I'm in Ultraman, but I'm Carmeara

First and foremost, before writing a novel, you must decide on the character of the protagonist and what he wants to do. The plot should revolve around the protagonist, rather than the protagonist changing with the plot. Creating a good character image is the most important thing. The plot serves this purpose. Once the character image is established, two to three million words is no problem.

Many readers in the book review area want the protagonist to form a CP with Tiga. I would say that it is not suitable for the protagonist to form a CP with Tiga. A pairing between Triga and Tiga is more suitable 🤭 If Carmilla forms a CP with Tiga, wouldn't her character overlap with Carmilla? On the other hand, Triga and Diga are both heartbroken men who had a domestically violent ex-girlfriend, and they are quite a match together. As for the protagonist, you can join forces with Camilla. It doesn't matter whether it's 100% or 100%. What's important is that Teliga and Diga chase their wives at the crematorium 🤭

Protagonist (probably)

I hope the protagonist can have cp with Diga

Carmilla

The biggest problem is that as I write, I forget that the protagonist is a time traveler. This is also the first time I've seen it 😥

Carmilla

The writing is confusing, the whole story is The Riddler, there is no main plot, the protagonist's personality changes all over the place, and you only eat half of it. This is all the free chapters.

Chapter 52: Carmila is still sleepwalking with her eyes closed. Find something to do.

The author's writing is rather confusing and the theme is not clear enough. Who is the protagonist, roughly what kind of personality he prefers, what goals he has, and how to do it. According to the online text, these things should be explained clearly in at least the first ten chapters. As a result, I read Chapter 30 of this article and there are inexplicable dreams, the Riddler of Citram and the like, and some inexplicable (Lori Sui) melancholy of a literary youth. .