In the Myriad Worlds, Starting by Playing Li Xingyun

I have no interest in reading anything that's a hodgepodge, regardless of whether it's well-written or not.

The subject matter is excellent, the writing style can be improved, and the author is certainly good. I saw some readers mention learning from "Five Directions Lolita," which is correct; the loli-style martial arts are written very well. I personally think "The Great Tang Bat Chronicles" is currently at its peak. The fighting style of "Night Rain and Drifting Lanterns" could also be incorporated. I wish the author finds some new contracts (Jing Ke Shou's "The Great Tang" is also quite good).

The pressure on his cultivation level is exhilarating, and then there's the inexplicable sworn brotherhood with Qiao Feng—a move that's sure to deter anyone from pursuing his path.

Emm, it's not that a hodgepodge is bad, but too much of a hodgepodge will inevitably lead to a bunch of flaws. Putting *Wind and Cloud*, *Demi-Gods and Semi-Devils*, the *Condor Trilogy*, and *The Bad Guys* all together in the very first world—this author must be crazy! This is bound to flop. These worlds have completely different styles; forcing them all together like a pot—is the author afraid readers will read their work or what?

Wanwan

When I watched Demi-Gods and Semi-Devils, I didn't understand why martial arts masters couldn't fight as fast as she said. In real life, my hands are faster than my mouth when I fight. Are martial arts masters all in slow motion?

The first eighty-six chapters were alright, but after the extraterrestrial demon appeared in chapter eighty-seven, both the plot and the character development noticeably declined. The protagonist seemed like a cheerful and intelligent character at first, but then he suddenly had to fight a life-or-death battle, and with intense pain at that. What was he doing before?

It's not that you can't write a hodgepodge, but at least maintain a consistent style, right? The styles you've combined are all different, making it increasingly uncomfortable to read. It's like turning the underworld into hell, heaven into paradise, the Heavenly Emperor into God, and heavenly soldiers into angels in China—the styles just feel awkward.

It's really a bit simplistic... The scene where he swears brotherhood with Steve Jobs... I couldn't resist... That's such an old plot... And they're still writing about sworn brotherhood now?

It's pointless. Even with the help of the system and the Northern Darkness Divine Art, it only took half a month to advance a minor realm. And that minor realm advancement was achieved through character cards, not by using the Northern Darkness Divine Art itself. Meanwhile, the female protagonist, Wang Yuyan, also learned the Northern Darkness Divine Art and her strength increased dramatically.