The Home on the Back of the Mythical Beast

According to the introduction, it is a bit broken. If the novel was changed to building a home in another world and the introduction was changed, then there would be nothing wrong with what is written now. If we still write in the direction of the home and introduction on the back of the mythical beast, it will collapse at the moment. There should be no commercial activities at present, the story of setting up factories and selling, let alone the conflict of monopoly of raw materials. This should be controlled after brewing a batch of wine and selling it, and go all out to serve the small climax of the beast disaster half a year later, such as cutting down trees and building roadblocks, soil red bricks, digging holes to hide items, wooden guns, how to better store food, etc., To pave the way for subsequent disasters. After gradually gaining a certain degree of safety, in this commercial area, we will gradually uncover why there are mythical beasts, why they build homes on their backs, and what the world is like,

I remember there was a game that built a home on the back of an animal, "Wandering Pastoral?"

Are you writing an outline? I have written all 12 pictures, and the gunpowder for opening a winery has come out. If someone else had written this, I could have written at least 120 pictures. I have finished writing 12 pictures. It will take about fifty or sixty pictures to be put on the shelves. What else will you write by then? Directly rewrite fantasy

The author's arrangement is quite cool. I hope the plot of this book can be better arranged and less poisonous.

Is it possible to publish a small book every day after finishing it? Funny?

Making gunpowder is just playing with technology, so withdraw.

Are you writing an outline? Just 12 chapters. You wrote about the brewery and the development of gunpowder. People have to write at least 120 chapters before they can reach this point. You have finished 12 chapters. Then you can put it on the shelves after at least 60 chapters. What will you write after that? Write fantasy, change the map

I feel that the focus should be on what is extraordinary and what kind of business is going on here...

Not bad, but updates are too slow

The disaster is just within the scope of being able to be solved. How can ordinary people survive with so many disasters?

After reading the introduction, it looks very similar to a game I played, a stand-alone game on Steam.

A very good novel, but the word count is short.

The golden land of data babies is very suitable

It's so little to seduce me, come back when there are more updates

I think it's great. Like those black ones, I can only say that the white text is suitable for them.

I wrote a soft science fiction book [Cosmic Disaster], and I am begging for support as a newbie. The world view is grand, the combat power is explosive, and the comment area can be read by clicking on it. If there is any offense, the notice will be deleted.

I once saw a book about the body of a mythical beast. It was quite novel, but it seems to have disappeared.

The writing is very good, why did it crash? There are ten thousand copies, brother. I was waiting for your next update two days ago.

There are mythical beasts, and they are still technologically advanced, without any extraordinary force. Do you want the mythical beast to wait for you for hundreds of millions of years before you launch a Star Destroyer for a decisive battle?