The Most Stubborn Man in the World

The subject matter should be the stick-tongued man The writing is quite good. It was a bit slow at the beginning. The first few chapters are a bit ordinary. The writing is quite good at the end. It allows me to overlook some unreasonableness. Work harder

The author should not forget that the core of this book is whole life! Whether it is the title of this book or the core plot in front of it, the protagonist uses the skills obtained through the lottery to complete his life! Whole life is the core point of attracting readers of this book! You can't just write ordinary ones and put them on variety shows!

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If it is a single female protagonist, write less about the emotional interaction with the female supporting character. When the time comes, if the female partner is not written as a lover, the poisonous point of giving away the daughter will be formed. Writing so many emotional lines in a male channel is almost enough. If you add more emotional lines, if you are not a harem, your performance will plummet.

This post is to thank a book friend called a somewhat conscientious old bookworm. I almost spent the entire early stage of the book on a single computer. Only this book friend would give a few recommendation votes every two days, and this continues to this day. I hesitated for two days whether or not to post it, and where to post it. Then I thought there was nothing to worry about, so I posted this post as a thank you.

After reading Chapter 105, I don't want to watch the plot of the variety show Longing for Life, so I should skip to the next chapter and continue reading 😒

After the first few system skills, the overall feeling to me is that the application of system skills is just a superficial taste. There is no more writing or interesting application methods. At least that's true for most skills. This feeling became more obvious after the system skills began to be wholesaled.

It's about an honest person who systematically joins other people's studios and doesn't get wiped out by others. It's not in line with reality.

It's very plain. What attracts me is the skills of the protagonist in the video. I don't use Douyin, so I haven't heard of many of them. The emotional drama of the protagonist is considered a failure so far. Actually, it doesn't count, because there aren't many scenes, so I suggest you write less emotional scenes in the future. Step by step