The God of War in the Training Ground

It's so cliche, a classic scenario of breaking off the engagement and marrying the person with the highest talent, plus the villain likes it, plus causing trouble for the protagonist.

School flow, love brain, comedian. The intelligence reduction and upgrade data are unreasonable, the plot is blunt, and there is basically no description of the environment and historical background. Suitable for watching without a brain or with a brain supplement

The writing is okay, but I just love and can't watch the harem

I guess it was written by a middle school student living in the dormitory again.

It's strange. The protagonist can't beat the human and the machine. It seems strange to others that he can't beat the human and the machine. And then others can't beat the protagonist 😰

Don't you need to be familiar with physical strength?

After seeing Chapter 51, let me tell you my opinion The first thing is the protagonist's failure. You can fight monsters to upgrade, and you can also fight simulated battles to gain experience The protagonist mainly relies on fighting humans and machines to upgrade The health of 0.2 At the beginning is just an ordinary person, right? But, but It's because he didn't compare from the beginning, and didn't say how much better than ordinary people It's just a numerical value, a special skill bar, a special numerical value after awakening Under normal circumstances, 10,000 points can be promoted to a martial artist This numerical value is too inflated It's 50,000 times that of ordinary people Because there is no comparison with ordinary people, the sense of fragmentation is too strong, giving people a feeling of being strong on the outside and dry on the inside. There is too much water The protagonist now has 20,000 health and is promoted to a martial artist. How many times stronger than the beginning, for To avoid inflation, the author converted blood into breath Converted about 100 breaths and started a new calculation method That's it, it doesn't feel so outrageous The most important thing is that there is no comparison with ordinary people, or in other words, there is no comparison with the protagonist. In comparison, it didn't say what the amount of blood energy is. Let me tell you, your starting blood energy is 0.1, Which is the amount of a normal person After awakening, it becomes 0.2 (Apprentice), which is considered to be strengthened, because the awakening has changed Simulation training one The time becomes 0.01 (Beating machine) When you practice to 1.0, It is time to compare with ordinary people You can mobilize the special skill value of blood to fight. For example, if you are twice as strong as ordinary people, you can use the blood value to fight 1 against 5 At this time, we need to explain the issue of talent. People with poor talent can only go down to the mid-apprenticeship at most. This is due to talent. They are stronger than ordinary people, but not too strong. When you upgrade to 50.0 (Middle-apprenticeship), you can gradually use it. There are some fighting techniques, such as fists, feet, swords, and a dozen additional health points. (The talent is not good enough, usually this is the end, this is the bottom of the warrior world... That is, most people) When upgraded to 100.0 (Late apprenticeship) , the physique has become very strong, the genes are also gradually changing, the body has been fully upgraded, and it is trivial to stand up to a thousand with one, (Under normal circumstances - this is close to graduation from the martial arts school) At this time, you can consider promotion to a martial artist, or push the limit and do a 200.0 Upgrade to make readers feel awesome Then the martial artist should also compare, and you can use Qi Fighting with each other, 1 vs. 2 (Late apprenticeship) is no problem The protagonist is awesome, 1 vs. 10 (I want to fight 10. JPG) This will give everyone a little room to imagine the concept of the protagonist's combat power I have said a lot of nonsense, in short, that's it, I have finished what I want to complain about ...

A warrior has 100 qi and blood, and a martial artist has 10,000. Is this span as big as the Milky Way? Grandmaster, is the Grandmaster going to break 100 million?

