Both Worlds, Side Schools Also Need to Cultivate Immortality

It looked good to me at first, but suddenly he fed me a lump. He is a practitioner of magic. When we first met, he took a girl to time travel, exposed her, and taught her to practice the technique. Who can bear this? Slipping away

All I'm saying is that if this book didn't have a female protagonist, it would definitely be a top-quality novel with decisive killings. But there is a plot with a female protagonist at the beginning, and you can't write it well. The protagonist is still a heretic. What do you think?

If you start writing about women, you won't be able to control them! Poisoning a crowd of passers-by

Okay, I successfully saved a woman at the beginning and successfully persuaded me to quit. Goodbye.

There is a female protagonist at the beginning, which is really poisonous. Do you have to have so many resources at the beginning to cultivate immortality and support a woman? And I went to another world. The ability to search and absorb other worlds is the basic idea Then the rhythm and plot of this novel are the same as those in the game. It is too easy to conquer those alien beasts, and it is too easy to become a worshiper.

Passers-by, shouldn't those who practice magic take away the other person's talent when they see someone with good talent? If you can't do this, it's called the devil???

The brave will be starved to death, and the timid will be starved to death. Come on, author, come back with the next book.

If you don't follow the harem trend, there is no need to rely on Sesel to attract readers. The audiences are all different, and if they all want it, it will only please both sides.

To be honest, the final result of this book will not be very good. What everyone sees in the heresy is ruthlessness, means, and the IQ of the protagonist. And then your settings are a bit cumbersome. For example, the woman at the beginning. Have you ever seen a heretic who would take a woman with him when he goes out? Especially how can the golden finger let the second person know? If this woman falls into the hands of other people and is searched for her soul, this is a very big poisonous point. Then it's really tedious to see what kind of awareness of heaven you have at the top.

Why did you save that woman? I looked back a little bit, but I still don't understand it. Is there anyone who understands it?

Nowadays, if there are good novels, they are all about widows and girls. Without these, I wouldn't be able to write to satisfy my perverted desires.

The foundation of some worlds is Yuan Qi, some worlds are elements, some worlds are space twists or strings, some are dreams of gods, and there are many different worlds Some people often say that those who cultivate immortals do not know the truth and play with technology and cannot achieve enlightenment. Science is not a simple industrialization of gear energy, but a way of thinking. It is not that those who cultivate immortality cannot engage in industrialization, but their main purpose is to avoid disasters and seek the truth. Industrialization will sooner or later be killed by external disasters The world is impermanent, so saints move with the world. I haven't watched it yet, but I hope to see a setting framework that is complete enough to include different worlds.

I won't talk about it later, but it looks pretty good now.

The outline idea at the beginning of this book is: Talent takes the protagonist to the world of Aylan first, but the level of the world is too low, and then he goes to the mortal world. When he entered the mortal world, he was discovered by Heavenly Dao. He didn't want to take care of it at first. He had a lot of people traveling around him. But he deliberately glimpsed the world of Aylan from the direction the protagonist came from, and with his talent nurturing the two gates at that time, he entered the world of Aylan through his talent, manifesting the world consciousness of the world of Aylan. After the talent was exposed (it did not hide it, nor did it empty the two worlds), it gave some benefits to the two worlds as a reward for the protagonist to borrow their world as a place for growth. But Ailan World got these benefits and wanted to advance to the world level, but the background was not enough, so it made a deal with the mortal world (it has nothing to do with the protagonist). After the conversation between the two, the Heavenly Dao of the Mortal Realm was in a good mood, so he wanted to give the protagonist a chance to make his own choice, and this is the beginning of the first chapter. Go to the Immortal Sect to practice the righteous Dharma, or go to Dayuan to sit in one place. But the protagonist traveled back in time to understand the general situation of Yuanchen State, and his talent was still gestating. Not only was he afraid of being affected by the Great Yuan's expedition to the mountains and temples when he ran to the South China Sea, he was also afraid of being discovered by the loose immortals and earth immortals on the battlefield. So in his subconscious, he still doesn't want to be related to those sects, at least not before Sanxian. In addition, as he had just cultivated the Three Yin Flames, all kinds of emotions were amplified, and there was a quiet stimulation. Faced with the choice of the mortal world, he subconsciously did not take this choice seriously (he didn't know it, it was just like a dream). After that, he went to Mashanfang City. He just wanted to buy some things to prepare for the trip to the South China Sea. He also wanted to find out about Dayuan's recent situation and see the beautiful women. Based on the character of the protagonist, he will not save the heroine. He will run away until it is safe! As long as Tiandao in the mortal world gives his mother-in-law according to his choice, he has to take it even if he doesn't want it, so the two of them are influenced and favored (it is not a modification of the protagonist's will, but a temporary gain that lasts the favor, otherwise the talent will take action), various encouragements and hints, and the story of the first few chapters is formed. As for the incident of the whale meat flying away, except for the heroine, the protagonist wanted to miss the minotaur after getting the Zhou Tian Bai Tu. However, Zhou Tian Bai Tu was given to him by two worlds, and their consciousness was still paying attention to them at the time, so they knew about it, so they bullied him in front of him and crushed him to pieces. This was regarded as revenge. The whale meat will come back later, maybe after the protagonist becomes immortal. There will be no such things later. The two worlds still have their own things to do. Talents will generally not come out unless there are situations involving the protagonist's bottom line. It is part of the protagonist. There is no plot to raise gu or to harvest the protagonist. It is just the insurance for the protagonist to move forward! The heroine's writing skills are limited and she is not well-characterized, but she is positioned as the protagonist's sworn warrior, with a sword in her hand. Everything is centered on the protagonist, which is also an insurance policy. The previous story is generally like this. The writing style of the new author is not very good, and it is unrealistic to change it now. Please forgive me for not handling some aspects well! At the same time, I would like to thank many book friends for their recommendation votes, monthly votes, rewards, catching bugs, providing opinions on this book, and expressing their own opinions. Thank you to many book friends who support this book! Some comments that catch bugs and evaluate may disappear automatically after the author modifies the article. We hope for your understanding. I hope that the comment area will be harmonious. Some comments involving personal attacks will be deleted by the author. We hope for your understanding.

Nowadays, after the mediocre Golden Three Chapters are all popular, do you immediately start releasing poison?

Please take a look at whether it is good for Wenzhao Gong to cultivate immortality in the world of demons and martial arts. The character of the protagonist does not need to be very evil, at least he must be an elite. What ordinary people think of, the protagonist cannot think of. And for a little bug, God is not so free.

You might as well rewrite it and you'll get good grades. It just so happens that I haven't written much yet, so I can still hope to make amends by starting over.

It feels okay, but what does it mean to start with a girl?

The author is afraid that he doesn't know what the side door means. The side door is a dead end and there is no immortality. If your side sect can live forever, then it is no longer a side sect.