promote a person with a strength of about the Great Fighting Master to the level of Douwang in a very short period of time. However, once this elixir is taken, it can only last for three years. The lifespan is a strange elixir that once shocked the entire Dou Qi Continent) The seventh-grade elixir Soul Protecting Pill (used to protect the soul) The seventh-grade elixir Transformation Pill (can completely separate the monster from the beast body, and then have the long life of the monster and the cultivation talent of human beings) Seventh-grade intermediate elixir Tianhuang Dan (a must-have elixir in the top ten for swallowing strange fire) Seventh-grade low-level elixir Instant Qi Dan (seventh-grade low-level elixir, which can restore some fighting energy in a very short period of time, and even if it is taken by a strong Douzong, it is very effective) Seventh-grade intermediate elixir Yin and Yang Life-Soul Pill (intermediate level of the seventh-grade elixir, which has the effect of melting souls and restoring lives. Its efficacy is similar to that of the Bone-melting Pill, but not as strong as the Bone-melting Pill. Therefore, it can also be used as one of the materials for refining a body that can accommodate souls as recorded in the Burning Jue. The Bone-melting Pill is the second choice. The refining materials include Grimace Flower, Reincarnation Flower, etc. Demonic fruit, etc., Were the elixirs used by Lord Tianhuo when refining the body. Xiao Yan's alchemy ability was limited at that time and he used them to replace the bone-melting and blood-melting elixir) The half-dead person who was lying was immediately revived. It is one of the three materials recorded in the strange fighting qi technique Fenjue for refining a body that can accommodate the soul. There are more than a hundred main materials for refining the material. The main materials include blood elf demon fruit, evergreen spirit vine, snow bone ginseng, etc.) Seven-grade elixir of life-returning pill (as long as it is not If someone has his head cut off directly or his heart is directly shattered, then this elixir can save his life) The seventh-grade elixir Yin Yang Xuanlong Dan (there are two tiny golden dragons in the elixir that are constantly circling and making a faint dragon roar. It has the magical power to shock the soul and can be used by people after taking it. After using it, in the future when you are lucky and seriously injured or your life is on the verge of death, you will be given a chance to stand up after breaking through. The so-called standing up after breaking away is to break the shackles of the past, making people feel like they are transforming. No matter the body, soul or even fighting spirit, they can all go to the next level, and there is a little bit of low. With a certain probability, one can inherit the thin dragon energy to oneself, so that a person can emit the sound wave of dragon roar. The dragon roar is the first-class sound wave in the Dou Qi continent. It is extremely powerful when used with sonic fighting skills, and the deterrence and damage to monsters are stronger than humans, but at the same time, the effect of the medicine that stands up after breaking When moving, people will experience a kind of painful torture that is almost unbearable. When the elixir is refined, a strange phenomenon occurs in the sky. Two dragon souls, one yin and one yang, shoot straight into the sky from the medicine cauldron, entwine with each other, and finally condense into elixir bodies. Refining materials: two sixth-level and above dragon-like magic cores that have been dead for no more than seven days. Etc.) The seventh-grade intermediate elixir Suxindan (taken when refining the elixir, it helps to stabilize the mind, thereby improving the success rate of elixir refining) The seventh-grade high-grade elixir Huo Bodan (eliminates the hidden dangers caused by failure to swallow the strange fire. The prescription is owned by Tang Zhen, the master of the Burning Flame Valley, and the refining materials are There are more than 100 kinds) The seventh-grade peak elixir Xuan Bo Foundation-Building Pill (has a good foundation-building effect, and Dan King Furukawa mentioned this pill when he was in Xuanhuang Fortress) The seventh-grade elixir Tianhun Blood Melting Pill (the elixir is purple-red, has the domineering effect of changing the physique, improving the cultivation talent, and has the power to conquer the sky It can help those extraordinary babies to open up some meridians in the mother's body with the help of pure medicinal power, thereby maximizing their potential. Once the baby is born, it will be twice as easy to practice, and because it is innately nourished, any practice will be easy. Yi Duoduo is the main medicinal introduction to the superior secret method of nourishing Medusa babies in the snake people. There are four main ingredients: Dragon Blood Mushroom, Jade Bone Fruit, Xuantian Ivy, seventh-level or higher magic beast essence and blood, as well as dried spiritual ginseng, demonic grain grass, etc.) Seventh-grade Poison Pill Soul-Enchanting Life-Chasing Pill (those who take this pill will not You will die immediately, but without the antidote within seven days, even a strong Dou Zun will not survive) The seventh-grade elixir Huayuan Guiming Dan (use the energy of transforming heaven and earth as your life span, artificially increase your life span by one hundred years, no matter who you are, in any realm, you can take this elixir twice to extend your life by two hundred years)

