The Calamity of All Races: the Eternal Legacy of the Fire

The author keeps updating! I will give you two recommendation votes every day

Update once a day, stop chasing, raise it up

First~

It's okay, I hope the author will update it every day

More updates, one update is not enough

Update quickly, come on, come on, come on, come on

What is the author's current situation

The content is wonderful, but one chapter a day is not enough

How can the human race be in danger when all races are in catastrophe? At most, it's just a training. With the King of Zhou here, the race will not be exterminated. Not to mention the premise that the human race has ruled the world for the first eight eras. The defeat was due to the waves. Can't you bear the rise of other races in one era?

There is a lot of drama between the lines, there are too many sentences that destroy the sense of substitution. You are writing a novel, not a storyteller.

The writing is good, but emmmm there is too much psychological description of the protagonist and too little description of things and events. I think the psychological changes of many protagonists are very sudden, that is, they suddenly become indifferent, suddenly become murderous, and suddenly become moved. Although I know that the author wrote about the events that changed him, he didn't write enough. As a result, my mentality did not change after reading two pages, but. The protagonist's mentality has changed, and I haven't adapted yet.

I read four Wanzu fanfics today. Your profile is the least attractive. I suggest you change it. It's not attractive enough.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Come on! It depends on you big guys!

What a pity! The author only updates once a day

After reading this chapter with great anticipation, I had a bad feeling. Is this "pawn" serious? At first glance, you have finished the book! ! Are you so good at playing?