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An Wenyi's level is too low, and he has little potential. I feel that this is a full-time expert who thinks that the team is all big experts. It is too cool and not like a grassroots team. Fans should not write like this. Besides, in online games, undercover priests are found. This should be the idea of the alliance in the early stages. By the eighth season, it no longer conforms to the guidelines for the establishment of major challenger teams.
Tell me if there is any
Let's talk briefly. First of all, this is not my first time writing a book. My protagonist is very strong, I admit it. A story cannot be written unless the protagonist is strong. In the final analysis, it still depends on the story itself. The protagonist's strength is top-notch, and he has a title in Russia. He can be roughly equal to the title players in the country except Ye Xiu. Of course, it may happen that there is a gap period when the protagonist enters the professional league, resulting in poor performance for a short period of time after entering the league. If there are really hard mistakes, I will correct them. I don't think it's too much to have a vague plot like the protagonist's fight with Ye Xiu. Ye Xiu didn't have a lot of hand speed, and there were spectators watching, so he left the protagonist with 5% health, which was just right. If Ye Xiu completely tortured the protagonist, then it would be better not to add the setting of three MVPs and four crowns to the protagonist. I am just a writer of novels. I don't know games like you, and I don't know full-time work like the original author. All fan works are based on the original themes. Some people have said that fan creations are basically made to fill regrets. Me too. So I would like to thank any reader who reads this book. Thank you also for your votes, collections, and subscriptions that may be published later. I will also try to update as many as possible. One last thing. I may open a fan value speech at my discretion. Because some comments can really affect your mentality. Finally, thank you all. I hope that I can see the day when this book is completed together with everyone here. I went to code.
The book is pretty good, but the character of the main character's sister is really unlikable, so I might as well just keep lying. 😭
I've signed the contract, but I have to figure out the plot. To be honest, I haven't even prepared an outline for this book yet. The inspiration came simply from chatting with friends. So I have to do it carefully. I have a lot of ideas, but I can't say them out yet. I will try to update as much as possible during the day today. Try to update twice a day.
Can the competition system be changed? In a real professional league, there are no ten games that are compared together. They are all competed separately. In this way, the TV stations can broadcast all the games, and the profits of the clubs and the league can be maximized.
When I saw this introduction, I thought of Aphelios inexplicably. Gun control? Control your ass, I will use whatever my sister sends, can my sister still harm me? 🙂
Happy vulnerability
There are too many players to rotate through. There is a problem with the reasonableness of the lineup. 1 Although Ye Xiu has the best compatibility with Sanren, he needs strong enough opponents to help him increase his proficiency. 2Su Muqiu needs to fight to gain experience. After all, it has been vacant for ten years. 3 Zhang Jiale also needs to play occasionally to maintain his touch. The same goes for the protagonist and Su Mucheng. Team coordination can be increased. 4 Tang Rou, Baozi, Mo Fan. Luo Ji. The four newcomers also need to play against each other to grow. 5 Lao Wei, even though he is too old, he still needs to find his touch. There are six people in the team competition, three in the group competition, and three in the individual competition. You have eleven people, how to rotate is a problem. The professional mix in team competitions needs to be reasonable. If the author calls Fang Rui in, the profession will be reasonable, but twelve people can form two teams. There are too many people.
The setting of the article is quite good, and the content is also good. However, every time I get to the protagonist's sister, I feel a sense of disconnection. The sister is out of tune with the entire book, and there are many typos.
Rhythm master
I think the idea of "Shadow God" is quite interesting. As a coordinator, you must coordinate the output of all teammates. The output rhythm and frequency of each teammate are different. It's like different musical instruments, but the protagonist can perfectly master everyone's rhythm. Playing Rhythm Master must be awesome
Damn, I thought I was a eunuch. I didn't update in the past two days.
With Pastor Zhang Jiale and Pastor Zhang Jiale as reinforcements, Happy's lineup is completely starting from a wealthy team. All-star Zhang Jiale, Yun, protagonist, Su Mucheng, Su Muchiu (to be determined) Ye Xiu. Tang Rou, who is expected to be an all-star, Mo Fan, who has three tricks, uncertain Baozi, and wretched Wei, I wonder if Fang Rui will come? If you come, you can add another All-Star level.
I've looked at a dozen or so, and I'll give it a rough thumbs up I think it's okay overall, pretty good, relatively white, but the problem with the weapons is a bit outrageous, for example, I borrowed a passerby account and it's almost all orange equipment The equipment that ordinary players of Glory upgrade to are usually blue plus purple, with less purple, and even fewer with purple weapons, like Chen Guo, who is pretty good among ordinary players Who can have it if it's basically all orange? The first few guilds affiliated to each team, such as the five masters of Lanxi Pavilion, and Krypton are usually purple and orange, and they may not be level 70 orange, such as the weapon that kills Loulan According to the world view, what is the concept of nine silvers at level 50 when the protagonist starts in Russia? It is probably that in the early stage, it can empty out the inventory of at least one or two teams. Level, this is not an exaggeration, because it is the early stage, and everyone has very few materials. Nine silvers will be equipped for first-class players in the tenth season. It will not be said how high the first gold amount will be in the first season Overall, in addition to what is said above, it is okay so far, and the first one has a brain storage, which is a type that can be seen
The author should consider the issue of professional matching. A team cannot play too many long-range players in team competitions. The priest is remote, Zhang Jiale, Su Muqiu, Su Mucheng, Logic, and Old Wei. The five ranged Ye Xiu half. The lineup is extremely unreasonable. A reasonable team has one attacker, two deputies, one coordinator (usually long-range), and a priest. Add a sixth man. There is too much support in this lineup right now. In the original work, the output was not enough, so Su Mucheng's style of play resulted in more output than before. After all, Sanren does not have a decisive skill. The Exorcist is also a supporting player, so we can't rely solely on Tang Rou for this output, right?
Chapter 17, Mu Qiu was hit, soaked in nutrient solution as a mouse, a vegetative state, and was taken directly to the hospital after being hit Chapter 35, starting to regain consciousness, the protagonist told Lao Ye and Chengzi that the family did not know, Tao Xuan helped to find them for two years Lao Ye and Chengzi were happy, I can understand, after all, Brother Ye is alive But as a reader, I don't know what to say
I have played nearly 10 chapters of Excellent Era.
Happy
Ye Xiu; top all-star. Occupation; individual, equipment-strength occupation (currently) Protagonist; lowest limit of strength all-star, upper limit of top-level all-star. Occupation; Exorcist, character with powerful equipment (currently) Baozi; The lower limit of strength is quasi-professional, and the upper limit is first-class occupation. For example, the electrocardiogram fluctuates greatly. Tang Rou; the lower limit of strength is professional, the upper limit is all-star. Mo Fan; occupation with lower limit of strength, upper limit of top all-star (three axes) Occupation; ninja, equipment online game Su Mucheng; strength all-star occupation; gunner, equipment of ace level (currently) Su Muqiu; lowest limit of strength in online game, upper limit of all-star (depending on the state the author gave him to recover) Overall evaluation of the team, lower limit of strength, strong team (hopeful for playoffs) upper limit championship team
There are too few battle descriptions and many typos.
Why didn't we choose multiple heroines?
How long has it been since there was no update? I keep posting them, and they are all fake chapters.