Inhuman Evolution Game

My name is Su Ergou, and I am the big yellow dog who is the gatekeeper of Chiyuan Village. I have lived for twenty years and have always done my job faithfully. However, the people in the village said that "a dog can only live for eight years and a chicken can only live for six years." They want to kill me for meat! ...

Can't you just join the official list? You can't do it yourself

I think the problem is that the protagonist is not "high" enough and does not have that sense of being separated from the world. In other words, as a mountain god, he has no divinity.

My name is Shitou, I am a stone, I am in the imperial garden of the harem, and I have sent away 9 queens. Now the tenth queen is very strange. She always hides and sleeps in my body with the eunuchs. Although I don't understand what they are doing, I am shocked because a child actually squeezes out of this queen's body. Later this child became the emperor and often brought palace maids to sleep in my body. Although it was a little noisy, I got used to it, because I would see them off sooner or later.

When I saw this introduction, I thought it was Zhulong Yizuo

There is a problem with the perspective of the author. You write the protagonist too high, with all kinds of praise and praise, overtly and covertly. You write the protagonist in a very convincing way. It is completely a perspective of looking up. But can readers accept a protagonist who always needs to look up? Too tired to watch

What this book says is that any random passerby can act cool in front of the protagonist. This is very depressing, and there is a tendency of over-pretending to slap someone in the face.

To be honest, the beginning gave me a sense of déjà vu from the book "The Candle Dragon Left"

Let's discuss it in the comment area. It was mentioned upstairs that pig's feet are always in a high position and people look up to them. This is okay but it must be perfect. Like a god, people envy and yearn for him. He can be invincible in strength, or he can be low in strength but have a proud mentality. Or drop it from a high position and tear it into pieces for people to watch. Both require high writing skills. Everyone has mentioned Gu Long. His writing style is indeed literary and youthful, but the detailed description of the novel pig's feet may have fallen from a high position, or the human nature is written from the details. The height difference is created between the pitches, widening and deepening the characters. Back to the book, Pig's Knuckle appears in a high profile at the beginning and skips hundreds of years of development (it is understandable that the author wants to avoid clichés). Combined with the writing skills, it is at least semi-invincible in the personal world. However, in the end, it is exhausted and waiting for rescue. Logically, it is other forces/characters who help. Pig's Knuckle considers it an exchange (sometimes it is a favor for a high-ranking powerful person in the extraordinary world to trade fairly with you). As a result, there is neither the chaos and frankness of a demon, nor the agility of a human being, so why is the pig-footed character? How to do it? Why do it? Does he think he is a human being, a monster, or a solitary being? I can feel that the author wanted to discuss it but did not go into it in depth. He only had concepts and it was not satisfying to scratch the surface. Furthermore, I personally feel that skipping the development period is faster but also reduces the interaction with the villagers. This kind of plot between humans and gods, beasts and humans is very suitable for the author's writing style. It can be seen from a few short paragraphs in the article that it is very comfortable. But it's a pity that I didn't write it in order to integrate this game to promote the plot and ensure the progress of the main line. Personal suggestion, the author's writing style is suitable for daily short battles. It would be very comfortable if this book gave up the game setting at the earliest and gradually opened up the world in daily life (light novels/there is a similar museum on the site). Look out for you! Author! Looking forward to seeing you in the next book.

So hollow, so awkward. Isn't it uncomfortable for the author to write? I wanted to cheat the protagonist, but I was also afraid that the protagonist would cheat too hard, so I kept writing with restraint. Author, you haven't let go at all, your writing is nondescript. It should have written about the majesty and strength of the big demon, but it was written like a docile sheep. It has no strength but no expressiveness at all. It gives people the impression that it is like a child playing with a big knife, which is not pleasing to the eye.

The concept of the work is good, is it a bit borrowed from "The Candle Dragon Left to the Left"? However, the writing style is a little immature, and sometimes it seems that the preface does not match the follow-up. Could it be that it only has its style but not its spirit?

What I wrote in the front is okay, but I am getting more and more profitable later on. After all, I am the god of the mountain, so I can't do it alone. It's not interesting.

There are pros and cons to adding it or not, it doesn't matter how the author writes it. But if the author changes his outline because of readers' requests, that's too much. . . And I read around the comments, and at most one or two readers discussed this matter 😥. It would be pointless to keep revising and re-editing.

The candle dragon is on the left, but for some reason it cannot go behind.

I seem to have read this book before. Someone wanted to arrest him and then he went out. It was a long time ago. I wonder if it was written by him. I have re-opened a book.

Why does this introduction look so similar to the book "The Candle Dragon Left"?

Generally speaking, the setting is good, and the world view structure is also quite attractive, but I don't like the writing style, and the plot is too weak. The most poisonous point is the characterization. The protagonist is not standing up, is too high, and even if it is high, there is no explanation. Also, the characters who appear are very stereotyped, and they are all for revenge, which is too flat.

After watching it for a while, I feel that the protagonist is really fishing for money. Can't you not contact the official and have nothing to do with humans?

To be honest, it was baffling to see

By the way, why can't the game be called Three Thousand Worlds or Cave Secret Realm? Also, why does the level of a copy have to be written in letters? Can't we use the expressions of A, B, B, D and Bagua to express things like Qian Kan Gen Zhen Xun Li Kun? It doesn't feel cool at all

New vest? Someone wrote about tiger before

The writing is good, it feels a bit like Moby Dick, the powerful creatures are part of nature, and the fairy smell that the immortal species doesn't care about is just because the protagonist is a bit weak.

It seems confusing. Can't you just talk about some setting issues? For example, what are the players and what are the specific forces that hunt them? Are all players monsters? Wait, forget it, I'm tired of watching it

It feels like a novel I peeked into when I was reading it in middle school

It's the same type of story as Paranormal Dawn

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