The Game Has Come True, I Have Become a Fairy in Reality

The protagonist is a program with infinite trial and error. If he dies, the parallel world line will die. Only by clearing the dungeon level can he continue. I am ready to abandon this book because the author's writing skills are limited. I don't have to think about it to know that the protagonist will try and make mistakes all the way to successfully pass the level. It is very boring to play dungeons to upgrade. It is mentioned that the first enemy you kill in each dungeon will give you experience. The second time you kill the enemy, there will be no experience. However, the protagonist can be resurrected infinitely in the dungeon, and you can also keep improving your skills until you kill the enemy. It is a very boring setting. If I was stuck with this bug, I would just activate a new skill and continue to use it after I have fully trained one skill. The protagonist system is like a multiverse resurrection machine, connecting to the upgrade of world activities thousands of years ago. It controls the person of thousands of years ago to go to the dungeon to get stuck in the dungeon and practice skill upgrades. It is so monotonous that it is unbearable. The protagonist's system contains various elements such as time, space, cause and effect, fate, reincarnation, etc. I don't know how the author can complete it. How did this system come about? Can you explain it after reading it?

I understand, the people around me are all reincarnations of people related to the protagonist in the game...

The plot structure of this book is good, but there is too much nonsense. A book without a sense of rhythm will never be successful.

It is possible for ordinary people to become idiots, but it is impossible for those who are cultivators of immortality. Generally, idiots have cognitive problems. If there are cognitive problems with cultivating immortals, can they still cultivate immortality?

Luo Liba Suo's "Zhen Shui" has written a lot of irrelevant plots

It's a bit interesting, but this kind of book is afraid that the speed will be too high to stop the car, and the combat power will be directly reduced.

I read the Dharmakaya written in Chapter 322, the Supreme Purity and Many Treasures Heavenly Lord. If I remember correctly, they should be the Shangqing Lingbao Tianzun, Yuqing Yuanshi Tianzun, and Taiqing Daode Tianzun. There may be the title of Duobao Tianzun, but Shangqing Lingbao Tianzun will not change. I hope the author can change it

There are too many sensational plots in the early stage. There is really no need to sensationalize this when taking an exam 😅

Before Chapter 160, Shanhaisi set up all kinds of high-ranking ones, the entire Yilong Group, mysterious, and one or two people from a bunch of people (about 100), carefully selected. 162 told me directly, "Taoist students from the Taoist Academy will not be able to graduate without joining Shanhaisi?" The selection of the national elite team will directly become the CET-4 and CET-6 exams? Imagine a national elite security team, the kind of giants. And now, as long as the Qingbei people have resumed diplomatic relations with the graduates (I am taking into account the setting of the "four majors" in the book), they have all done internships there? They are also issued standard weapons (parchments). This team may not be able to catch up with the standing army🙄, how can it be considered elite?

The author becomes less and less careful as he goes on.

After reading Chapter 128, I found that the author likes to add drama to the supporting characters, but the sense of contradiction is too great, and it feels like there is no priority 🙂 A small suggestion😁

There is something wrong with the setting of the golden elixir pattern. The Tao pattern can only be carved using the Taoist artistic conception, but a genius like Yi Hanqing can only express three Taoist artistic conceptions, let alone others. One is considered good. But as geniuses from various sects, and people who have taken the level-one True Immortal Trial, they are destined to step into the Golden Elixir soon. Should they only be given a Humane Golden Elixir or an Authentic Golden Elixir? Then why do they follow the protagonist? I think it would be better to have another way of engraving.

It's similar to Twelve Wings' "I just want to play the game with peace of mind," but the combat power increased too quickly and the plug-ins were used too much. As a result, the author later forgot about the protagonist's combat power level, and some of it was impossible to recover.

Just skipping through these chapters won't hurt, right? How long has it been since you broke through to the golden elixir?

You, you, you... The author, you don't want to play a trick on the cause. Why do I look more and more like each other?

This is too short, and it can obviously still be written. If I don't have a period of becoming a god and fighting the villain immortal, my calculations will be really ruthless. If I don't kill them all, I won't be relieved.

Not bad, Xiao Shuangwen, but the cultivation is too slow. . The pressure is too strong😡😡

Currently I have read Chapter 274 and have some opinions Update: I am not following the update so I don't know Advantages: The plot is good, but a bit messy. ①Zhao Lu (the son of Bian Shou's nanny) joined the Black Lotus Sect. The family scene after the mother's car accident really impressed me (maybe I'm more afraid of the family knife?). I think this plot is good and necessary. The warmth of a book is reflected in the emotions displayed in these plots. ②The protagonist teacher Chen Fugui stepped forward to show this character. ③The plot in Juxian Bell is reversed. Disadvantages: Personally, I think some things are not explained clearly and some data are wrong, as follows: ①The protagonist's Tiandao first-level foundation building will be compared with other people's foundation building cultivation after two ten-fold increase in talent and magical power. ② Comparison of the protagonist's super-grade 12-grain golden elixir and the normal 1-9-grain golden elixir, as well as the normal Nascent Soul cultivation level. ③ Where is the protagonist's super golden elixir? ④ In Chapter 270, Lu Chen, the super-grade golden elixir, faced the sixth-level avatar of the Nascent Soul, the leader of the Black Lotus Sect. What strength gap did the protagonist's super-grade 12th-grade golden elixir make up for with this Nascent Soul? Data error: ⑤ Didn't the protagonist teacher Chen Fugui become a blessing in disguise and have already built his foundation for five phases? Later, in the description of Chen Fugui's psychology, why is it said that Chen Fugui was a blessing in disguise and has built his foundation for three phases, but he cannot see through the protagonist's cultivation? ⑥Jiang Dongliu, who has reached the golden elixir in more than 190 chapters, comes to the protagonist to discuss, saying that he does not want to bully the small. In chapter 269, Jiang Dongliu comes to show off his golden elixir. In chapter 271, Jiang Dongliu talks to his aunt Jiang Qing and also says that he has now entered the golden elixir? ⑦The timeline of the True Immortal Trial, which is the first time the Juxian Bell appears, is too confusing. The time flow ratios in the real world, the game world, and the Juxian Bell are too confusing. One time in the Juxian Bell, it is three years, and the other is two and a half years. ⑧ There are many typos, and some places have not been corrected yet. ⑨The sentences are not fluent, the narrative method is awkward, and the associated words and sentences in some places are wrong. Personal suggestion: I think if the author can later try to correct those data errors and explain clearly what should be explained. Thank you, the author has worked hard.

After watching it for so long, I feel more and more that the protagonist is the anchor for the return of the ancient immortals. The protagonist is causally connected to each of the true immortals through the game, and in turn leads the true immortal wheel to return.

The initial mock test can be deleted completely. It is not enjoyable to write and takes up a lot of space. It is very discouraging.

I'm convinced, I've read a few books in total, and they're all almost unfinished.

It's a pity that I was too hasty in the end. I could obviously write more if I followed the train of thought. Can't you really write some extras?

Oh my god, it took me a long time to find this book. Did I change the title?

This must not be given 🤓

Can this be refined

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