Konoha: the Birth of the Ninja Clan

Dream series!!!🥰The Senju and Uzumaki are not dead, Uchiha should be saved, and with the protagonist's new oil field clan, Konoha will definitely be the leader in the future!🎉

He has fallen behind since he used the golden finger to trick the children. The protagonist himself has not even mastered the high-end power of Yin and Yang in Naruto. He synthesized a magnetic escape and fell flat. He has no powerful secret skills. The protagonist is Konoha White Fang Plus at best. He follows the Third Hokage in everything. He is obviously a time traveler but is more servile than the devil. The high-level guards against the protagonist are like guarding against Uchiha. People have attacked their own children and wives and have not taken revenge. What a good dog.

It can only be said that he made all the mistakes that a new author should make. The pace at the beginning is not fast, there are many meaningless chapters, and the male protagonist is pretentious. On the surface, he knows that he is under surveillance, but he can't help but pretend to be cool. Also, the actions of other characters are irrational in order to advance the plot. You have said that the third generation has just taken office, and there are many people who are dissatisfied with him. There is no time to target you, an ordinary person who has good talents but has not grown up. It is too late to deal with political opponents and seize power. To put it bluntly, the author is too self-righteous and self-righteous. The male protagonist he projected also looks like a suffering master. Is it because he feels that the whole world is sorry for him because he is frustrated by reality.

The ninja world is in war every year, and there are countless mentally ill and dead people. A civilian genius whose personality has changed just because his parents died, the Hokage targets him, and specifically tells the teacher not to teach the protagonist ninjutsu? Then Kakashi was so miserable that he had to be executed secretly. This writing is really illogical. And this illogical background setting has been mentioned in the previous few sentences, but why does it keep mentioning it later? Danzo, a person who is so dark and discriminatory towards Uchiha, actually said that the protagonist is less trustworthy than Uchiha? Is it because the protagonist's personality changes after his parents die? Moreover, the protagonist just closes his heart and looks hypocritical, not turning into a bastard. Self-created monster power and Tsunade exchanged a few junk ninjutsu, and it can be interpreted as a relationship with the Senju family and Mito. However, the self-created Rasengan was asked by the village to hand it over and replaced it with the Dance of the Moon and the Moon, which would never appear later. I copied the Three-Character Sutra and gave it to the third generation to force him to take away his signature rights, so he bought a house with some money. He is really resigned to the situation He is the top player in the ninja world, but he is still feared and targeted by the village. He is not allowed to do S-level tasks and is not allowed to leave the village. There is also the positioning of the book. If you plan to write about a family, then the character of the son should be more distinctive, and the writing should be as dull as a passerby. If you don't plan to be Hokage, don't make meritorious deeds and earn reputation. Spend a lot of space on the war and the protagonist's pretentiousness. You also have a village high-level person who has been suspicious of the protagonist... Anyway, Naruto and the family definitely can't be written at the same time. There must be a focus, and there will be conflicts of interest. The establishment of the family was also handled poorly. The heroine had no sense of existence. Later, she became a fertility machine. She became pregnant with triplets, and a few years later she had twins. The twins became pregnant again just after they were one year old... I was also speechless. I got pregnant and gave birth to a child every few chapters. You can extend the timeline a little longer, or start with a broken family, or have a brother or sister who founded the family together.

To explain, some book friends said that after the protagonist used the beads' effects on his family, he could no longer use them. It is impossible to use them on his family members without affecting the protagonist's own use. The beads used on his family members were the extra energy after the beads did not cover up the strangeness of the protagonist's soul. Second, Flying Thunder God requires space talent, but space talent is innate and cannot be changed by epiphany. Third, as for why the protagonist didn't resist, it's because there is no safer place in the ninja world than Konoha, and the protagonist has no righteousness at hand. Madara was so awesome back then, wasn't it because of this that he was forced to leave. So don't just follow what others say, come in and take a look for yourself, thank you.

I read the first three chapters twice. Because the protagonist's parents and Uchiha Mirror were killed in a mission, I suspected something fishy and became wary of everyone. I also tried to impress others with the squinting eyes and fake smile of Ichimaru Gin, but he was not accepted as a disciple by the Third Hokage and was guarded. The protagonist was portrayed as innocent and full of ideas.