It's not great, it's a bit old-fashioned, and there are many shortcomings of this type of article. It's not what it looks like. Real academics, real geniuses, are all very methodical. At least their thinking is different from ordinary people. So what does the protagonist look like in it? -_-||

Having said that, I really can't help but download the app to talk about it. The book is quite bright as a refreshing article, so I can't complain. Can the author read the sentences you wrote from the beginning? OCD can't help but turn into a Chinese teacher to correct the wrong sentences. There are so many wrong sentences, so many strange and confusing words. What is [I rushed towards the person in front of me in the first second] and what [accompanied by taking a step] [being avoided by the other party, (me?) Stabbed me with a knife at the same time? Heart, (who?) Died with a twist of the neck] [Even if the students have many geniuses, I am not much worse than the geniuses (even if there are many students who are geniuses, they are not much better than me)] [While feeding chicken soup for the soul, the same? Smiling and shaking his head] [A glimpse? The surrounding students looked up at the stars] [Delaying other people's little girls (girls? Little girls?)] What does it mean to [delay other people's innocence? Waiting for others to grit their teeth? Break off the engagement] Grit your teeth [Finally a girl appeared in front of him] Where is it finally [His energy and blood are slim] False? [On the one hand, he was playing with his mobile phone, and on the other hand, he saw Jiang Chi reaching out to say hello and walking into the dormitory with a smile.] How many sick sentences do you think this sentence means? Reach out and make a sound with a smile? Call? ? Walk in? Walking into the dormitory? [On the one hand, I turn on the computer and on the other hand, I say] [There are many people scolding you behind your back] Isn't it okay if you don't add [Although there are many people like me, but what do you really mean] Although, can you be like this but [until now] until now? Now? [Zhao Yunfei pursed his lips, while wearing training clothes and lying on the upper bunk] Are you wearing training clothes? [At least these families will not have any worries about money] At least these families will not be in embarrassment. At least these families will not have worries, right? What does it mean to be worried about [can we be official and cautious? Testing talent] [The relaxed smiles of the two echoed in the dormitory? ? (Laughter)] [Jiang Chi chose to hide in the woods and go around] Go around through the woods, hide in the woods and then go around [saw a person sitting there at the edge of the square, holding a sign] I saw someone sitting there holding a sign at the edge of the square, saw someone sitting there holding a sign... And so on and so on. This is the author. Can you read it once, read it twice, read it three times? Use normal colloquial or film-like language to describe it smoothly. Don't deliberately pile up words and sentences for the sake of writing. Really good books are written with heart!

It's okay to live here, if you're willing to pretend. Look, you're pretending, but you still can't stand it.

Ntr protagonist, I suggest you not watch Pure Love God of War.

It's a data explosion. According to the junior sister's two-year martial arts experience, she has an average increase of more than ten or twenty points of energy and blood every day. Counting her as an S-level person, then even a D-level person can increase her energy and blood by almost a point every day. I don't understand the protagonist's 0.2 Energy and blood.

For the studio's NT articles, Qidian didn't even dare to turn on the blacklist function, which wasted everyone's time looking for books.

This novel is really disappointing. I thought it was in the style of Shilipo Sword God, but it turned out to be an upgrade.

The cultivation data is too rough. A martial artist has less than 100, a first-year ordinary person has 0.2, An outstanding person has more than 20, a warrior has more than 100, and a martial artist has more than 10,000 directly. A martial artist has more than 10,000 times the vitality and blood of an ordinary person. It is a real data explosion party.

After reading two chapters, I felt it was a mess. Randomly broken sentences, inappropriate word choice, unclear meaning

After reading Chapter 17, I feel that there are a lot of wrong sentences or inappropriate words, especially the plot where the rich woman spends 100 million to buy the clothes made by the protagonist. The supporting character next to the rich woman has to add "" at the end of every sentence she speaks. It reads very strange. Author, don't you check it several times before uploading a new chapter?

It's beautiful, I love watching it without thinking 😍😍😍😍, highly recommended

The language of this conversation is too awkward, so I have withdrawn it.

The author graduated from junior high school, and he has no relatives in the family. His sister's daughter calls her brother, so she shouldn't be uncle! What kind of hell is calling uncle?

It's too stiff and not natural at all, especially the dialogue part😐

Can you please not add "" after every sentence? I feel uncomfortable listening to the book.

What the hell, I've read more than a dozen chapters and the word count is so high that I'm speechless every day! !

It's definitely a change of character. It's completely different from the previous style.

After more than two hundred chapters of Gao Wu becoming an immortal,

The spirit body is essentially the subconscious mind

There was a female lead, but I didn't like it, so I pulled her out.