Everyone Defends the Island, I Can See the Tips and Card Flop Rewards

I read a few chapters and every chapter has some poisonous points. I don't have common sense and I dare to eat eggs without water. Moreover, the main character is written in a very damaging way.

Regardless of the actual rewards, there is nothing to eat or drink, and you have to stay up late, and everyone is dead in two days, and you still have to defend the island. It would be better to just murder... The minimum reward is the minimum energy requirement, and those who have the ability to eat and drink well are reasonable. Using monsters to eliminate players instead of starving to death is better than your setting.

No, this is a bug. Your blue-level shield has been corroded by centipede poison. How can you apply the poison to the broken knife to complete the enchantment? I'm afraid it would be gone if it weren't for the weapons, and whose survival stories have always considered guarding, it's really no problem if I don't eat or drink for several days.

How much money did the previous big brothers get from posting, please introduce the channel to the younger brother.

It is indeed a big problem. First point, the plot is too thin. It sounds like a running account at best. It just keeps recording what monsters I encountered today, killed them, what meat I got, what materials I got, and what rewards I drew from the cards. The second point is that the actual situation is not taken into account. It is really unrealistic to have an empty island with no water or food, and let people wait there to kill monsters once a day, and arrange it in the early morning. Other sky-island novels either have renewable resources on the island that can sustain basic life activities, or there are other ways to obtain resources, such as fishing, or floating treasure chests from the sea. If you really want to increase the difficulty, you can set a time limit, such as the novice period for half a month, during which you will get some random resources. After half a month, you can only rely on yourself. With your current setting, a slightly weaker person may not be able to survive for two days and will starve to death. Otherwise, you can increase the types of materials on the flop and change the flop to treasure chests. The same treasure box can open random things. In this way, the types of materials can not be limited to one type. The third point is that the value of combat power is not clear. The ten attribute points arranged every day only increase combat power, and I don't know what specific effect it adds. After the strength is increased, I don't know how much the strength increases by adding a little bit. After increasing the physique, it is not clear whether the increase is defense power, body recovery ability, or something else. This is a big problem. Readers don't know your combat power system at all. They only know that if you say he can defeat monsters, he must be able to defeat them. This is the most taboo thing about writing novels. Readers and authors are not on the same page, so it is quite undesirable for one person to enjoy himself. Normally, if a novel fails to attract me, I will quit directly and will not make any comments to remind everyone. However, when seeing each monster appearing, the author will attach a picture if he can find a similar picture. It can be seen that this is not a studio novel or an AI novel, so I made some suggestions. Finally, I hope that the author can write better and better, and live up to his own efforts and readers' expectations [Hold fist]

According to author An's setting, half of them will die on the fourth day. There are no supplies on the island or in the sea, and they have to be obtained by killing monsters. However, the difficulty rises sharply from the second day on. On the fourth day, there is no food, no water, and the monsters are very strong. It is estimated that only the protagonist can survive in all mankind.

You can't read this book with a single thought

Well, I feel a little speechless and bored just watching it. The protagonist has so many cheats and almost died several times. I wonder how the others who didn't have any cheats survived?

The more I write, the more retarded I become. It's not even worthy of being read as a cool article.

This setting is outrageous. There is nothing on the island, no food, no drink, no supplies. Everything can only be obtained from monsters in the early morning. Even if the protagonist is still alive, how can the other people who are not dead survive? Everyone else will be dead in less than a week.

Can't you block this kind of thing, or block it?

I was told to quit in the first chapter, because the rooster lays eggs. I don't know if I wrote it like this to be funny or something, but it would give people the impression of being loose and make the readers unable to believe that the subsequent plot can be written well, so they have no idea of ​​​​continuing to read.

😅 Dissuade you from taking the first picture. Your rooster still lays eggs?

The author's common knowledge: 1. You can still train at high intensity without drinking water for three days. 2. Roosters can lay eggs. 3. The length of my mop is 1.5 Meters, which is like a spear. 4. The soul gun can absorb the blood of the spirit body to make it stronger! Spirit! There is blood! 5. Well, I really can't stand it anymore, please add some more Story plot: You can basically skip it. Every day during the day, you practice martial arts, do some trading, choose a monster to kill, and wait for the flop. Just see what you picked and get what the flop turns, and you can go directly to the next chapter! What exactly do you want to write about in this book? Primary school students still pay attention to a central idea when writing essays. You have a golden finger, you are so awesome that you can see through the cards, and then what? Didn't see anything

How can I still be alive and kicking without eating or drinking for two days, and there is nothing on an island? I never consider getting resources from places other than the game. The writing is not even as good as a tomato.

It's no brainer. Let's not talk about the problem of eating and drinking on the island, nor the problem of attribute imbalance. Just guarding a wave every day will make a lot of modern people die of boredom! !

A common problem in this type of novel is the lack of water resources. Taking the protagonist as an example, only one water resource appeared on the nine cards for three days, and only 1/9 had water for three days. The other 8/9 people did not drink water for three days and could only lie down and wait for death on the fourth day. Only the protagonist can live for a month.

Eating one egg every two days will still give you fighting strength, right? ? ?

It's so weird that I can't even watch it without my brain.

Withdrew. I thought it was a good book, but it turned out to be a studio book

Roosters lay eggs. I suggest the author go to elementary school first, oh no, kindergarten, and supplement the basic knowledge before writing.

Chapter 100, died of poison, bid farewell

. . . I just wanted to read it and found a picture of goblin meat changing the water source, but I didn't want to read it at that time. Although goblins are not human, they still have the feeling of eating people 😭

The whole nation is shitting. Is there any fellow Taoist who is interested in this topic?

I can only say that the reminder article is indeed too poisonous. It is better to say that the article where only the protagonist has a golden finger is very poisonous.

After reading a few chapters, I didn't see anything, I thought it was very ordinary.

Stop writing now. Everyone else is basically dead in Chapter 20, so why write anything else?

How can people on this island stay strong all day long without eating? ?