People Are in Ultra, but Carmilla

First and foremost, before writing a novel, you must decide on the character of the protagonist and what he wants to do. The plot should revolve around the protagonist, rather than the protagonist changing with the plot. Creating a good character image is the most important thing. The plot serves this purpose. Once the character image is established, two to three million words is no problem.

Many readers in the book review area want the protagonist to form a CP with Tiga. I would say that it is not suitable for the protagonist to form a CP with Tiga. A pairing between Triga and Tiga is more suitable 🤭 If Carmilla forms a CP with Tiga, wouldn't her character overlap with Carmilla? On the other hand, Triga and Diga are both heartbroken men who had a domestically violent ex-girlfriend, and they are quite a match together. As for the protagonist, you can join forces with Camilla. It doesn't matter whether it's 100% or 100%. What's important is that Teliga and Diga chase their wives at the crematorium 🤭

Protagonist (probably)

I hope the protagonist can have cp with Diga

Carmilla

The biggest problem is that as I write, I forget that the protagonist is a time traveler. This is also the first time I've seen it 😥

Carmilla

The writing is confusing, the whole story is The Riddler, there is no main plot, the protagonist's personality changes all over the place, and you only eat half of it. This is all the free chapters.

Chapter 52: Carmila is still sleepwalking with her eyes closed. Find something to do.

The author's writing is rather confusing and the theme is not clear enough. Who is the protagonist, roughly what kind of personality he prefers, what goals he has, and how to do it. According to the online text, these things should be explained clearly in at least the first ten chapters. As a result, I read Chapter 30 of this article and there are inexplicable dreams, the Riddler of Citram and the like, and some inexplicable (Lori Sui) melancholy of a literary youth. .

Reward the protagonist with three black men and obtain the status: Female Fallen

I feel that the main plot is a bit vague, and I don't understand what the protagonist wants to do. The protagonist has paid so much but received little in return, just like a nanny. I hope it can give the protagonist some clues. After all, it is best if the person who wants to have fun has the ability to overturn the table 😁

In some places, I don't know why. I obviously watched it, but I still can't figure out why the protagonist lost his memory, where he lost his memory, and which part he lost his memory. It's a bit confusing.

The more I watch it, the less I understand the original drama. It is said to be a tribute to Tiga, but it is shot like a Xibei. It has a shape but no spirit. The tribute to Tiga is a dog's belly. Furthermore, putting aside the appearance, Carmilla is just like a lunatic. The setting of Manaka Kengo's guardian smile is even more confusing. I can only say that the person is a good person, but the drama is a bad drama. Maybe the author thinks it's better to write about Carmilla instead of Carmella. After all, there is plot support. Otherwise, I really can't find a reason to write a special fan. In the end, you go for it (I feel emotional, I don't mean to attack you)

I hope the protagonist can have sex with Camilla🤣🤣🤣

If you don't know what to do with the main plot. It is recommended to use Ultraman's most common whitewashing method. Although it is indeed as cliché as it gets, it is better than your 36th chapter and you still don't know what you are doing. If you continue like this, I'm really afraid that you will be like last year's Carmilla. You won't be able to write a follow-up after finishing the main story of Telliga. The simplest thing is to wash your name, then become black again, do evil, get knocked down, and wash your name. The cycle continues. Condensing it again, be Jia Gula.

If Carmilla had a normal personality, she would be a very charming character

The anime image is too ugly, I specially found a good-looking picture

Now that I have seen the Orb chapter, my feeling is that it starts to rush into the plot inexplicably after it is released. Many places are unclear and unclear. For someone like me who has not read the original work and does not know the plot, the plot is very confusing and there is a lot of missing content. I can only say that the customer group is clear, right? And the protagonist feels like a tool man, passively following the original character to push the plot, which makes him feel very bland.

With this update frequency, are you going to switch it off?

Is this going to be ruined?

Alas

Three days of fishing and two days of drying nets, hey, it's not all fun to watch!

Looking forward to what Tiliga's expression will be like when he learns that Geed is the protagonist's son? Will you be heartbroken? 😁

Does he look like a political commissar? I rebelled after a while and defeated the evil Telika

This female Ultraman is also a male transfer 😅

I hope the author can become active🥺🥺

Are there any readers in the comment section who have finished this book?