Red Mansion Jade Lin

Although it is not easy to understand writing, you can't forcefully feed poison. Chapter 18 is poisonous! I just hope the author can be more rigorous in his writing in the future. Historical writing is different from urban writing. You can do whatever you want in urban writing, but ancient writing has requirements, especially when writing about Red Mansions. It does not require antiques but must follow the rules of ancient society.

The plot is okay and the writing is good, but the author made a few mistakes. In ancient times, the word "filial piety" can only be used for one's own descendants, and it is considered disrespectful to the descendants. In ancient times, branch clans could not intervene in the main courtyard unless requested by the master, let alone make money.

The introduction said to rub an elixir, I thought the protagonist was a weirdo, but it turned out to be the same as Zhongjun.

To be honest, many people say that The Red Mansion and Ning Rong's Second Mansion are dirty, but many authors' writing is not much better than the original work. It is said that Ningguofu sleeps with his daughter-in-law and raises his brother-in-law, but many authors include Wang Xifeng, Qin Keqing, Youshi, and Sanchun in their works. In this way, Ningguofu is cleaner than the same author. There are also people who look down on Baoyu. Although Baoyu is not good in all ways, one thing that makes Baoyu better than us now is that he can take women seriously and take their demands seriously instead of treating them as objects. Watching The Red Mansion feels pity for the fate of the girls in it, but the sad thing is that many authors and readers only remember them as beautiful. They read the fanfic just to let the protagonist adopt them to satisfy their own lust. When I first read the Red Mansion fanfic, I thought that having an author would make them have no regrets, but you might think that starting a harem would make them have no regrets. I don't think there's anything wrong with original harem stories, but I'm disgusted by fan harems. Don't we like these characters because their distinctive personalities bring us good memories? As a result, in order to force them into a harem, their characters were distorted. Apart from their faces and figures, they were just like objects, and their childhood memories were erased.

It is difficult for Red Mansion to break through now. Should the Jia family be protected? Should the feudal dynasty be preserved? Two major problems are difficult to deal with.

Chapters 47-48 are a place where you can make a big turn. I think the author is following the same old path. In my personal opinion, the protagonist can set a higher tone on inheriting the Ning Kingdom in Chapter 47: for example, telling Jia Mu that he is not a person to be trifled with. If Jia Zhen and Jia Rong mess with him, they will inevitably take double revenge or double their revenge. For example, force Jia Zhen and Jia Rong's wives to be maids or take them back. The concubine, anyway, was just to scare Jia Mu, knowing that this matter could not be done, and then backhandedly mentioned that she wanted to audit the accounts of the Ningguo Mansion, take away the financial power first, and deal with any problems together, fearing that the Jia family would become the protagonist later. If these problems are written later, it will feel like the protagonist is not like a modern time traveler. Economic responsibility audits must be done before taking over, which should be known to modern people.

The inheritance of titles is really outrageous. Even if the author spent a few minutes on Baidu, there would not be such a big bug. Jia Zhen and Jia She are different in seniority, not in title. The first and third grades are the inheritance of titles. Both are super-grades. After Jia Zhen's third grade has been passed on for two more generations, there will be no chance of passing it on. It will be a ninth-grade official. To do this, the Wuxun Group will have to rebel.

There are still considerable risks in using the former hostess to manage the family. It is best for the protagonist to find a wife now.

I don't care if it's reasonable or not, I just care that this book is not like other fics. For the sake of the girls in it, you can endure the bullying of Rongfu and Ningguo. It's especially cool that the protagonist beat the old immortal in Rongguo to almost death, and the Xue family, although the protagonist didn't do it, but this is better. Every fic will whitewash Xue Pan! Just for the gloomy Xue Baochai and Xue Dalian! Really disgusting! But I don't know if the protagonist of this book wants to kill Xue Pan, so that Xue's big face can be better controlled, so that she can only be obedient if she has no backing. I really can't understand that a modern time traveler and an ancient boudoir woman have something in common! As long as you serve the protagonist well, don't look for trouble all day long, just cry and complain about nothing, just like a resentful woman!

After reading Chapter 36, I can't stand it. It's so simple to exile Jia Zhen. There is no other procedure. This is how the ancient court did things. It is still a trivial matter like this that can handle a third-rank official. I am a noble and an official. I will definitely contact the nobles and officials to insist that other princes sit on the throne. No one's butt is clean. If something goes wrong, he will have to lose power before he can be dealt with.

The donkey's lips are not the same as the horse's, and even the most serious thing can be done to the emperor. He still seizes the title. The emperor is not dead. Wang Ziteng. Yuanchun is not dead. Seize the hammer. Before writing, could you read the original work or understand the cause and effect? ​​The Jia family was settled by the Qiu Hou because they were on the wrong team. The situation was set up after occupying the house. Not to mention the powerful people in feudal society. What can they do now? What is written should be the same as daddy.

One chapter a day, tsk tsk tsk, you rub the elixir in return

The first chapter is poisonous. Anyone who studies medicine knows that the doctor cannot come to your doorstep.

Suddenly, you discovered that when you entered Ningguo Mansion, there was nothing in the warehouse and Jia Zhenjiarong's room? He only took things from other people's rooms and bodies, and there was nothing in the ancestral hall?

This update rhythm basically declares the eunuch

I read this book on QQ. The writing is quite good, but a White Lotus Sect's counter-rebellion wastes too much ink. Who can read it? The author has to figure out what he is reading about Red Mansion. There is no problem with the rest.

Chengjue also sells aphrodisiacs, which only cost ten taels. He has no money to treat his illness. Also, Dongfu stole money, why not take the opportunity to break off the relationship? Idiot

The plot is mediocre and not engaging.

Fake corpse? Or leftover inventory?

Just one in nearly 3 months? Did you just come back from time travel?

Written by a blind chicken, Goldfinger is good, but very childish and illogical.

I read this book many times when I saw it, thinking it was Xuanhu Red Mansions. I browsed through it today and found that it is okay. It is not that at all. I would like to give a suggestion and change the title of the book. The results will definitely be much better.