You're Already Cybernetic, but You Still Practice Traditional Martial Arts?
都赛博了，还练传统武道？
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- Completed
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- 164k Words
- Genre
- Sci-Fi
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Future World
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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There are mysterious points that are always deliberately suppressed and do not increase. I have to wait until I can't add more points. I also feel that the protagonist has no independent opinions. He will do whatever the people he just met ask him to do. Even if he can immediately improve his strength, he has to interrupt first to help. Also, the protagonist's temper is not very good and he seems a bit irritable. Other than that, he is pretty good.
This introduction smells like imitation. There are really many similar introductions like this. If you read a lot of novels, you can swipe them out on the spot and click on them to tell the exact same story. At least write an introduction to yourself.
It's too fragmented. There are actually gangs in the mecha era. Let's not talk about this. If a gang wants to kill you for a set of shops, you go to your door to kill yourself. Are there no police? No monitoring?
What did the author think, that the main character practiced martial arts and turned himself into a monster? This is not popular now, it looks disgusting.
It takes a long time to fight anything, without any sharpness, and the warrior's killing decisiveness is definitely not there!
Can the golden fingers be seen by the natives?
If my writing skills are not good enough, what should I say about the character of the protagonist? Can I write more decisively or be more cautious about whether it is up or down? Make something special
The setting is good, but the writing feels a bit like a running account.
You can learn from the Astartes next door. They are invincible in the world of 2077, but it is very exciting to watch. It is not boring at all. Basically, it is just killing and killing all the way. The violent terrorist mobile units are all destroyed. Why do you want to deliberately lower the strength of the protagonist.
The author is a newbie, and if there are some shortcomings in his writing, he welcomes criticism.
The strength of the supporting role comes with the protagonist