Honghuang: My Town Yuanzi Is in Charge of the Three Roads

It's a good start, here are some suggestions: 1. Don't touch any golden fingers like system simulators. They shouldn't have been there since the beginning of time. The character of the prehistoric era has been lost 2. Don't lose the characteristics that the prehistoric era should have, and don't lose what should be included in each period, but don't forcefully impose the things that should not be there (someone seems to have seen Xiuxianfang City in Wuyi Mountain during the Conferred Gods Period, and saw it like naming people Trump during the founding of the People's Republic of China) 3. Let's be clear, the main and supporting characters, you wrote about immortals, immortals, not pure people. Human nature can have a fairy spirit. Don't write the supporting characters as if they are villains, it would be better to write Siheyuan if you write them like this.

Great book! It's rare that this isn't the kind of system article that starts with the beginning. You said in the prehistoric period, the higher the chance and understanding, the higher the system will be. I'm just kidding, Pangu will create the system for you.

Although my writing is poor... Although my writing style is poor... Although I am very good in the comment area... But I am shameless (cross out, I love prehistoric literature)! Therefore, I beg all fellow Taoists not to read the book, but to turn to the last page even if you don't read it. Because now is the recommendation period, it is particularly important to follow up on reading, especially Monday and Tuesday, which are directly related to subsequent recommendations! Thank you fellow Taoists for your support! The new book will be updated at 4,000 per day. After the new book exposure period, I promise that it will be released at 10,000 per day, so that fellow Taoists who like this book can read it to their heart's content!

A few treasures are enough, as long as they are enough. The protagonist has treasures wherever he goes. In the end, it seems like a mess. He only appears once and never comes back. It feels like picking up a stone.

Licking a dog is really scary. Originally, Yuan Feng had a Taoist companion, Shi Huang, but I didn't mention it directly. Also, Feng seems to be a male, and Huang is a female.

What kind of bloody love is written in the prehistoric times?

The scene between Yuanfeng and Zhen Yuanzi was really dramatic

In fact, gender is a very vague concept in the prehistoric world. Because many of them are transformed from races that cannot be distinguished by gender. For example, the original form of Patriarch Hongjun is a hermaphrodite cricket. Zhen Atom is just a pile of mud. Sanqing is three lumps of air. So their outward appearance is that he thinks he is a man today. So today he looks like a man. Tomorrow he thinks he is a woman. Then he looks like a woman. The gender can be changed freely, such as the Taoist Cihang. Innate divinity has no gender, gender is acquired.

It's a little bit dense, and it doesn't capture the feeling of the supreme prehistoric world at all. It's just a fantasy covered in the prehistoric skin. There are also quite a few mistakes in some settings and common sense. Overall, it's okay to pass the time, but it can't withstand scrutiny. However, the author has a good attitude, which is an advantage.

Ever since I got the heroine, I immediately didn't want to spend money reading books.

The authentic saint's ginseng fruit tree is the basis of Taoism and instantly becomes nothing.

In the era of ferocious beasts and the Great Tribulation of Longhan, we should practice the divine way! Neither Hongjun nor Sanqing spread immortality, so the protagonist uses the realm of immortality! The realm of immortality is the foundation of immortality. Isn't this digging the roots of Xuanmen's immortality? Not to mention preaching, he actually used Laozi's Tao Te Ching. . . . What the hell? When the protagonist breaks through Da Luo, the future incarnation of Hongjun or Sanqing should kill him in the long run of time. There are also people who think that killing three corpses is to cut off the seven emotions and six desires. The saints are so shameless! Is this cutting off greed, anger, and ignorance, and cutting off the seven emotions and six desires? The so-called killing of three corpses and becoming a saint is just something passed down from later generations. They all say that it should not be passed on lightly, but this kind of statement is rubbish! I think even if you know it, you can't tell it, and you may even slowly forget it. . . . Otherwise, in such a big world, I don't believe that there is no one who doesn't know how to search for souls. From the protagonist to prehistoric times, he transformed in advance. There is a butterfly effect. . . . . . Not to mention already knowing the so-called method of sanctification! What's the point of just following what you remember? The protagonist is directly reduced to a tool man. . . . Not interesting! ! ! !

After looking at the catalog, Kong Xuan Dapeng was instantly uninterested. Did he accept another apprentice as a nanny?

I read a book about eunuchs, relying on the ability of "Book of the Earth" to repair the Western land lines and gain merit from the West...

It's really ridiculous that such a chicken is so anti-theft.

This is a novel written in the style of Long Aotian ten years ago, right?

Recommended novel "I Prove the Heavenly Emperor in All Realms". I, Ying Hao, travel through the heavens with the gate of all realms, gather infinite luck, and use the way of the ultimate emperor to make all realms surrender and prove the supreme emperor of heaven! PS: I am currently writing about The Wilderness, and I may write about Swallowing Starry Sky, Perfect World, Prehistoric World, Under One Person, Douluo Continent, Zhe Tian, ​​Wu Dong Qian Kun, Snow Eagle Lord, Feijian Wenwen, Cangyuan Tu, Eternal Life, Yuan Tianzun, Beyond Time...

It's really a bargain, hundreds of kilometers, hundreds of kilometers

Compared to me, who can't even be considered a provocateur, you're doing quite well. I'm just a part-time coder, so it would be best if I could have a reader. I can write three thousand words a day without me. Just keep your original intention and entertain yourself.

The settings are the same as the second fool. If you are writing about The Great Desolation, you should at least read a few more settings. It's up to you to overturn the previous settings. Can you feel immersive if you start your own business?

I think it's well written, but the eunuch is a bad character.

Eunuch 🤔🤔🤔

What do you want to do if you don't prove Hunyuan? ? ? ? Next to defeat the saint? ? ? ?