What Do You Mean by Saying They Are a Fake Couple and Clinging to Me and Acting Coquettishly?

If there is no supernatural setting in an urban area, it would be really difficult to set up a silver-haired protagonist.

If the person you have been living with has never had feelings for you, but suddenly one day he wants to form a couple with you and says he wants to have feelings for you, believe me, that person just doesn't want to share the rent 🙂

Why is this book in an urban area? Shouldn't it be in the second dimension? How can there be anyone with silver hair in the city?

Cute pinch😍

The author still needs to practice more, and he will be ready for the next book.

I'm here to give some rough suggestions to the author. I think the problems in this book are basically in the character description and characterization First of all, the character's setting and characteristics are not highlighted The heroine is clearly a cv in the setting. This should be a major feature of the character, but this setting does not appear a few times in the article. The identities of the male and female protagonists as UP protagonists are not mentioned a few times. It feels like a forced setting. The purpose is simply to make it easier for the female protagonist to have a crush on the male protagonist. Even the male protagonist's identity as an art student is basically invisible later on. There is also the part about parents. It is clearly stated in the front that both parents are very busy, so they have no time to spend time with their children. However, after the parents appeared, I could not feel their busyness at all Then the description of the appearance of the characters was basically gone Finally, there are the disappearing supporting characters. Generally speaking, the interaction between the protagonist and the supporting characters of a book is also a very important part. However, soon after the male and female protagonists get together, the male and female protagonist's brothers and best friends disappear. It is as if the world has disappeared. If I had to write a book review, I might not even think of these supporting characters. In short, the most important problems are the characters, the characteristics of the male and female protagonists (such as CV, UP protagonist, etc.), The description of appearance, the busyness of the parents, and the friends of the male and female protagonists. These all take up a lot of space in the early stage, but you can't see them later. (Note: I still have ten chapters left to read when I write this, all the above suggestions do not include the last ten chapters)

Do you believe him or do you believe I am Qin Shihuang?

Come on, good writing 😡

There are two shortcomings, one is that there are too few and the other is that the relationship between the two is too fast compared to the career (station b up). Although I also like to read dog food, I feel that the author can't write it long like this. If the author wants to write longer in the future, and write about the top 100 ups, the daily proportion will be reduced. Of course, if the career line actually has no ultimate goal, then I won't say that. I don't understand how the author intends to balance between the career line and the daily line. But learning dubbing should also be a foreshadowing of a career? Or do you want to open a couple's daily account like other novels? Oh, I still have a question, what is the position of my busty bestie Xu Yueyue, a wingman? Is it also possible to arrange a CP group with a gay friend who likes to play games, and then the gay friend also becomes an up-and-comer at Station B, from playing games alone to playing with Yueyue? The daily and emotional aspects are pretty good. Some of the details of "stickiness and coquettishness" in daily life are pretty good, and we can also see a process of "getting more and more sexy".

The last few chapters 🙂 Why do I feel that the author wants to play a double heroine with a family of three 😏

I don't see how attached the heroine is to the hero. Does she have to wait until the relationship is confirmed before she becomes attached? When will it be confirmed? I'll jump directly to that chapter.

I haven't updated for a day. I miss you.

The writing is good, but the male protagonist is not a cultivator. It makes me feel that the male protagonist is just a big dream, and there is no escape from birth, old age, illness and death.

It feels like the angel next door + Kaguya

Is there a group 😰

Wait, I just realized how many chapters you wrote in one Mid-Autumn Festival? !

It feels like it's just the beginning, why is it over?

The writing is too immature, the plot arrangement is unreasonable, and there are really many typos and incorrect sentences.

It is recommended to highlight the characters more. As of now, the male and female protagonists actually have no characteristics at all, even the silver hair that everyone has been criticizing is no longer visible. Occasionally, the male protagonist's painting ability is only seen in a few chapters, and the female protagonist's dubbing ability can only be seen at the radio station. The description of appearance is almost gone, and even the demeanor is only blushing and shy. The first few dozen chapters are of a certain level, but the rest are hard to describe.