Zongwu: We Are in Qixia Town, and We Accept Huang Rong at the Beginning

In terms of emotional lines, the protagonist is too simple and the plot is too drawn out. Martial arts are also ancient! Huang Rong lost her virginity but did not kill the protagonist. She stayed to live there and took the initiative to cook for the protagonist. Her attitude was already obvious. Wouldn't it be nice to just get married, sleep every day, and cook food for you? Furthermore, as a heroine with ancient ideas, it is impossible for the protagonist to wash the dishes. Overall, it lacks an ancient flavor and is written with too modern ideas. Not only is the protagonist too modern, but the natives also have inexplicably modern ideas. Huang Rong asked her man to wash the dishes, and Tianshan Child Elder thought that she should do some work. This is too modern thinking. People in martial arts generally don't think or do this. This is a writing flaw! When writing about the ancient background, we must consider the thoughts of the ancients! Otherwise, the ancient flavor cannot be written, and the original character settings will collapse!

Lack of antique flavor! The characters in the book have too modern ideas. Conflicts with the original character setting! It is recommended that you put the ancient background into your writing!

Chapter 6: Death from poison 💀

Okay, this introduction clearly tells you that this is a mindless article.