If it's still on the shelves at this level, it's a must-order! But why isn't Ling'er the heroine? ? ? 🙂 Is it because Yihuo's body is not soft and waxy enough? ! ! 😜 But if Ling'er is the heroine, the protagonist will practice the Burning Jue and refine it... And commit suicide! ! ! ! ! 😌😏😍

Looks good

Strength is the key to strength, and the foundation is laid without wasting talent. The 17-year-old Dou Master with the divine bloodline really made me laugh. Xiao Yan is already a Dou Emperor at the age of 21. This is because he started retraining at the age of 11. In fact, it only took 10 years to become a Dou Emperor. It's so funny that my brother added settings to the original work. Xiao Yan is a 37-year-old Dou Emperor. Is his foundation more solid than that of the Soul Emperor who has been fighting for thousands of years?

Can I ask, why does it have to be Yun Yun? How can she help the protagonist? Her growth potential is not as good as Zi Yan, Qing Lin, and the Little Medical Fairy. She is too old after all, but her growth potential, to be honest, is really not very high. Do you just want a vase? I feel that Nalan Yanran's growth potential is a little higher than hers. Well, is there a little witch in the outer courtyard of Jialan Academy? I feel that her growth potential is better than that of Yun Yun. Is it because Yun Yun is good-looking and popular? Why, to be honest, there must be many better-looking Dou Po than Yun Yun. How many scenes will Yun Yun have in the later period? When the protagonist faces Dou Sheng and Dou Zun, how much power can she provide? This is a question worth discussing, not to mention that the protagonist will definitely go to the world later.

After playing the second game, I still feel that the first time I fought the Lion King was really bad. It took a lot of effort to fight a sixth-level Lion King with the protagonist who surpassed the strength of the King of Fighters and the Seven-Star Fighter Emperor Cai Die. When the protagonist singled out the 3-star Fighter Emperor Mu Xiao in the Medicine Domain, he was able to fight back and forth. Although he didn't win in the end, now he added a Seven-Star Fighter Emperor and he couldn't beat a lion. If he couldn't beat it, forget it. I don't believe that the protagonist can't run away, so he has to accept the threat of the Lion King to help him make elixirs? ? ? The author also insists that "the protagonist will pay a big price if he really fights for his life" and "the lion king can summon his younger brother". First of all, from the perspective of the protagonist, what reason does he have to stay and fight for his life? Can't you leave if you can't beat it? Could the Lion King keep him? Secondly, in the original work, Xiao Yan didn't summon helpers when he defeated the Lion King. The author Chun Chun forced it to make amends. I know the author wants to trigger the plot, but this kind of unfolding gives people a very bad impression, and it looks very frustrating. You can even beat the Lion King first and then offer a deal, or ask the Lion King not to use a threatening tone, but to ask the protagonist to help him make elixirs in a requesting manner. In any case, this is much better than the author's way of handling it. This paragraph seems to be really convincing 😒😒😒

The protagonist of the Six-Star Fighter fought against the Dou Huang who used fighting skills, and even killed the opponent. I can only say that the author's second set is outrageous. Can the body be so strong and the Stone Clan be destroyed? I don't care what physical fighting skills you have practiced. What Dou Qi Continent plays is energy level crushing. Whoever has a higher level - the higher the energy level - the stronger the output. Just like Gu Yuan, who is still at his peak in the late stage of Nine-Star Dou Sheng, fights against Nihility Swallowing Flame in the early stage of Nine Stars. A difference of two steps at the same level is like an adult beating a child, not to mention the difference between Dou Master and Dou Emperor by 4 steps.