How dare you write about such a poisonous person like Tsunade. Originally, I thought this novel was at least a first-rate novel, not to mention Fengshen. Once you deal with Tsunade, I'm sorry, but your work is only third-rate at best. Others don't dare to tell me. I abandoned this book anyway, and I wanted to read it.

The best way to play family style is from the Warring States period. You can invest in Uchiha or Senju, or get married or something to strengthen your family. Sarutobi and Shimura did this, and they only brought their clans to invest after Konoha was founded. If you bring people to invest before Senju and Uchiha have founded Konoha, it is equivalent to providing help in times of need, and you are indispensable for the original stock. One share, and the position of the Third Hokage is yours. The reason why Sarutobi became the most wealthy family in Konoha later is that the three generations have continuously fed resources back to the family for decades. If the protagonist does not want to be Hokage, he should cultivate a clan member of his own and his confidant should be Hokage.

I saw the pictures of the main character's children and disciples taking the genin exam, so I withdrew them. If you want to show how talented your child is, you can write about how awesome he is on the battlefield. It's just a genin exam. In order to reflect the superiority of the protagonist's family, the writing feels very low. Pure little pussy and big outfit. Goodbye

The protagonist and coward can't use golden fingers, has no independent opinions, and everything goes according to the three generations.

So what is the reason why the protagonist is blocked? Due to the changes in personality due to the death of his parents, the protagonist is stuck in learning ninjutsu, and then he forces the protagonist to hand in ninjutsu. Is the protagonist showing signs of rebelling against the village? Is it worth doing this? The early stage of the third generation is not stable at all. The protagonist is not a proper disciple and is also a key training target. Mito is not dead. After knowing this, Mito can "voluntarily" let the protagonist hand over the Rasengan? This kind of operation started just a few years after the village was founded. The village has long since disappeared. The inventory of the Hokage is continuously accumulated from the collection of Senju and the development and seizure of previous Hokage. From the beginning, the ninja's skills will be changed to the Hokage the next day.

As the protagonist of Nisei, he travels through Naruto and works as a dog for the Japanese.

The timeline for establishing the Ninja Clan should be set in the Warring States Period. I can only put it in the Ninja Village Era. Writing it like this is very frustrating.

Danzo sent someone to kill the protagonist, but ended up killing just one of his subordinates? The protagonist is already semi-invincible at that time, and is he afraid of a Danzo? , Aren't you afraid of doing something to your wife and children while working outside? I can't kill Danzo and go to live in the Fire Country. I don't even have the courage to confront Danzo. Why do I practice? Isn't it just to do whatever I want? I can't even deal with people who attack my family, and I don't ask Danzo to give an explanation. I gave up. I'm too useless. I can explain my lack of strength. I have the strength to be so useless. There have been countless times the first time. There is no use regretting it later when the protagonist attacks his wife when he is on a mission.

I wrote it a bit fast, but I still don't understand one (commoner) after seeing the birth of the family? Ninjas will receive attention from the Hokage and be restricted 😅

Three births in five years, triplets, twins, and quadruplets. Are you selecting readers? Just a fertility tool

The protagonist looks like a native

The protagonist doesn't have any strategy at all, so he just accepts the situation, and then uses the plug-in for his children, but he doesn't become invincible first? People even called me, and I just paid some money!

It's all on the shelves, it's time to feel good, right? Danzo should die too, right? If I continue to feel so frustrated, I really can't find a reason to continue to subscribe.

The author really loves the three generations deeply. The coup is like playing house, and the process of the coup is as childish as Gaddafi's coup. Whose coup will only kill the leader of the Jin Yiwei? If the person with the greatest interests is not killed, you coup will be a hammer. The Hyuga family split and provoked the protagonist and said that the protagonist does not know how to do soft fists. I have endured this. After seeing the plot of the coup 🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢

It was fine in front, but it fell apart when it was put on the shelf.

I squint every day like a fool. Does squinting look good?

The author's political writing is like shit, but everything else is quite interesting.

Today's chapter is really poisonous, I gave up on it,

It's all reversed, and the place names are also reversed. I'm convinced.

I feel that the subject matter is very interesting. Forging a ninja family, I think it is more reasonable to speed up the time and allow the heirs to form combat capabilities as soon as possible to advance the plot.

One hundred and fifty tickets were good before, but after one hundred and fifty, it's a waste of money.

I stopped watching 86 after seeing it, it's so fierce 😅

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Dear bosses, can you help me solve my doubts My sincere question