Game of Thrones: the Iron Throne Starting as a Squire

What I hate the most is using a Chinese name when reading novels with foreign backgrounds.

The Long family was also invaded by outsiders. Strictly speaking, it was founded by rebellion. It can even be compared to the Manchu Qing Dynasty. Just like the Manchu Qing Dynasty was also invaded by outsiders, there are also many old people and young people who miss it. Why do all the comments have to make the protagonist have the identity of the Long family, so that he cannot start his own business, and insists on relying on the identity of a foreigner, and cannot get up after kneeling for a long time?

It's well written. Please give me some support. The main character's name is too inconsistent in Game of Thrones. He could have a Chinese-Western name like Duke Russell.

After reading dozens of chapters, I still don't understand what abilities the protagonist has gained. New people have been written. What abilities do you get from the new people? What do the new people get from you? That's the fucking focus, okay? In the main world of Game of Thrones, the protagonist doesn't even mention what abilities the protagonist gets. It's all up to the readers to guess.

Unless the author is also named Zhou Yu, I can't think of any reason to choose this name. I have never seen works with two names become popular. If you think the name of the plug-in does not match Game of Thrones, why don't you just choose a name that is common to both sides from the beginning, like Ron Rosen or something like that? I don't understand

The protagonist, a time-traveler, has a problem. In the beginning of the fight, he directly loyal to his adoptive father because of his loyalty, which is a bit poisonous. .

To be honest, I don't understand why the protagonist keeps belittling Jorah Mormont. If nothing else, Jorah Mormont is already better than 90% of the nobles in Westeros First of all, you said that Jorah is controlled by the small head and the big head. When you marry your goddess, won't you treat her well? Not to mention that the original Carrot is an example of a small head controlling a big head. He broke the engagement of his ally for the daughter of a small nobleman in the Western Region Secondly, you said that Jorah has no sense of responsibility. Firstly, selling poachers is wrong, but 90% of the nobles in Westeros have done this. It's just that he happened to run into the hands of the stubborn Ed, so he chose to give up his inheritance and run away. This is what he did personally. The Mormont family can avoid punishment by drawing a clear line. If you really say him You say that Jorah is fascinated by beauty, and falls in love with everyone he sees, but he is willing to give up his life for what he loves, and how many people in Westeros can have such perseverance, and he loves even if he can't, and he doesn't force it, he just protects silently, I don't know how much better than those who can't love and engage in conspiracy In the Game of Thrones episode, the Dragon Mother helped the Stark family, but the Stark family broke their oath and refused to go south to fight against Cersei. The Dragon Mother helped Tyrion, but Cersei's actions angered the Dragon Mother and led to the death of Cersei James. Tyrion blamed everything on Dany. Gray Worm and other slaves were liberated by Dany and had their own lives, but in the end they didn't even have the blood to avenge Dany Jon listened to the words of Sansa and the little devil, Sam and others, and killed the people who saved Westeros. In the blink of an eye, he was put on a black robe and kicked out. Then the North, who contributed the least, sat on the Iron Throne, Tyrion became the Duke of the West, Sansa took control of the North and Dany was beaten into a tyrant In terms of integrity, loyalty, and friendship, there are few people who can surpass Jorah. He has fulfilled his responsibilities to his wife, he does not impose on the people he loves but only silently protects them. He owes his family so he exiles himself, but at the same time he does not bring disaster to the family. On the other hand, in the early stage, Sansa betrayed Eddard's plan in order to become the queen. Later, she wanted to reap the benefits and watch the battle between Dany and Cersei. Finally, she brought the North to pick peaches. Tyrion listened to Jaime and Tywin and allowed his newlywed wife to be humiliated by the people in the military camp. He also deceived himself that she was just a whore. Later, in order not to cause too much damage to the Lannister, he often made bad ideas. I hope the author will take a good look at the original work of Game of Thrones and don't take it for granted that a person is qualitative

It is best to limit each world of Zhu Tianwen to less than fifty pictures. Once it is stretched, it is easy to go off topic, especially if one person is divided into ten thousand worlds, and different worlds have to be interspersed back and forth.

Just don't use a Chinese name! It's so weird that Chinese names appear in Western Fantasy

When Chinese names appear in Western Fantasy, it's hard to have the desire to continue reading. 😥

Now I am completely a Game of Thrones fan, and it has something to do with the clone flow, but I can't tell it at all.

I will be here to help with the new Game of Thrones book

This book has a strong sense of contradiction. Game of Thrones is well written. I can't stand the interspersed dialogues. Just write about Game of Thrones. It's fine. You can decide for yourself. Anyway, I think other parts are too inconsistent.

It's strange. Apart from making the Green Seer happy, is there any benefit to having Bran break his leg and have Littlefinger succeed in inciting the wolf-lions to become enemies? Why didn't the protagonist stop it at all?

After subscribing, why do I always keep the original plot to make up the word count? The original plot of Altitude was described, but the plot didn't advance much, so I just copied the original plot! ! !

Is it true that the killing of the direwolf "Lady" cannot be changed? A lot of people must have been dissuaded there. I obviously told the direwolf to protect them when I took over.

Westeros is actually a reference to Britain. The invaders of Angsadunima and the native Celts were killed and almost extinct.

What are you writing about? The preface does not match the postscript, and the sentences are long and messy.

It sucks, it's so ugly. I regretted reading this so much. I felt dizzy after reading less than ten chapters. The writing is too messy

I'm speechless. What did you write? There are three chapters with no actual content at the beginning. It's really too slow to introduce Goldfinger in the fourth chapter. Moreover, the setting of Goldfinger is outrageous. You wrote a pure Game of Thrones fic. Is Goldfinger a fellow traveler? I really don't understand what you think,

It's actually a pretty bad book, but, well, it doesn't have any redeeming qualities. But there are no good books in this field, so he is very popular

The transition was extremely stiff and the feeling of fragmentation was severe.

The main character of the children has two names. The name he is called by others and the name he is called by the third person are two names. Sorry, I didn't make it to the second chapter. I am not worthy of being Shennong, but I really can't stand these three chapters of Baicao.

No. What is this author writing about?

It's too shabby, so I just copied the original plot. The protagonist came, drove such a big thing, and the plot didn't change at all He has invincible power, but he still thinks that he is a weakling, so he just shouldn't take action Using the fact that he is a newcomer to perfunctory the readers, the newcomer can copy the original plot and give it to the readers?

After Chapter 70, Shui's original plot is a bit less About 40% of the original plot, 30% description of the character's appearance and action 10% description of the character's dialogue, the remaining 20% ​​is the description of the plot that is really different from the original work Large sections of character action, expression, appearance description On this page, only the last sentence is useful, it is everywhere in the whole text.

I don't have a clear positioning of my own strength, so the protagonist is just a loser with a golden finger, just like those loser protagonists in Japanese comics. I can only say that if morality is not matched, there will be disaster.

If you don't worry about the male protagonist being called by a Chinese name, forget it. The male protagonist has two names. Others will call him Darren, and then when he becomes the male protagonist, he will be called Zhou Yu. If it's too awkward, can they be unified? Let's just say

What is wrong with writing about Game of Thrones fandom and non-human race? . .

Found a cheating book, Black Blood and Kingship, not bad🤫