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1. Gu Xun'er! Strategy difficulty 2-5 stars! Return 5 stars! If you start with the Xiao family, the difficulty is 2 stars. All you need to do is rush in front of Xiao Yan and secretly help her warm and nourish her meridians. As long as she takes care of her, she will be completely devoted to you! But first of all, you can't look too ugly, and then it depends on your ability to flirt with girls! As the number one Bai Fumei in Dou Qi Continent, as long as you can tempt her, she has everything from heaven-level martial arts and fighting skills to high-grade elixirs. She can also protect you from wind and rain and block enemies that you can't currently deal with. Although he cannot get the support of the entire ancient clan in the early stage, at least his life will not be in danger. After you show your value in the later stage, you will have the second force in Dou Qi Continent as your backer. If you really can't hold up the wall, Xun'er will control the entire ancient clan when he grows up, and then let you get married, and you can live a comfortable life! But if you are not starting from the Xiao family, the difficulty will be 5 stars! First of all, you still have to do it before Xiao Yan touches her, but because you are not a member of the Xiao family, if you break into Xun'er's room at night, you will probably be suppressed by Ling Ying! In the early stage, your cultivation was definitely not as high as Ling Ying's, so when you were weak, you couldn't get close to Xun'er. If you traveled earlier and had better talent, you would have been stronger than Ling Ying when Xun'er first arrived at the Xiao family. But if a strong man like you suddenly approaches the little princess of the ancient tribe, it is very likely that you will attract a saint fight from the ancient tribe. The risk is simply unbearable, so if you do not have a reasonable identity (such as For example, if the descendants of the Xiao family are close to Xun'er, they can only overwhelm the ancient clan. For example, in this book, the soul clan coerces and induces the ancient clan to marry in order to get in touch with Xun'er. And I don't know what happened in this book. Xun'er was not touched by Xiao Yan when he was a child 🙂 2. Zi Yan! Strategy difficulty 1 star! Return 4 stars! The strategy for Zi Yan is very simple, but you must have the alchemist talent. First, enroll in Canaan College, practice normally and enter the inner courtyard, look for opportunities to meet Zi Yan, and then inadvertently make a few delicious pills, Zi Yan will be attracted to you, and then you only need to play with her and raise her, but it is a bit useless. Zi Yan is the second richest and most beautiful woman in the hidden Dou Qi continent, but there is no reward in the early stage. At most, she can use her treasure hunting talent to help you find heavenly materials and earthly treasures. In the mid-term, after taking Zi Yan to Zhongzhou, you can find Zi Yan's tribe, and then gain the friendship of Donglong Island, and you will have a backer for the Fighting Saint. Then help Zi Yan get the Dragon Phoenix Origin Fruit, and you will get a royal sister with incredible talent! Dragon Phoenix is ​​the Supreme Warcraft with the strongest bloodline in the world, and it is a dimension-reducing blow in the Dou Qi Continent! Divine bloodline is nothing. After helping Zi Yan unify the Ancient Dragon Clan, you will have the entire Ancient Dragon Clan as your backer. When you open the Ancient Emperor's Cave in the later stages, you can also get the help of Zi Yan's father, the strongest man in the Dou Qi Continent, and the Old Dragon Emperor at the peak of the Nine-Star Fighting Saint! 3. Queen Medusa! The strategy difficulty is 2 stars. Return 3 stars. This is simple. If you are weak, you only need to find Qinglian's inner fire one step ahead of her, and have the ability to escape from the snake people. Just use the strange fire to help her evolve, and the evolved little sky-swallowing python will stick to you, and then keep it as a pet by your side, and show off your talents from time to time. If you are strong, break into her bedroom directly, suppress her, and then threaten her with the snake people. Just get the first blood first, then gradually give her some sweetness, and she will fall in love with you. The reward is only herself, you will get a stunning beauty with top talent, and later help her evolve into a nine-color sky-swallowing python, which can help you fight to the end! 4. Little medical fairy! Strategy difficulty 1 star. Return 3 stars. The Little Medical Fairy is the simplest. You only need the strength of the Great Fighter to go to Qingshan Town to meet her, and then go to the cave together to find a chance. Comfort her when she sees the Seven Colored Poison Sutra. Then take good care of her for a while and she will be completely devoted to you. In the mid-term, after helping her deal with the side effects of the poisonous body, she will be able to get a stunning beauty with top talents. 5. Green scales! Strategy difficulty 1 star. Return 3 stars. Qinglin is also simple. If you adopt her when she is down and out, you will get a stunning beauty with top talents. 6. Yun Yun. The strategy is not very difficult and the rewards are extremely low. If you are weak, you cannot get close to her without special circumstances. If you fight against the emperor, her talent, strength, and power will not be of any help to you. I can only get one stunning beauty. I won't go into details about the others~

I have read about a hundred chapters, and now I feel that there are a lot of inexplicable settings, a bit watery, a little bit licky, and I always feel that there is no progress, and the protagonist feels that he has no temper. After that, it is okay, but the more I read in the front, I really feel more and more annoying. The summary feels a bit overdone. I read what others said in other DouPo fanfics about the best DouPo fanfics at the beginning of Shenshu. I can only laugh at this, but I still feel that I can watch it. Except for the protagonist's strength in the front, which is a bit inexplicable and often inconsistent, as long as I can get through the first few dozen chapters, I can still watch the rest of it. It can only be said that others put what can be seen first and then put poison later, but this author puts it first...

