Returning to the Modern World with the Immortal Sect Master

My sister can't stand it anymore. Does the author have a sister? Without a sister, would there be no family? Invincible in strength, my sister was harassed and threatened and still worried about this and that. . . . Abandon books. A very good book, it feels like eating cake and taking a bite of shit

I feel that when I was in the Immortal Sect, the sect leader also liked the male protagonist, but at that time, it was the kind of love that was related to raising children. Now it has become the kind of love that is related to the relationship between men and women. Motherly love has deteriorated.

To be honest, it is indeed a good idea to search all over the world. There are many places and people, which are naturally good materials. As long as the author has broad knowledge and accumulation, he will be able to write well. As for money, use immortality items to achieve wealth and freedom. No one likes to read part-time job diaries in romance novels.

It's so sweet that it's too sweet to kill anyone 😚

When your home was forcibly broken into, why did you feel uncomfortable and had to go and ask for an explanation, but when you got there, you just revealed the matter with just a few words? You are the author of a spiritual recovery article. Besides, the heroine is the head of a sect and has no aura of superiority. She is almost like a silly and sweet heroine. And when it comes to buying clothes, your storage ring is just a decoration? Can I take things out but not put clothes in? There are so many bad points that I can't stand it anymore. It's just a waste of time and money.

How can I put it this way? The story is good, but the character of the male protagonist is really bad.

1. It feels like the heroine accepts the new world a little too quickly. Although I am a person who has lived for thousands of years, I may have a strong receptive ability, but I can accept jeans when I first buy clothes and the male protagonist pouring water to wash her feet (in ancient times, it seems that women's feet cannot be shown to others casually. I don't know how the fairy world is set in this book, but I guess it is a bit conservative); Moreover, things like cars are accepted too quickly. The protagonist is not taught many things. (How to sit in a taxi, bus, etc.) The heroine does not play with mobile phones and does not learn on her own. Can you add a patch? The protagonist has already talked about many mortal things in the fairy world, including cars and the like, so it is easier for the heroine to accept. This setting only mentions TV, but you can also mention cars and the like, so that the heroine can quickly integrate into the world without using electronic products or reading books; Also, if the protagonist really gets together with the heroine in the future, can the heroine not wear too revealing clothes (outside the house)? Firstly, there will be a strong sense of separation; secondly, it does not look good for pure love. 2. The protagonist's attitude towards Maomao is very strange At first, the protagonist lost his temper towards Maomao. I can understand that the protagonist cares about the heroine, and the news brought by Maomao promoted the heroine's departure, so the protagonist was angry. But I felt that the part where the protagonist was angry was not well written. It seemed a bit inconsistent with the character. He shouldn't be so angry at Maomao. This anger continues later on, causing Mao Mao to have a kind of fear of the male protagonist now (maybe it is also due to his personality, he does not want to take advantage of the protagonist __ use the heater), but it is still a bit pitiful for Mao Mao to sleep in the green belt in the cold weather. I hope it can improve in the future. 3. The location of the cat's home seems a bit out of place, and the sense of mystery created in the home is not enough. 4. Is this monster bureau a foreshadowing for the rationalization of spiritual energy recovery? There are many unreasonable things about this bureau: are there no weapons on the body to arrest monsters? A tranquilizer gun will do, or is there no powerful monster in this world? The protagonist is following the protagonist on the mountain in front, but the protagonist cannot find it, and there are cats and cats in the green belt and corridors behind who are watching the protagonist, and the protagonist discovers it. Although the difficulty coefficient is different, I think the so-called physical training of the male protagonist still needs to be explained clearly. 5. I think the emotional progress of the male and female protagonists is well written (although I don't understand it either), the mental changes of both parties are described very delicately, the daily interactions are sweet, and the female protagonist's small grievances are vividly written on the page. I would like to make a small suggestion. You can write more intimate actions such as kissing and hugging between the male and female protagonists slowly. Don't be too hasty. In many novels, holding hands, hugging, kissing and sleeping are all written in one go. If you cut it short and turn it into a pornographic book, it won't have that sweet but greasy feeling. You can start from daily life, such as helping the heroine to hold an umbrella when she is caught in the rain, helping to warm her feet when her feet are cold, helping to pour water to take care of her when she is sick, etc. I have never had a girlfriend, so I don't understand very well. But the bickering between the male and female protagonists and the petty temper of the female protagonist are quite interesting. In short, gkd, come on, the author 🙂

I don't understand that many of today's novels suggest that loving small animals represents love. Is it because Western brainwashing has been too successful? But in fact, many people who like cats and dogs love cats and dogs more than they love their parents and family. It is difficult to understand what kind of love this love is.

Why does the author make the protagonist so useless? This is not Buddhist but fw 😭

It seems strange to me how the male protagonist feels when he sees the sect leader eating steamed buns. A woman you have never met in the fairy world, and she is not your girlfriend, just eats steamed buns. How can you empathize with her? Would you still feel this way when you see your brother eating steamed buns?