Wudong, Return to the Place Where the Dream Began

1 The setting is OK, and the strength of the Domination Realm starts from Novice Village. 2 But the content is not good, there is no difference between being reborn and not being reborn 3 Since the realm of domination after rebirth is still there, then one domination realm is enough, Xiao Yan Muchen, the evil god, just stay there 4 The writing does not have the energy and spirit of the domination realm 5 Still a bad review of the two female protagonists

The most surprising thing is undoubtedly that he still plays house with the strength of the Domination Realm. It would definitely be better if it was written without the realm.

What level does the author set for Ancestral Realm and Dou Di? Quasi-Heaven Supreme or Earth Supreme? I think Quantian Supreme is the most reasonable. Anyway, I don't think Tudou is reliable. Even Dou Di is equal to Supreme and the Ancestral Realm's combat power is about equal to Dou Di.

I don't understand. Now that I'm the master, are we really playing house? Don't you destroy the strange demon emperor first?

It's also time to relive martial arts. Among the Tudou novels, Wu Dong is relatively less popular, especially at the starting point. I am very happy to see fan fiction this year. I hope the author can persevere. I also hope that I can open a book club as soon as possible.

No, according to Lin Dong's character, shouldn't he go to the Great Thousand Worlds to kill the Evil God first? 😰

What author, you didn't get the timeline right. Lin Dong went to Daqian to find Ying Huanhuan shortly after defeating the Strange Demon Emperor, and Xiao Yan stayed in the Dou Po plane for decades after becoming the Dou Emperor. Xiao Yan is fifty or sixty years older than Lin Dong, so you wrote them as the same age. Of course, you can also say that the time flow rate is different between the planes, but it is best to explain it later 🙂

Let me give you an opinion, the protagonist is so powerful that he can actually feel the Dou Qi continent. The combat power can easily collapse if written like this. It is recommended to delete all plots involving high levels and not make the protagonist so strong. If you have the strength to dominate the realm, you can crush the strange demon emperor in the first chapter.

Let's change the outline. Lin Dong is in a sealed state. Only when he encounters items from his youth can he recover part of his power. Otherwise, what you wrote will be too good to dominate.

Don't write novels in the future. I thought it was good at first, but the more I read, the more rubbish I get. I originally came here for the pleasure of mastering the realm of cultivation. I was half-satisfied before, but in the latest chapter, I was bullied by the wheel-turning realm. You are so awesome.

The author updated five chapters at once? Anything happy?

To be honest, if you are afraid that killing the three elders of Yuanmen will affect the subsequent plot, you can completely change the way. Just write that when Lin Dong wanted to kill Yuanzi, he suddenly felt a dangerous signal coming from the long river of time. It seemed that if he killed Yuanzi, the long river of time might collapse and unknown dangers would occur, so he would not dare to take action. But just because you don't kill him, doesn't mean you can't beat him. It's okay to release a Devouring Heavenly Corpse from the Wheel-turning Realm to press him down and beat him. Why write it like this? The strength is inexplicable and can't be used. Then Xiao Diao and Xiao Yan were beaten, which is frustrating to watch.

I am Shennong, let me see if this melon is ripe.

It should be changed to have training memory but the strength is sealed

Well written, give it a vote. Recalling the time I stayed up late to watch martial arts in junior high school, I have endless aftertaste. Please keep writing 🤝

Well written, I like it very much, keep it up

I just read the first chapter. It's okay to retain your memory, but also your strength? It's not me, but if Lin Dong's strength in the Great Overlord was put into the original world, why would he have to go through this as a child? What do you think😅😅😅😅

It is better to write, practice again, break the limit, and transcend the master.

Isn't this just a repeat of the original plot?

They charge money for copying and pasting, so don't look at it!

Even if he was defeated by a bitter trick, he could still be considered successful. It's fun to read the original text at least in some places. There is no reason why you can't do whatever you want in the Wudi novel. I have already read the Wudi novel. I just threw my mind away and just wanted to watch Lin Dong live. If you can't get rid of this involuntary depression later, I will attack you severely

What about the new book? Go without me