Becoming a God Starts from the Black Spirit Stone Kiln

The setting of Goldfinger is good. The writing style is quite good. The whole thing is a brainless, idiot facing difficulties and hardships. With such exaggerated proficiency, wouldn't it be better to practice martial arts first? You can't protect yourself, save others! And take someone to escape? Or the enemy's child again? With basic force, it should be possible to survive. He would sell valuables at a low price in a panic, and he would choose a way home in a panic. An inexplicable fight with a practitioner. A practitioner was punched in the face and ran away in panic just because of a word.

The idea is very good, and I can see that a lot of thought was put into the painting, but it always feels too white. The same plot, if the writing style is better, I might be able to understand it. Now, after reading Chapter 14, I still feel like a child playing house, which is very strange. Either the author is not old, or he simply does not have enough accumulation. The creativity is very good and I feel very thoughtful. It's a pity that I can't read it anymore. I hope the author will work hard to improve his skills in the future.

I came here because of the cool title of your book. Although you don't have to be so brainless, you still need to be happy, right?

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It feels a bit weird. Is cultivating immortality still afraid of government officials?

The cover of the book is the caveman I found somewhere, hahahahaha, it made me laugh to death.

Just from reading the introduction, you can tell that the author is a novice

The protagonist's IQ and EQ are both worrying. The author should expand his knowledge, or read more stories about mortals cultivating immortals, or Han Laomo's Chicken Thief. The protagonist can be flawed, but he cannot be a fool. Author, you can revise the text below. You can make major revisions before posting a v, and then continue writing, correcting all the bad points that book friends complained about. You have potential, don't be afraid, don't give up!

Let go of the person who bought him into a black mine, and then help him raise his daughter. The girl will eventually become a monk or a saint, and then come back to repay her parents. The reason? Well, the girl will sometimes give him an egg when delivering food.