From Selling Box Lunches to Becoming a Famous Chinese Chef

Let me give you a brief review. I have read more than 200 chapters so far. The early plot was okay, but the two aunts who came to the brewery cafeteria were a bit off-putting. The protagonist had a smooth journey from selling box lunches to opening a small shop, with help from various noble people, but I felt that there was a little bit of struggle to start a business. Sometimes when describing a person or a thing, Che Lulu would always say it over and over again, which is very watery. Moreover, the events in this book have a chronological background. Although it is said to be more than 1990, it always feels like everything except the price happened after 2000. From what I can see now, it's like writing about what the protagonist does, and then a bunch of people come out to talk and comment. This kind of routine really feels a bit boring after watching it for a long time.

See Chapter 229: 1. The growth trajectory relies too much on coincidence. The grandpa and the boss did not highlight the grassroots struggle of "selling box lunches", which gave me the feeling that it was not practical enough. 2. There are very few era profiles. I still don't know that the book is in the 1990s. 3. This book has a strong business element in it, but I see that I don't know how much money the protagonist can earn, and I have no idea at all. 4. The heroine's family content is smelly and long; the daily life atmosphere is not solid enough, and it lacks the description of the humanistic style of the times. It is neither an upgraded novel nor a daily novel.

That's right, I just went to sell some meat after reading the author's book 😭

This kind of urban nostalgia entrepreneurial article is easy to shoot and has a traffic base You can find a prototype to write a "Jinan Catering Story" based on the celebrity chefs of Shandong cuisine The young apprentice travels through time and space Interacts with the masters from the first-person perspective, communicates and learns from the masters Shows the rise and fall of each restaurant bit by bit Changes The personal destiny of each Shandong cuisine celebrity For fun, you can set it to Learn traditional Shandong cuisine techniques Introduction to famous dishes Interaction with famous chefs Complete your dream of being a master Write it and sell it to the noon sun, and the brothers will enjoy it

The protagonist was robbed on the road, and the protagonist was rescued by his friends in the factory. The man who robbed him was beaten and let go easily. Be kind and soft-hearted! If you resort to official tactics, you should be sent to the police station. If you don't report it privately, you should be beaten to death. Normal people will take revenge on you, let alone the person who robbed you. Everyone in the factory is united and united. Next time, they will just slap you and bury you. What can I do if the main character is gone? At least one person has to break his leg. If no one from the factory comes to save him, the protagonist will not end well. Hey, if your writing is not good and you don't want people to comment on it, it's been blocked. You might as well delete it. You can just ban me directly. 🤫

I died from the poisonous disease. I thought I was the number one scholar and went out to travel. Not only did I get a cool script about showing off my identity when I met someone on the road, but at worst it was a farming style and slowly developed. What I saw was a competition-level dog that got a medal, went out and walked around to comment on various judges, and had to kneel down to lick the script. I was convinced.

Reading your novel is like eating a meal while watching a gourmet show

Your feelings come out of nowhere and you especially like to write about them recently! Make money quickly! Who likes to see you make a couple here for the rest of your life? ! Faint to death

I really feel that the author's daily conversations are too unthinking. It is impossible to speak like that in daily conversations. Just like what I wrote recently, people at the train station came to dinner and praised the hand-made noodles, which brought us to a happy ending. To be honest, it is impossible to speak like this in daily conversations. If it were me, I might say that the last bowl of noodles really made me happy. The writing of daily dialogue is not very good (to be honest, daily dialogue can never be like that). I think it is really a failure to write the written language and daily dialogue in the same way. If the author wants to improve, this is really a point that needs to be solved. I also think it affects the perception of reading, what kind of words are said, and what kind of colloquial expressions are used. I always feel that the dialogue you write is exactly the same as the writing of high school students, which is not good. I have been following this book for a long time, and I have always felt that it is tasteless and a pity to abandon. If the author can solve it, the perception can be improved to several levels, and more people will read it.

I don't understand why you have to arrange the family background of your current girlfriend. What you wrote is not a love story, and this is not the final heroine. If so, is it to arrange a disgusting plot later? It's really unnecessary. Just arrange it normally.

Of course there is no shortage of readers who write about being honest, doing things sincerely, and telling good stories It's just that half of the people now die from bad writing.

From the author's Mom and Dad article to now, I think the writing style is quite good, but I feel that it has been tepid and has buried his talent. I hope this book can be more brilliant, have good results, and also hope that the plot is richer!

Hello author, I sincerely give you a suggestion. You really need to practice your writing. It seems that some high school students feel like writing a chronicle composition. The psychological activities of the characters are briefly mentioned. I am really happy just using xx. I really think xx is very good. Can you try it yourself? Also, the dialogue between the characters is written, and there is basically no sense of life. What you are writing is a novel, not meeting minutes. I really feel that it is a pity. Your plot and story are very well conceived. It can also be seen that you really like cooking and want to tell this story well, but your current writing level is obviously holding you back. Writing a good story doesn't have to be full of rhetoric. It's better to make it more life-like and interesting. It is recommended that you read the articles of writers such as Feng Jicai and Wang Zengqi and learn their writing techniques. For example, when Yu Qian teaches others how to cook, just a simple noodles with scallion oil or other small cold dishes, it sounds interesting and comfortable to listen to when you hear it from his mouth.

Let's talk about my personal opinion. Actually, don't write too much about Luo Qing's family, it's too silly. We are male videos and generally don't like these things. It would be better to write more about career.

Can you try not to write emotional dramas? Didn't see it! Develop your cooking plot well

There are bad reviews about the meal vouchers. Earlier I said I would lower the grade and not do it, but then I started doing it again.

Update a few more chapters, and finally see a normal food article that doesn't rely on plug-in prices.

It was okay in the beginning, but when I saw the description of the heroine and her family, I felt that the author was feeding poison to the readers. It did not promote the plot and was too long and poisonous. With a character like her brother, why did you write about their family? Is it because you dislike the heroine or do you feel that the protagonist is too smooth and you need to increase the difficulty? Some things don't have to be too realistic. If you torture readers by writing like this, you are also making trouble for yourself. . . .

Why is it limited to free of charge again... Isn't the additional subscription only less than 1,000?

Good-looking is good-looking. Just don't know why. Before Chapter 700, I could read a hundred chapters at once, but after Chapter 700, I could only read 30 chapters and then I couldn't stand it anymore. I have to change the book and read it again.

Forget it, I can't stand the last 170 chapters. . . After knowing the plot, the more I watched, the more I felt that it would be better to just watch the ending. . . . So be it.

The branches opened by the protagonist are all well-known and reputable in the local area, and the chefs usually have a role in the chef association. When the protagonist reaches the age of age, all the chef associations in the province belong to me, and I founded the recommendation guide, which makes me a bit king in the local area.

This is very similar~