
Peerless Tang Sect Order Yu Hao
绝世唐门之秩序雨浩
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 160k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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To be honest, according to the original text of Dou Yi, Qian Renxue still likes Tang San. The mother and daughter almost fell out after Bibi Dong killed Tang San. Dou Yi and Tang San almost killed her many times, but she let Tang San go. Qian Renxue immediately went to Tang San to send information to Tang San after she came back alive.
I was attracted by the name God of Order, and I thought it sounded awesome. Personally, I think the content is quite good. There is no formula line combination of Run Riyue Qiu Meng, and Ye Guyi is relatively novel as the heroine. Moreover, the explanation and arrangement of Qian Renxue's existence are also very reasonable, the writing style is also relatively relaxed, and there are a lot of jokes. The shortcomings are that the main plot is drawn a bit too fast and could be slowed down a bit. If Ye Guyi's life experience is written like this, you can actually guess a bit. Personally, I feel that it can be further foreshadowed.
Opinion building
Like the title, if you have any ideas, feel free to mention it, whether it's the heroine, the plot, anything else, if you have any ideas, just comment here. In terms of plot: Ye Guyi's line is currently the entry point. The early plot will unfold from Ye Guyi's life experience. I want to complete this line, and then there is also a general outline of the main line. Please feel free to read it. The poisonous points can be pointed out, and I will try to modify it as much as possible. As for the heroine: Ye Guyi is used as an entry point, which means that the heroine must not have run away. In addition, since I have decided to write about Qian Renxue, I understand everything, but it is still tentative. Those who are tentatively scheduled to have more roles in the follow-up include Meng Hongchen, Ye Guyi, Wang Qiuer, Gu Yuena (this will come later), Wang Dong (to be honest, I personally dislike it), Xiao Xiao... That's probably it. In addition, you must not keep books, it is very important to read, and there will be updates from time to time. Thank you foster parents for your support!
There is a period of forcible intelligence reduction. The protagonist is now over 20 levels and is protected by Qian Renxue. He even went to Shrek to brag about being from the Spirit Hall. Are you really not afraid that Tang Fozu will forcefully descend to the lower world to give you a mental seal?
I don't understand why you went to Shrek in the name of Wuhun Palace when you were weak. Is it because you are too lucky? Are you gambling on your skills? Do you really think you are invincible?
I'm really convinced. The protagonist has no strength at all, yet he dares to walk in the Douluo Continent in the name of Wuhun Palace. Are you really not afraid of death? At that time, the Three Kingdoms of Douluo Continent and Shrek Academy were the main culprits in destroying the Wuhun Palace. They could not allow the Wuhun Palace to be revitalized. Once the people in the Wuhun Palace were discovered, one could imagine what would happen to them. The sun and the moon would not help the revitalization of the Wuhun Palace, because the sect planned to unify the Douluo ten thousand years ago. As an empire that also planned to unify the Douluo ten thousand years later, do you think the sun and the moon would help the Wuhun Palace? Not to mention the evil soul masters like Sun Moon and the Holy Spirit Sect, once they find out about the people from Wuhun Hall, what will happen...
Leaf bone clothing
Ye Guyi
First of all, since you are soul-piercing, you must first solve your physical problems. You can't do it yourself later, right? When you reach a certain level, just make a new body for yourself. This is best. Secondly, the soul penetrates Huo Yuhao and kills Huo Yuner first. Leave the Duke's Palace again. Understand? How can a proud soul be tainted by that vulgar physical and blood connection?
It looks good. Let me open the champagne first.
Huo Yuhao
Promoting Wuhundian and seeking death in the early stage without cleaning up the dirty water on Wuhundian will only make people think that he is a clown.
Personal suggestion: Wang Dong can stay, just keep his original consciousness
I originally thought it was a Lezi article, but after reading the beginning, I realized that even a Lezi article would not be too bad, so I would like to give a small suggestion (it is just a suggestion and can be adopted as appropriate as long as it does not affect the author's creation). According to the description and performance of the original work, Wang Dong was basically a normal person before the fusion, at least not related to the Tang Guinv who was sutured later. There are also many descriptions in the original work that show that Wang Dong was affected by the consciousness of Tang Wutong controlled by a certain person. I don't know if the author can open a harem, that is to say, if he doesn't intend to accept it, he doesn't want to abuse Wang Dong. After all, he is just a poor person who was manipulated, and was later fused as a sacrifice. Of course, you can do whatever you want with Tang Wutong's precious thing, but it's best to do some killing and heartbreaking!
Qian Renxue
Ye Guyi's second competition has exceeded the age limit...
Qian Renxue, I am really tired of aesthetics. I just fall in love and can't do anything. I have schizophrenia and a big problem with my thinking
Order
About the development of Xu Sanshi's martial spirit
According to the expressive power of the original work, Xu Sanshi's Wuhun Xuanwu bloodline has many bug-level skills after awakening. All skills have evolved, all attributes have been increased, and the bloodline has been suppressed. Even when the Soul Emperor was still the Soul King, he could explode and summon Xuanwu for an instant, and with the evolved Xuanming replacement (transformation) It can be teleported (people pull it over or teleport it by yourself). At least in the early and mid-term, it is an absolute one-for-one god. It is countless times stronger than the so-called top beast spirit of the soft-bone charm rabbit. The soft-bone charm rabbit has an invincible shield or a triggering soul guide on its body, which is basically sent when you enter it. Xuanwu is a real level suppression. Not to mention the heaven-defying divine beast bloodline skill of ring fusion. In the later stage, it is not a problem to combine the nine rings into one to become a ferocious beast-level soul skill. If we put the original work and exclude Huo Gua and Tang Guinv, this one is the real potential stock. Ma Xiaotao, who was forcibly promoted to the ultimate fire by Huo Gua, might not be able to surpass him. The fattening up allowed his martial spirit to fully evolve to the mythical beast Xuanwu. Not to mention the defensive god level, at least he could reach the limit with his martial spirit. Then it can be said that no one in the entire continent can break the defense. After all, the Xuanming Turtle Armor Shield Spirit in Dou Yi has shown absolute dominance. At least in terms of defense, almost no one can break it. If he is defeated, he will basically be broken internally. However, in Dou Er, Xu Sanshi was able to break through. Shield and Guard, coupled with Xuanwu's own super-large tortoise shell, have been developed into a humanoid self-propelled invincible shield. The protagonist may not be able to use it, but the protagonist's younger brother can still use it. After all, the demiplane is not designed to fight against irresistible forces (god-level). Basically, there is no need to reveal it. This is the trump card at the bottom of the box. Otherwise, everyone knows it. Sooner or later, we will find an opportunity to control the protagonist or the protagonist's harem, and perform threats and other operations. According to the expressiveness of summoning Xuanwu according to the original work, it can basically be said that it is a step-by-step god-level. This is only an instant. The evolution of Beibei's Blue Electric Tyrannosaurus into the Holy Dragon of Light cannot compare with the expressiveness of Xu Sanshi's continuous explosions in the first competition. If nothing else, summoning Xuanwu for a period of time should not be a problem when the level is higher. Sooner or later, the protagonist will have to establish a base camp in reality, and then this guy can be thrown into it as a town camp.
I'll just make do with it. It's short, and I don't have any other books to read. You can read it, it's a bit poisonous and intermittent, and the setting is quite new. After reading the first dozen or so pictures, I couldn't stand it anymore and quit. This quitting will last a lifetime 🙂
Do all the novels you open have multiple female protagonists?