Douluo: the Way of Martial Arts

What can I say... What a blessing! ! ! This description may not be accurate, but the plot feels very stiff! ! ! I only saw more than 20 chapters, two poisonings in a row! I couldn't hold on any longer... First, I met Qian Renxue, but what else had I decided to do? The above is an analysis... What do I want to ask about the picture? Figure: Do you know other people's identities and have them silenced? Just to show off? ! ! You didn't ask for anything, and the person on the other side didn't say anything about you... Then you met the people from Tiandou Royal Academy, and it was like this again. No one else said anything. When they met for the first time, they just talked about it. They rushed to talk about Duguyan's poisoning, but no one else wanted to talk about it. It was another awkward operation. Anyway, the plot was very blunt... I won't tell you what your motive is for doing this, let's just say that you can't connect with the plot at all.

The first part is quite normal, but in the later part we can only say that the main character is the Holy Mother and the Good Fortune Boy. Are you wholesale gold fingers for others? You even licked Tang San, Tang San wanted you to take death, and you still gave me the technique. It's the same as if someone tried to rape your wife or daughter, and you gave him five million to replenish his body. This kind of thinking is unacceptable to normal people.

The author thinks things too simply. When the protagonist just starts practicing, he gives the martial arts secrets to the school and teaches them to others casually. Can he be wiser? Asking if you have a way to die? Others are practicing soul power cultivation, but Pig's Feet is a martial arts cultivation method. After you become an invincible god, leave some cultivation techniques and martial arts secrets for this Douluo Continent. Wouldn't that work? Why are you so impatient to start showing off? It's not like you have an invincible system. In reality, a showman like you wouldn't survive three episodes. When writing a novel, you must be reliable and don't write randomly. Those great families and dynasties. Wuhun Palace. It's strange that they don't find fault with you. I'll probably arrest you and torture you. Teach them all the secrets.

If you want to write a novel well, you have to think of yourself as a pig's foot. If you really travel to Douluo Continent, it will be a real society. For example, the author is in real society. You have martial arts secrets, do you dare to show them to others? You definitely don't dare, otherwise you will definitely be sliced ​​into pieces, so why do you dare to take out the martial arts secrets in Douluo Continent? Do you have an invincible system? Invincible background? Nothing. Why do you dare to take it out? Is there a way to die? Why doesn't the author know this simple truth? Writing a novel at least has some logic.

It's normal to create a martial arts technique with meridians and souls. It's a demon in the heart of the Tao. I just want to know if the protagonist is so awesome. He still uses it regularly for a few years, and then some inexplicable things appear. To put it simply, the author is cheating, and the reason is far-fetched.

To test a 6-year-old child and induce evil fire into him to keep him calm, and to pass on the energy of the great soul master to the soul master to make him surrender, you really make Ma Hongjun the protagonist. If he really has this ability, he will not disdain you. I'm not saying that letting the protagonist teach for free would be moral kidnapping, but can this test be reasonable?

There are slight flaws before Chapter 30, which is acceptable. After thirty chapters, the painting style changes suddenly and becomes crazy and poisonous. Moisturized.

What's the use of Zhu Zhuqing? She's not very talented. She has one pendant that every fan can collect and a bunch of resources. She's just a high-level martial spirit. I really just like the two pieces of flesh on her chest.

You have written another Tang San, which is not as good as Tang San, is more hypocritical than Tang San, and does not have Tang San's background and abilities. Low profile version of Tang San

Isn't Zhu Zhuyun's figure even more amazing? Specially provided by the royal family

When I saw Zhu Zhuqing as the heroine, I didn't even want to click in.

Two words are abstract. The Soul King fights Titled Douluo, and his combat power collapses. The Soul King can mobilize the power of heaven and earth. It is even more abstract. Our 50-plus level Soul King directly injured Chen Xing. The injury was not serious. It is so damn abstract.

Author, can you write as much as possible? The opening is so good, the preparation is relatively clear, and there is no pointless criticism of Tang San and the master. It is best to connect the first four parts of Douluo.

Flanders, such a deductible person, Oscar is from a commoner background, and he has to sell sausages to make money, but he doesn't help. How did you come to adopt a baby? Are you sure he can raise you?

That's a lot of writing. . . . That's it, Douluo Continent? ,,,

The protagonist always fights with others and loses both sides. He is really not afraid that others will come and take advantage of him.

It was good at the front, but the magic seed started to deteriorate at the back.

Things have changed after about thirty chapters. The protagonist is so controlling and disgusting to watch. It would be better to hide himself from the beginning and explain it slowly when he is more developed.

This is to be a nanny for someone!

If you have any ideas, please tell me and I'll take them as appropriate. This book will definitely not have a single female protagonist. If you have any thoughts about the female protagonist, you can tell me.

After all, one person's power is limited, and he cannot write a plot that everyone likes. As long as you put it forward, you will definitely reply, and the good ones will be adopted. Thanks for the help.

After Chapter 100, the tone of the conversation suddenly changed. I felt a little uncomfortable and quit.

It's a brainless and refreshing article. I don't know what I'm writing about. Isn't it the martial spirit of the meridians? What's behind it.

The next step is to transform Shrek, which is also the top priority in the next step. If I write well, I will keep you readers, but if I write poorly, you will abandon me. So in order to prevent this from happening, feel free to offer any suggestions. If there are any problems with what I wrote, you can tell me and I will change it if it makes sense. Will also reply.

After reading dozens of chapters in this book, I felt that the plot connection was very strange and abrupt. I felt that the author had no outline or something. The protagonist's goal was unclear, and he often failed to achieve his goal or had no result. Sometimes he even didn't know whether he had achieved it or not. I felt this most clearly when I saw the protagonist challenging Tang Hao. What is the purpose? Are you simply feeling emotional? Challenge the strong? There has to be a reason, right? Inexplicably, the situation came to a head, and the issue did not come up, and it ended hastily. And I don't know if I read it too quickly. I feel that the protagonist's goals are often not achieved or come to nothing. Ma Hongjun failed the test, and the results of helping Dugu Bo detoxify were not written in detail. There was also the part about transforming the Seven Monsters. I saw that Tang San failed to transform after entering school, and Dai Mubai felt that Something is wrong. Even Dai Mubai can't handle it, let alone Tang San. He really wanted to show off his power but was interrupted by Flanders. Flanders is the adoptive father of the protagonist. He doesn't understand the protagonist in this relationship. Is this a failure in life? The key is that this problem has not been resolved and another one pops up. Devil, I really don't know what to say.        ，，，，，，，

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Now I have gone directly to Fengshen Honghuang. I don't know what to write next.