I'm in Netking, and I Have a Tennis Mini-Game

I would like to make a suggestion. On the one hand, you emphasize that the protagonist is still a bad tennis player, and on the other hand, you say that he wins the game with his skills. Don't you think this description is very fragmented and weird? Why not change to the protagonist and win the game with his kendo skills?

Now that you have reached the full level of kendo, what kind of tennis do you play? It's just a weird novel

Isn't it too stupid to write the beginning? The Ice Emperor has reformed, and there are many high-ranking first-year students. It's so stupid to write a second- and third-year student? I've never played tennis before, so the three-dimensional image is like ten o'clock. Your serve shocked the whole audience? You write a lot of fantasy, right? It's so stupid to pretend to be awesome.

It feels like there is too much focus on pretense and neglect of tennis itself.

The first few chapters are too confusing. The protagonist has a cheat, but he hasn't even taken off yet, so he's competing with others? It's like the protagonist has a way to get rich but doesn't have any money yet. How about going to a high-end restaurant and ordering a bottle of Lafite 1982? What a disgusting vulgar routine.

There are some places that are quite toxic at the beginning, and your physical fitness is average, but with daily training, why can you last longer than others? As a person who has just traveled through time, he plays games as soon as he travels through time. After playing, he does physical training. He is even better than others and writes like a robot. Also, there are always people looking up to me from playing games, training, and eating.

To be honest, what the author writes is getting more and more outrageous, and the combat power is exaggerated to the extreme. The average junior high school student is a professional level. Take a look at the professional level written by Echizen at the age of 12. Why, just go to the top ten in the world. There is nothing wrong with at least a professional level to challenge Ishikawa, but everyone who fights Ishikawa It becomes a professional level in one go. You can read the content yourself. If you don't believe me, you will know after reading it. The combat power completely collapses in the later stage. Junior high school students are at a professional level per capita. High school students can't beat anyone except Oni, Byodoin and Ishikawa. They are at a professional level per capita. What other countries are playing?

1. The character dialogue is too easy to guess, and the opponent's words will always be taken away by the protagonist, a typical paper man speaking. The author is weak in writing dialogues. Instead, the whole article is filled with dialogues, which just feels awkward. 2. There are too many characters with too many expressions, and sometimes the writing is very exaggerated. And everyone is training. The world does not revolve around the protagonist. It is impossible for the protagonist to attract everyone's attention no matter what he does. 3. So what if there is a strong newcomer? He was too shocked and it seemed that the strength of the "Ice Emperor" staff was actually low. But it appears again and again that "Hyokuei" is the Kyoto champion. It's so contradictory. Generally speaking, the author's skill design and novel development are quite good, but his hard power is insufficient, his writing skills are not enough, and he still doesn't know how to use strengths and avoid weaknesses.

The first three chapters are a standard brain-dead opening, accurately screening readers!

I don't want to abolish Long Ya, but give him some psychological shadow. This kind of person exists to destroy the sport of tennis. The key is that he himself has no idea of ​​​​controlling his ability, and he can use his ability indiscriminately.

The duel with Captain Fudomine could obviously be won without conceding a ball, so why did he deliberately lose two games and then use his strength to win? Pretending? Wouldn't it be better not to lose a single point? Besides, the main character on the field has such a big heart and so much strength. It's so fucking brainless.

In the first three chapters, give me a bucket of drugs for the whole family.

This is 💩, a high-quality product that you spend money to buy?

It's a bestseller again. Do so many people really like to read this kind of trivial article?

Damn it, it's outrageous that a freshman who has spent more than 100 chapters abuses everyone regardless of whether he is physically mature or not. It's really speechless. No matter how fierce you are, you must abide by some energy conservation. Can a 12-year-old body support such ferocious moves? Yukimura made his body look like this because of over-exploitation of his mental power. You are simply unreasonable. You have just turned 12 and are doing all kinds of awesome things. Can your body withstand it? Although the mental strength and sweet spots created in King of Tennis can enhance strength, which of those powerful players has a body like yours at 12 years old? Can a completely undeveloped body withstand this kind of force? Even if you are a lion, you were very fragile when you were a child. How can a lion under 1 year old hunt a wild boar?

If you want to play in the world of tennis kings, you must first have at least a supreme level of cultivation in the penalty area and be able to easily deal with black holes, otherwise you will not be able to catch your opponent's serve, and you must be ready to intervene in the long stream of time at any time, because your opponent's serve can be sent to the past, future, or even before the Big Bang. Not a single immortal here will be annihilated

I feel like the poison points are a bit dense. I haven't even read a few chapters and the protagonist is surprised at the newcomer Ice King trying to pick up the ball. Then he uses the skill points randomly after getting the skill points. Then the protagonist wins the game 6:0. After training hard, people around him lament that the protagonist is not lucky enough to win. Too outrageous.

Add more details. The novel is all ordered and I am following it every day. Prince of Tennis was my childhood. I loved it especially when I was in elementary school and junior high school. I watched the national competition seven times. The best tutorial starts with breathing techniques, and this one is the second best. In fact, the system settings were not very good at the beginning. As long as a numerical value appeared, there would always be logical imperfections. After all, the original anime must have loopholes. But the good thing is that there are not many systems mentioned later and the author's writing skills are indeed good. Not to mention how good it is, it is useful enough and can be viewed smoothly. In fact, I think the author's writing style is suitable for writing fan fiction. The author should not be too impatient. I am also currently unemployed. If the results of this book are not satisfactory, maybe the next book will change. It's okay to work part-time if that's not possible. Too much pressure will only affect your state and mood. I just don't think about anything right now, just be happy. Come on come on.

Was this written by AI? 6:0 Zero seal. The onlookers on the side said it was luck. Is this really written by an old author?

After reading dozens of chapters, I have completely upgraded and defeated monsters. Compared with the original work, there are many bugs. Many settings are difficult to understand if they are directly modified. The most important thing is that Ju Shui is incomparable.

This book is pretty good, but the main character is like a robot, and the main character is too bland.

Just skipping through the first four or five chapters, it smells like tomato.

It's a good book, but when I saw Chapter 217: Abstaining, I seemed like I couldn't stand it anymore. Isn't competitive sports just for winning? Otherwise, what is the point of pre-match schedule?

One of the few "One with Ryoma", I watched so many "One with Tezuka" and "One with Byodoin" that I almost vomited. I have always wanted to find one with the plot.

To read this book, just ignore the protagonist. As if he does not exist, skip the game about the protagonist.

Finished spreading flowers! I thought I would never see the end in my lifetime

Why do you have to be in the same class as the protagonist? It's really boring to watch.

Refinement

Add a touch of refinement😚

Not to mention, I won't order the eunuch.