Onmyoji Starting from Conan

I have read Chapter 13 here, and I will give a brief summary... If any of you here are attracted by the name Conan, those who like to read reasoning content may be disappointed The first case started at the end of Chapter 4, and the end of Chapter 13 has basically closed the case. In just ten chapters, many loopholes in the reasoning text and mistakes that should not be made are exposed 1. Chapter 6, Officer Memu originally said that the DNA test was the male protagonist's, but turned to Chapter 13 and the laboratory department ran over and said no. It is the male protagonist 2. He has always used the words and chat records of the victim's family and friends as irrefutable evidence 3. Regarding the person who was slapped in the face by the protagonist, Kudo Shinichi has always been a facial expression of the "arrogant detective", but the focus is on Regarding the word arrogance, for the first part of the slap in the face, the detective reasoning part is not enough, and the key point is not focused For example, the mushroom-like foam mentioned at the beginning of the autopsy in Chapter 8, then Kudo Shinichi can and should say "Have done an autopsy" "Examination, found the basis, so it is drowning", instead of skipping the middle part, directly saying the autopsy, thinking it was drowning Writing it like this makes the detective very unprofessional and cannot support the image of a slapped character at all 4. All kinds of evidence are listed suddenly and cannot withstand careful study. For example, during the autopsy, there is no mention of how the cigarette scar was found, and it suddenly appeared later Here it is found that the cigarette scar is on the thigh, so the male protagonist must lift the skirt of the corpse. When the police see an outsider doing this, they will inevitably stop it subconsciously. This not only creates conflict but also portrays the character 5. The writing is ethereal, and the content always drifts aside suddenly like chatting. On the contrary, it leads to an unfocused portrayal of the character, a lot of details are missing, and the character cannot be supported As a routine fan fiction, in addition to the routine, there are different people, and the characters are somewhat OOC; it is not exciting enough, the process details are insufficient, and there is a sense of fragmentation...

Is Kudo Shinichi so outrageous? Aren't you afraid of being sued if you accuse someone of being the murderer without enough evidence?

It's time to return to the earth again, back to the mud horse.

An autopsy is still an autopsy on a female deceased. Although there is no dissection, it still needs to be stripped naked for examination. Can this kind of thing be done in public?

Where have you been writing about it these past few years? Can you give me a name? It sounds homophonic. I did a search, but I couldn't find any books.

It's a rubbish plot. After the protagonist was disgusted by someone, he did nothing. Why not just arrange for the winery to give that guy an accident?

Being a dog for the Japanese police wholeheartedly is really cheating, and it is very suitable for those Muyang dogs.

Outrageous, there is no salary for joining the organization? Why join then? The first two scenes with the heroine are also boring and outrageous

I heard that Bai Ye Xing was written about here, so I saved it. I didn't expect you to be a eunuch.

The male protagonist makes requests and questions. They agreed and responded naturally. It's awkward to compete with each other.

Is it just the world of Conan? This is not interesting. Will you consider writing about Zhutian in the future?

Gone? What a pity