Lord of Authority

It's pretty good, but the protagonist really appeared a little late. He only officially appeared in more than 20 chapters and close to chapter 30. I have also read this kind of novel where the protagonist is a big boss but he doesn't know it. The author's writing is quite good so far. A big problem in this kind of novel is how the protagonist realizes his own power, and the things he does have to be bigger and bigger step by step, otherwise it will not be fun. However, if it is always the same type, it is easy to get tired of the aesthetics. There are only 50 chapters so far. Let's see how it develops.

Personally, I feel that the first thirty chapters are well written and the perspective switching is very interesting. I recommend reading it to friends who have the right brainwaves 🙂

Um, how should I put it? A typical novice wants to express a lot, but the writing power is not enough and there are a lot of cumbersome descriptions. It's the same as when I first time. I want to describe the whole scene, but I can't grasp the key points of the description. I still need more practice. If I don't have talent, I can only write more.

Writing skills need to be improved, narrative angle is a mess

Thank you for opening "Supreme Divinity". There are two ways to open this story for you to choose: ①Read sequentially starting from the first chapter: If you do not reject the multi-character and multi-perspective narrative style that has been used in stories such as "A Song of Ice and Fire" and "The Grudge", it is recommended that you choose the ① opening method. In this opening method, the story perspective in the early stage is slightly jumpy and scattered, but all the threads will be tied around Chapter 30. ② Start reading from Chapter 30, and after reading to the latest chapter, read sequentially from Chapter 1: If you prefer a narrative style in which most of the perspectives focus on the protagonist, we recommend you choose this opening method. Since it has just been updated to Chapter 30, if you choose the ② opening method, it is recommended that you stock up on some chapters first. ——Dividing line—— Two opening ways, two story experiences. Wish you a happy meal.

The subject matter is novel, the writing style is acceptable, and the imagination is large. No intellectual or trivial content. Disadvantages: There are too few updates currently, and the first thirty chapters are too long. There is a certain reading threshold (some people may not understand it). Summary: Xiancao (currently) has a reading threshold and currently has few updates.

Dual protagonists??? Group portrait? . . Difficult to comment. After reading more than 20 chapters, the expected protagonist never appeared, and then you told me about the dual protagonists? Maybe it would be better if you reversed the two protagonists. And there is no interaction between the two protagonists? And how can you write such a long setting? You also said that the entire first volume is about setting?? The first three chapters were okay, but the more I read later, the more strange it became. The writing is not bad, but there is no chapter review. The emotional part is long and smelly, but the key points are not written. The writing of each character is okay, but if you want to say that Lin Xueqing is the protagonist, then I can't accept it.

It's a fun, imaginative book that focuses on contrast, but the protagonist is different from other books that focus on contrast. He knows that his world has been modified. It's interesting to see it from different perspectives. The author's handling of this point seems to be quite good so far. Relatively speaking, the portrait description is relatively good. I believe that as the plot develops, as long as the author does not suddenly become wise, the portrait and the main plot will not have any big problems for the time being. The emotional line has not been written yet, so I will not comment. However, in this kind of foundation novel, based on my experience in reading books over the years, it is better not to describe the emotional line too much. This is just my personal opinion. The author should use his own discretion. The interactive rhythm of "Thirty-six" can only be said to be okay. I am very interested. Please read the book for details. Some suggestions: At present, sometimes the content is lagging; although the author has some Riddler attributes, it is innocuous; the battle scene has a weak visual sense (I understand that the protagonist's battle process has been modified, but it has always been a real fighting style) It requires good action description skills and a sense of combat rhythm. Personally, I feel that it would be better if it is as subtle as fantasy, or it may be better with some superpowers); the horror is not strong enough (it is recommended to read Junji Ito comics or Anshibaju). The stories in it can also provide good plot or character inspiration. The above is just one family's opinion and does not require discussion. Finally, this is a good book worth reading. You won't suffer any loss after watching it.

Without bragging, the grass jelly looks good. The author grabbed it and coded it.

It feels like the starting point of 2018. After reading Chapter 30, I don't know who the protagonist is.