Starting with the Succubus Nun, I Can Edit the Character Entries.

This kind of novel should be severely criticized. I will criticize as much as I write.

I thought the nun succubus was a succubus who could control her desires, but now she's just a succubus immune to the Holy Light. It's boring! All women have been trained, and they will do that at every turn (omitting ten thousand words). They are not succubi, but they are more exaggerated than succubi elsewhere!

You have the idea, but if you don't even dare to write on the sidelines of this kind of subject, can you achieve results?

When I read the title, I thought the main character was a succubus nun. It was so exciting that I had to watch it. But when I took a closer look, I realized that it was not the case. It immediately became boring.

Succubus

Why aren't your equipment used by Rosalin? Don't you have a sword? Why keep it for yourself?

The biggest problem is writing the data stream, but the data is messy without going through the settings of the brain. The growth value of the character has nothing to do with the actual attributes. Low-level equipment is always "immune to holy light", "immune to psychic magic" and "80% damage reduction of the fire element". With your settings, do magicians in this world still have a meaning to exist? They all went to become physical warriors

Every time I thought the protagonist was a succubus nun, I clicked in. I thought I could see the ts succubus being molested by villagers in the church, struggling to suppress her nature and failing. When I saw the introduction, I realized it wasn't…

The author of the subsequent plot obviously intended to reduce the sense of reality of the plot, and this is right. I even suggest that the author simply doesn't write a realistic plot. It's no problem. Readers won't care why the protagonist can play games 24 hours a day. Even insisting that you just let the protagonist buy some kind of game cabin and just put in a random reason, the readers will not care about it at all. Downplaying the realistic plot is the right choice, after all, it is not an urban novel. In the past, when online game novels were popular, I had seen too many urban novels written out of hand because they could not grasp the balance between games and reality.

No, can the protagonist speak properly and not use adjectives randomly? Is it just to reduce the number of words or do you think it is more immersive to write like this?                                                                                                                  The protagonist said calmly and calmly, I 🥚 Oh, it's really against the peace, isn't it? It's too abrupt.

It's so awkward. You could say it's a simple game. The people recruited have self-aware background stories. They're obviously not AI people. You could say it's an adventure story in various worlds. The protagonist written by the author is just a game. It's really awkward.

Alice?

Edith

Single heroine or eunuch story? Don't write a bunch of female characters and end up still being eunuchs at the end of the book

My big head says the writing is poor, don't read it, my little head says no

So many people like electronic castration in Qidian, right? 🥵 My opinion is to buy some medicine, prepare some lubricants, and go find a manly friend.

Why is the protagonist always being exploited? It feels like the protagonist has no special characteristics other than his uniqueness.

What does the real Ke system look like? The genre I understand is "Rat in the Wall". There are no monsters or messy settings. The main focus is to constantly provoke human beings' psychological and ethical bottom lines, thereby generating surreal thinking. The so-called "grams" in today's novels are at best fantasy disguised as monsters.

The idea is cool, but the writing is too ordinary. The succubus nun is exciting just thinking about it. How twisted. A holy nun who was raised by the church has been tortured by her own blood all year round, but she still decides to serve the God of Light in chastity all her life. She meets the male protagonist and falls in love at first sight. After constant adventures and experiences, the nun has been torn back and forth between physical and psychological, and finally in a certain In one chapter, the author shows his sincerity to the male protagonist. The author doesn't need to point it out. We all can figure it out ourselves. As a result, we just wrote a lustful girl who was given free at the beginning. It is done chapter by chapter, but it is not a pornographic novel. The content is very monotonous. I can just write about this character. As long as I stick to it, there will be a bunch of readers calling me my wife. Now I have written so many chapters without making any impression. . Can see. . . Electronic mustard bar

This book should be renamed to I Use JJ to Conquer (Save) the World🙂🙂🙂

Basically every chapter now consists of nothing but hand-to-hand fights... The plot advances less and less, and the content becomes more and more excessive.

Is there a group? The new book is gone...

First of all, the book club for this book is still there, but it doesn't have much content. It's just a group of people discussing playing games, and the author basically doesn't speak. The second book, The Witch, has already exploded, but the group is still there. 😁😁

There are too many pornographic contents, and the more you read, the more boring it becomes.

It looks good, I love watching it, my brothers said it is good after watching it

Does the author have a group? Open a new book and give it a kick

Are you going to open a new book or a new account, or modify and unblock it?

What is the group number? The new book details page cannot be opened.

Is there any group? Looking for a group?

I have been reading on QQ and reading this novel. I have also subscribed. If I don't subscribe, I can't read it. Do I have to subscribe here again before I can join the QQ group? Can it be improved?