Cultivation of Immortality Abandoned His Disciples and Returned to His Hometown to Farm and Sing.

The author writes well. The food in the mountain village has a novel angle. It can also be used in singing, which is awesome. I can't stop, so I offer you four monthly tickets. Those who never vote for new books make an exception. In addition, Xiaoman is so powerful!

First of all, let me say that I have only read three chapters and I feel that it is pretty good. At least the sentences are smooth and there are no typos. In fact, I feel that the writing style is not bad. I personally like to read rural pastoral novels, but there are not many books on the bookshelf that I can read. So I would like to make a few suggestions and hope that this book can thrive and be enjoyed by me. The first thing to do when making money is to have a certain amount of money. Rural areas with money are pure land, and rural areas without money are pure land. Money is still very important. Personally, I think the most important thing is to use cheats to open up a stable source of funds. It is best to break away from cheats and still not be affected. This can free the protagonist from busy work and enjoy life. Don't be obsessed with making money, wishing you could be the richest man in the world, and reading about farming is probably just to see how much money you can make. Secondly, do not use the Virgin Mary. Many authors themselves are not aware of this. To put it simply, the protagonist can provide a channel for friends and villagers to make money, but remember that it is just a channel and not a direct gift of money! No matter how rich we are, we cannot be fools. The third pet is limited. There are only a few selling points in farming articles. Many authors like to add smart and rare animals when they have nothing to write about. But don't make your home feel like a zoo. The fourth trivial matter in life, rural novels are not about conquering other worlds, there are not so many fights and killings, they are basically trivial and ordinary things. As the protagonist is lucky enough to often encounter special situations, it is normal, but as a realistic novel, if special events are encountered continuously (to create excitement), it will feel nonsense. In cultivation novels, it is normal to encounter special situations in each chapter, but this rule does not apply in native novels. Slow down the pace and intersperse daily stories to reduce the sense of violation of special events. The Fifth Weird Relative, please write less about this. Although everyone has shortcomings, in the world of novels, no one's eyes can tolerate a grain of sand. Although the novel is more realistic, it certainly cannot copy reality. Write less nonsense, and don't play around with character reversals of abandoning evil and doing good. Sixth, most of us read local literature to relax our body and mind, and to imagine in novels a life that we cannot live in reality. Children's education, adult work, and medical care for the elderly all force us to stay in the city. We can only yearn for rural life through videos and novels. Of course, the rural countryside in reality is not very fun, and it can get boring if you stay there for a long time, so I like the author to make it more interesting. When Aldehyde writes novels, he often alternates between urban and rural areas to adjust the rhythm appropriately. Let me talk about some novels of the same type that I like. "Carrying a Fountain with You" ranks first in my opinion without any shortcomings. "The Mysterious Island" is too hands-on. "Robinson Crusoe" is a world-famous novel. "Mountain Pasture" is good except for feelings and occasional misconceptions. "Little Rich Peasant in the Mountain Valley" also has emotional problems. Many places are unreasonable, but I really like the leisurely and comfortable flavor. The 500,000-word "Forest of Two" is almost daily life and is more readable than the 2 million words of an ordinary novel. If you want to write about food, you can seriously read this book. However, this book has a lot of noodles, the taste is sweet, and there are very few spicy ones. Moreover, it is difficult for me to accept that the stewed meat is not boiled to remove the fishy smell! ! ! She only eats a little bit every day due to physical exertion. This is the limitation of a female author! ! ! If the author has time, he can play "Dream Garden" and "Dream Home", and directly download the cheat version. It is too difficult and will force you to spend money, but the garden inside is really beautiful. I guess 99% of people want to have a home like that, with fountains, trees, ponds, swings, and bonfire camps. The land and fishing hut are simply perfect. I hope it can provide some ideas to the author. The other thing is the game Stardew Valley. If you don't have time to play it, just watch the short video. As the top three players in the farming game, it's really fun. Even if it doesn't help writing novels, it won't be a waste of time. If you are interested in the old house renovation video, you can also check it out. Rural houses actually have many shortcomings, especially bathrooms and kitchens. If the protagonist is rich, he can still improve his living conditions. Don't still use dry toilets when he is rich. I can't guarantee whether the wilderness construction video will be helpful in writing novels, but it's definitely fun to watch. Provide some keywords for the author to broaden his thinking, apples, cherries, pears, plums, plums and apricots, various vegetables, flowers, wild peaches, herbs, lotus root, wild lily, honeysuckle, crab, eel, loach, snail, water bird, river shrimp, wild boar, pheasant, turtledove, cuckoo, home Swallow, owl, wasp, honey, raspberry, wild strawberry, pecan, wild grape, birch sap, maple syrup, matsutake, Hericium, fungus, shiitake mushroom, sheep bacilli, pine fungus, bamboo shoots, wild onion, wild garlic, toon, tangerine root and other wild vegetables, pickles, bacon, fish Ponds, vegetable fields, gardens, greenhouses, reservoirs, septic tanks, cellars, wine cellars, wells, spring firewood sheds, tool rooms, utility rooms, livestock sheds, chicken and duck pens, cat houses, kennels, power distribution rooms, hydroelectric power generation, wind power generation (household use), building houses, foundations, sewage drainage, Decoration, fire pit, fireplace, green tiles and white walls, modern decoration, modern bathroom, grape trellis, pavilion, stonemason, carpenter, bricklayer, bamboo fencer, hunting, trap, dog training, eagle cooker, crossbow, hunting cabin, shack, lookout, camping, bonfire, hot spring, snow mountain. Slightly changing the background may not necessarily completely refer to reality, as that would make it impossible to write a lot of things. Dog training base, this is an idea that I personally think is very suitable for rural pastoral novels. Many novels contain ways to unlock intelligence for animals, so training new dog breeds is very suitable, solving economic problems, and driving other villagers and friends to get rich. Military dogs, police dogs, search and rescue dogs, drug detection dogs, guide dogs, hunting dogs, fighting dogs, shepherd dogs, guard dogs, ornamental dogs. There is a lot to be done, there are so many things to write about, I hope an author will write about it. It feels like the more I talk about it, the more confusing it becomes. Anyway, I hope this book can be written well. I feel that the first three chapters are of good quality. I wish this book will sell well and become a god! ! ! ! For the sake of typing 1,800 words by hand on a mobile phone, please don't comment if your suggestions are wrong or inappropriate for the context of this book. Thank you.