After becoming the emperor, I feel like a different writer, watching the thief feel uncomfortable, working as a nanny throughout the whole process, a low-level junior, as long as a woman touches the protagonist's face, the protagonist will only laugh, looking for women everywhere like a stallion, the protagonist used all means to get promoted, but now that he has improved, he becomes a bitch.

Yun Yun😁

You have already become the Dou Emperor and you still go to Lin Dong's side to play a conspiracy for two people. It is really written in a down-to-earth style, and I can't even watch it. No matter how gorgeous the rhetoric you pile up is, it is better for you to end this world as soon as possible and go to the big master

The book Wu Dong is basically nothing interesting. He picks up girls and abducts young girls every day... There is no strong character. 🙂 The description of Tian Xuan's female character is also surprisingly awkward.

Before I met Cai Lin in the early stage, the writing was quite awesome, but the part where I met the purple and gold lion dog was so human-machine-like.

Shennong is here. I have finished reading it. It is a masterpiece that breaks down the rare opinions among fans. Let me briefly talk about the advantages and disadvantages Advantages: 1. The author did not choose the bad system flow and completely copy the original writing method like other fan fiction, but started it from the perspective of being targeted by Hun Xuzi, which is very distinctive 2 The author's later system is very good, there are no holes like other original works, the pig's feet are inexplicably strong, so far, he has written very interesting chaos, the cycle of life and death, etc. 3 The thinking of the pig's feet is more in line with reality, to give two examples, one of the women I have encountered in other fandoms is taken away, like Yafei Those who have no qualifications at all are sent to fight saints, which is a bit contrary to nature. I can't remember the women I met in the early stage of this book. It seems a bit ruthless, but it is obviously the normal thinking of a strong man. Second, the thinking of Pig's Feet has obviously changed in the following. Unlike other fans who have a high level of cultivation, they still have the feeling of a hot-blooded young man Poisonous points: 1 The leapfrog in the early stage is a bit outrageous. Although the reason is explained and it is very reasonable, the fighting master and the emperor are still a bit persuaded to quit 2 The author is not good at writing emotions, especially the Aya Qingzhu part, which is a bit dramatic Although there are some shortcomings, I think this book is still a rare masterpiece of a fan.

The protagonist has a problem. He is too generous and likes to know everything. The alchemist is trying to get people to give him a chance to make an elixir. He has to prepare his own medicinal materials. As a result, the protagonist directly gives the finished elixir and three medicinal materials for nothing. When making deals with others, he directly gives a high price without waiting for the other party's quotation. Even though you are an alchemist, you can't be so squandering. It seems stupid. The same goes for Master Tianhuo. I don't know why he revealed it to Qianbai and Erlao, and even offered to copy a copy of the technique to them? Are all heaven-level fighting skills given away? Although the opponent didn't confiscate it in the end, it felt like the protagonist was like a grudge, apparently giving them a harmless piece of Fallen Heart Flame and making it seem like he was the one taking advantage 😅

This protagonist is more rubbish than Xiao Yan. The divine bloodline only became a master at the age of 17. It is known as laying the foundation. Xiao Yan is 37 years old and has a stronger foundation than the Soul Emperor who has cultivated it for thousands of years. Don't tarnish the divine bloodline.

The protagonist is really awesome. He practiced for two and a half years in the stage of rebuilding fighting spirit in the Yao Clan's Shennong Mountains and was promoted to a fighter. It was really fast. He worked hard to gain the foundation. Thousands of years of accumulation by the Emperor of the Soul God has left him with a weak fighting spirit, but decades of taking anti-inflammatory medicine has given him a solid foundation.

It's really a good book. Those who only know how to criticize should write novels first. If you have 1/3 of this book, you will be considered nb.

Cowardly and incompetent, looking forward and backward, afraid of this and that. It's really disgusting. If you keep doing this, just take it off the shelves. Don't disgust readers.

In fact, it's well written, and there's nothing poisonous about it. Don't listen to the crazy people in the comment area.

Divine bloodline, a 17-year-old great fighting master, hahahahahahahahahaha, euphemistically called laying the foundation, the author might as well remove the divine bloodline, and write him as a protagonist, which is actually more acceptable as trash

It's finally finished. I've been following the updates until now. Let me comment on it. This fan fiction is very well written. It's a lot more enjoyable. It's considered a fairy tale.

The writing is okay, but the protagonist becomes more and more disgusting as he writes 🤔

Where is Shennong? In the comment section, it looks like the answer is solid, right?