Mecha Type Beast Control

First of all, I feel that the story develops quickly and slowly. The writing style is obviously well-founded and has the meaning of a steady stream. However, what drives the plot is a simple and crude plot that is mindless and refreshing. Personally, I don't mind the environment of water and water in the early stage. Now I am still a little confused. Integrity We don't understand the distribution, local rules, etc. We can only follow the protagonist to understand where he sees it. It's a bit of a first-person perspective. It doesn't feel like a sci-fi genre Second, I feel that there are too many small plots. A clown appears in basically two chapters, but after a few chapters, he is blocked and I don't even remember where he comes from. And the larger plots are not enough foreshadowing. For example, I forgot to mention that I would come to participate in the auction. It is obvious that the conflict will break out here, but I have no impression or expectation at all before watching it The third is that the character of the protagonist seems a bit awkward. He is relatively cold compared to the familiar one, and is a bit innocent compared to the familiar one. When he meets the villain, he immediately becomes irritable, Long Aotian, which is a bit difficult to bring into. Originally, I don't often read novels, but I feel that your book is really interesting. It would be better to finish the book with more words. According to the writing method of the previous book of 800,000 words, it seems that the plot of the story cannot be fully developed.

It's a pity, it would have looked better if they were all original mechas

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Xiao Ran

I wrote a soft science fiction book [Cosmic Disaster], and I am begging for support as a newbie. The world view is grand, the combat power is explosive, and the comment area can be read by clicking on it. If there is any offense, the notice will be deleted.

I would say space scale. There is wool for 4 minutes. How far dreams fly

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