After looking at it... This is a bit ridiculous... High spiritual roots are supposed to lead to fast cultivation, but what about physical constitution? This is the first time I heard that people with advanced spiritual roots will not be able to cultivate immortality due to physical problems... Is there any marrow cleansing pill or something like that in the world of immortality? Your sister can control time... If the spiritual root is bound to the soul, if it doesn't work, I will change my body... Besides, after seeing the splendor of the world of immortality, I really just farm honestly, I also admire it...

Have you recently gotten into trouble with this overseas luxury urban business war plot? The whole story is full of this stuff... Deviating from the central theme...

It's too niche, too many dialects are added, and you can't bring it in. I'd like to give the author a suggestion. If you write a novel just to make your people feel involved, then it's no problem. If you want to make people across the country feel included, it's best to reduce the dialects.

Another good thing is that the spoken dialect is written down, and then there are a lot of understanding brothers who accuse others of not being able to understand Chinese language. I feel tired and gave up after reading dozens of chapters. After writing this, many great people from high places will scold me 🙂

Look at these sharp eyes 😁

I don't know what, but I don't like this character. He's all giggling, but I don't see the stability.

The spiritual roots of civil engineering will not be wasted moving bricks at the construction site.

I originally wanted to read about farming, and it would be nice to sell snacks occasionally. As I kept reading, I wrote that Chinese medicine was sold, and a group of brothers helped sell medicine, as well as the fields and vegetables.

When I read Chapter 7, my girlfriend showed up. My childhood sweetheart, I had no phone calls or messages for 6 days. I couldn't stand it anymore 😅

It has become a pond recently, and it is still a big pond. If it still remains like this, I will give up. Anyway, you have many of my subscribers 🙂🙂🙂

I just read some of them, and I feel like it's just a book about farming in the title, but it's actually about urban business, and it's not leisurely at all.

Does this medicinal material mean that it can be cured when you are tired from playing? He said that Angong Niuhuang Pills cost thousands, but the Spirit Gathering Formation and exclusive medicinal materials only cost a few hundred?

If you don't understand the dialect, it's hard to immerse yourself in it.

The word "civil engineering" makes me stressed. Civil engineering has been optimized to go back to farming, right?

Tu Mu Linggen, born to be a dust-breaker

Don't be misled by the word "Xiu Xian". This book is actually about promoting agriculture through science and technology. The seed cultivation and production of an agricultural supplies company eventually became the development history of an agricultural empire. There is basically no "Xiu Xian", little farming, and more ups and downs in shopping malls and business negotiations. There is also a lot of professional knowledge written about agriculture. You may become an agricultural expert after reading this book.

At first I couldn't understand what the author wanted to write, but after reading it I really thought it was okay. Come on

Well, I didn't think it was exciting at first, but as I continued reading, it turned out to be quite different. I listened to a few of the songs on purpose, which I had never heard before. Keep, keep this style

In the introduction, it looked like a casual article, but after reading hundreds of chapters, I realized it was a business article!

I always thought it was the plot of a novel, but I didn't expect to find it today. Thanks to the scientists o(^▽^)o

Shouldn't this be more refined?

It's better to write about rebirth, it's not interesting.

It's the end of the month and I'm generating electricity for love. Can you give me a hand?

Anyone who has seen the latest chapter, can you tell me the general plot?

What about 1374? Why is it missing?

The subject matter is very good, but the first disadvantage is that the character of the protagonist is not enough. The second disadvantage is that there are too many characters. Too many characters means that the character is not distinctive enough. There is no need to create too many new characters. The third disadvantage is that there is not enough training, that is, not enough fun. If you don't have money and power, you just farm.

Come on

What's going on with the audio version? It's so funny, I'm confused