Evolving Early, Starting as a Lion Cub

The main character's name is really weird. When I look at it, I feel that he is several generations above me and I'm taking advantage of the readers, right?

Five volumes of eunuchs in a row. . Afraid🙂

In the middle of the night, I remembered the live broadcast of Tiger King, and I was really surprised to see a new book. Must be fully ordered to support 😁

Author, don't blame me for being blunt. You see, among the many books you wrote, only the first one, Tiger King, achieved the best results, and all the other books that followed were fantasy. Haven't you seen that you are not suitable for fantasy themes... I felt that the content of this book was very good until entering the demon world. Originally, I thought you would finish writing the third world and then give it a HE and end it, but I didn't expect you would also write about a fantasy world Think about it, the readers who have been reading your book until now all love reading about animals. There are many fantasy plots that they can't stand, and even those who love fantasy can't stand it. I've discarded the animal literature part of the book. After you have screened the readers, the only ones left are the intersection of animal literature lovers and fantasy lovers. How many can there be? I don't even have to guess. Your book's score must have dropped after you opened fantasy, and maybe it hasn't dropped to the bottom yet. , It will definitely fall by half within half a month The above is a taboo in writing a book about changing partitions midway. You see, your partition is still a science fiction evolutionary mutation. Even if you focus on science fiction, it is better than changing to fantasy Lastly, you are really not good at writing fantasy parts. . I am a ten-year-old Qidian reader. Your writing skills and storylines are probably the same as they were six or seven years ago. Now the fantasy area has been updated for countless generations. If you write like this, you won't be able to get ahead even in the fantasy area. Even if I am also a fan of fantasy, It's hard to read and I plan to abandon the book. I have some suggestions at the moment. Of course, they are just from my perspective. They may not be correct. They are for your reference only: The best strategy is to go back in time and start from the end of the second world while the fantasy has only opened a dozen chapters. Start rewriting, and enter the third world according to the idea of ​​animal novels. You can mix in a little supernatural element but don't be too martial, and don't write for too long. I will finish it after writing another hundred or so chapters. Finally, I will arrange a HE and finish the book smoothly. In the future, we will aim at short and medium-sized animal novels. Work hard, each book has two to three hundred chapters, put it on the shelves early, finish it early, and change a few more animals to attract different readers Zhongce also went back in time to rewrite the third world, adding science fiction elements, which can develop into the infinite god space or the Matrix (this is (a virtual world, the protagonist hopes to break through the world and return to the real earth), and can also develop into cosmic civilization (the third world is the real ancient earth, the protagonist has obtained the immortality gene, and plans to establish a civilized world). In short, you can write anywhere within the science fiction zone. You can make it longer if you want. Depending on your connection level, it is estimated that some readers will stay, but it should be more than half. This can satisfy your long-term stable income plan. After reading this book, I guess it can only be regarded as a trial work. Don't expect any results. If you can't even match the divisions, it will be difficult to find an editor to recommend it. If you write it until you get tired of it, cut it off. I guess there won't be many readers by then. No one will complain, so you will just read the next book. The book should find a better rhythm The above are my sincere words. I caught up with the latest chapter within a week. Seeing the development of this book, I really feel that the future is gloomy. I hope the author will consider it carefully and I hope to see you write more exciting animal articles!

You wrote that the lion is iron and stupid, but the tiger is actually very intelligent. What you did is awesome. Those who didn't know better thought you were writing about tigers. Animals living in groups generally have higher IQs than animals living alone, but you didn't mention it at all, especially the fact that lions have higher IQs than tigers. You didn't show this at all, instead you wrote it backwards. Not to mention free prostitution, I read it on qq. Com, and it was completely fixed. It's just that there aren't as many readers on QQ as QQ, so I posted it on QQ.

According to the way you write it, it is impossible for the lions in your world to live to adulthood. If the male lions are fighting to the death, none of them will escape. They are fighting to the death, right? All of them are stupid, and all of them have some brain problems. However, in real life, which lion can live to adulthood is not a high IQ. All I can say is that I used to write about tigers, and I still have a prejudice against lions. The lion symbolizes courage, but it is not as brave as you.

The author finally writes about this genre again 🤭

Why should the lioness bear the responsibility for the little lion's fault? I ran away when you wrote like this. It's really funny that you don't even have good grades, but you still want to show it off. In your eyes, the little lion is an important subordinate of your protagonist in the future, so he cannot die, right? For no reason, the lioness must be written to death

When will the protagonist become an adult and become a lioness?😍

The first map is the best, both in terms of animal science popularization and game settings are very good (the three disasters give the protagonist the main line, and the map gives the protagonist a way to solve the three disasters) The second map is obviously urgent. No matter whether it is dealing with the previous lions, animal science popularization, or game settings, it has not been written. The plot is more direct than the size (this is a polar bear, but I am stronger than him and I kill it directly, this is a Tyrannosaurus rex, but I am stronger than him and I kill it directly) The third map directly abandons the book.