Void Wizard: Touch Corpses of Teammates at the Beginning

I chose the wrong mentor, I should have chosen the bloodline system. Or combat type. There are a lot of corpses to touch the bloodline. In the combat department, you can get a lot of combat experience, and you can fight monsters at any time. Now this potion is a waste of time and life, and if you don't accept the mission to fight monsters, what's the use of practicing those potions every day that can't improve your strength?

I suggest the author read it several times after finishing it. I couldn't stand the first chapter. The expression is very unusual. Either the subject that should be there is omitted or other conjunctions are missing. The protagonist's thinking is also very confusing. The content of the thinking does not have a clear and reasonable context (or the writing is not good enough to express it clearly?)

Save the children! The fantasy channel was not good at first, but suddenly it was so volume 😭. The handsome reader helped me a lot to add a follow-up reading. I am even more sad that I didn't recommend it.

I find you very strange. Why do you think you speak strangely?

Let me tell you my feelings. I have read about 10 chapters and it is very difficult to read. Many sentences and paragraphs cannot be read smoothly. Some of them still cannot be understood after reading them two or three times 😥 Then there is the background of the story, which comes out very suddenly.

After reading ten chapters, I can't really read it smoothly. The mixture of written and spoken language is too fragmented, especially the inner drama of the protagonist.

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The first chapter is just the first chapter, 1-2 chapters. . . Talent

I came here from Daily Guide, but the author ran away as soon as I came here.

If you have any questions, you can ask them. The author is not a good reader, so I can't see all the questions in the book. Some places written by a new author are difficult to understand. If you have any questions, you can ask them below and the author will read them at any time. After reading the comments here, everyone is more interested in bloodlines and the like. 14 Likes are more than comments. As for this book, the front is a bit messy, but it's not toxic at the moment. I'm afraid it won't be effective if I change the previous chapters. Qidian's new book recommendations are mainly based on follow-up reading. Please turn to the last page, please🙏! The more you read, the more motivated the author will be!

I don't know why, I feel like the idea is pretty good, but the reading is not smooth at all.

The writing style is really hard to describe in one sentence, defeated ing

Come on, I'm here to help with fantasy novels

What can I say about this book? I feel that the author wants to have a literary flavor in his work after publication. But to be honest, online novels are not suitable for this kind of writing. There is no need to go around and around, it is too tiring. Nowadays, people who read novels can understand the events at a glance. The author is thinking a little too far. Only after the book becomes popular will he be qualified to publish physical books and adapt movies.