Three Kingdoms: I Have Been a Human Being for Three Generations, and I Have Been the Emperor of the Han Dynasty for Two Generations.

In the second life, he has no hair, worships people, loves to scold people and is incompetent.

Before I read it, I wanted to know what the protagonist thinks of Liu Bei. Nowadays, all the articles about the clan with the surname Liu, portray and treat Liu Bei completely horribly. I can understand you if you are Liu Zhang, but I can't understand you if you are someone else surnamed Liu. Why not use such a useful card like Liu Guanzhang? There are even some authors who would rather forgive Dong Zhuo, Cao Cao and Jia Xu, but cannot tolerate Liu Bei. They co-authored the sentence, "They killed my whole family and raped my wife, but they all had their own reasons." "Liu Bei respects me and supports me, but he is so ambitious that he must be killed." 🙂🙂🙂

Lu Bu has always been the most trusted prince by Emperor Xian of the Han Dynasty. Why is the relationship between the two so bad in the book? Are you still criticizing Lu Bu for being disloyal and unjust? When Emperor Xian of the Han Dynasty fell to Hedong, the first thing he did was to make a wish for Lu Bu to receive him. So Lu Bu was made a vigorous general, and he opened the government during festivals and holidays, just like the three Dukes. At the beginning, when the emperor was in Hedong, there was a handwritten letter summoning cloth to welcome him. The Bu army had no livestock and could not fight on their own, so they sent envoys to write. The imperial court appointed Bu as General Pingdong and granted him the title of Pingtao Hou.

I can't stand watching the first chapter. Seeing how arrogant Lu Bu is, he can destroy you in minutes and you don't even have any strength and you're still pretending to be cool.

At first I thought it was a cool article, but after reading it I realized it was a mindless article. After reading it again, it was just nonsense.

A few suggestions for the author: (This book seems to be okay so far, don't get addicted as soon as it is put on the shelves!) When writing history, you must write it in line with the ancient background. Modern physical training was simply impossible to achieve in ancient times. Just the loss of shoes and the cleaning of sweat were a big problem. In the background of poor materials in the late Han Dynasty, let alone eating meat every day to strengthen the body. And it took our people decades after experiencing the crisis of national subjugation and genocide, coupled with the great revolution of great men, and the influence of the cultural invasion of Western countries, to come up with the slogan of equality between men and women and equality for everyone! Equality for everyone was not accepted in that era. It was not something that could be changed by human power. Moreover, the scholars all came from wealthy families and were filial and honest. So if you write like this, it will become a historical nonsense without any reasonable logic! Once the wisdom of the people in the world is not open, there will be no such thing as equality. The imperial examination system is no longer popular, and disciples from poor families have no official career, let alone common people. If wealthy noble families still control the officialdom, and everyone is arrogant, how can they talk about equality? I really thought that the wealthy families in the late Han Dynasty were vegetarians. Even merchants like Mi Zizhong, who were not very popular in the early and middle periods, could support Liu Bei through several ups and downs, let alone several other wealthy families!

Forget about the rest, Liu Biao entered Jingzhou and controlled it for more than ten years. Before Liu Biao's death, Cao Cao didn't dare to take action in Jingzhou. No matter how powerful the Yuan family was, it was impossible for him to take down Liu Biao alone. The Yuan family is great, but Liu Biao is inferior? Liu Biao himself is from the clan, and he was also a famous talent when he was young. He needs status and means, and he is still the Jingzhou Mu appointed by the imperial court. The Yuan family can take it personally, which is even more outrageous than playing family.

Ahead, too ahead, take 10,000 steps back, forget about being ahead, why do you still use the nobles to deal with the nobles? You are not afraid of being stabbed, the nobles are all shazi... The protagonist is too bad, and it doesn't feel like a historical novel.

Isn't he trying to break away from the plot in Jingke's book? His writing style is not very good. .

Mindlessly transferring the entire modern system to ancient times is the most common mistake that writers of history make.

Don't call a bunch of bastards into special forces. It is true that they are brave and fierce, but they are not good soldiers. The average intelligence and discipline are far behind, which cannot be improved in two or three months. Jumping more than a dozen ships and attacking and killing two thousand Han troops before being discovered. How many months of assault training can this be accomplished? That would only be possible if the Santoku Brandenburg troops or the US imperial seals traveled through. In addition, the time traveler masters the industrial chain of state-owned enterprises in the capital of the Han Dynasty, and the level of productivity that can be achieved within 5 years is equivalent to the early stage of the Industrial Revolution. You can mass-produce double-barreled or revolving shotguns, paper-shell bullets with primers, and use bamboo-reinforced concrete (or three-component soil) watchtowers (it doesn't have to be too high-end, just refer to the size of Jinchuan). It's completely a situation where one man can be a hundred men. The author is advised to look up the history of Tsarist Russia's expansion in Central Asia and Siberia. In the historical Battle of Yaksa, the Manchu Qing Dynasty used its overwhelming force to attack a wooden-walled settlement defended by hundreds of militia groups (irregular troops). The siege lasted for more than five months, and the defenders surrendered after running out of ammunition and food. The various great Khans in Siberia and Central Asia were even more unbearable, and they were all crushed by colonial pioneers like the Mao Xiong.

With a historical figure as the protagonist, the most difficult thing is how to write after taking control of one's own destiny.

Don't copy modern concepts and systems to ancient times. The appropriate ones are the best.

The dialogue gives a secondary feel, without any sense of history.

Give me a group number and bring your brothers to chat with you

Since the pacification of Xiliang, half of it has been hydrology. I wonder if there is any record of the Qiang named Bater in history? If so, what did he do? Why write it without you? And the Xiongnu clan chiefs, what are they for? What kind of advancement and application has been made to the theme of "recovering Liangzhou" now that I have written it? Will you also take a group of unknown water in Kanto later?

The author will listen to the advice, but don't change the outline. The writing is quite good now!

The author needs to keep working hard, even pirated copies can't see your book 😭

The power of Luoshui, crossing the river in white clothes, killing the king in the street, three shameless things

After reading the first chapter, I kept looking for that paragraph in the author's introduction. . I was attracted by the introduction just to comment on this paragraph, but the author didn't actually write it? ! ! ! What a failure! People who were attracted by the introduction did not know how to continue playing music and dancing. As for my comment: I deposed the emperor in one life and became an ordinary person in another life. In the end, I ended up deposing the emperor and started the game. Didn't I travel through time in vain? ! !

Many people who read historical novels hate the gentry and wealthy families, but the continued continuation of the Han family has an important relationship with them that cannot be erased. There are also many precious books. Even though the palace was burned many times and so many of them could be passed down to future generations, they are indispensable. If we look at the productivity of ancient times and live by the sky, how can people have the leisure to learn and develop without some people exploiting other people? The progress of society has never relied on the people at the bottom. We must face up to the fact that people are born into three, six or nine grades (not by birth). If you are just a brick, you can only play the role of a brick. No matter how unwilling you are, you must have the ability to be unwilling. Zhu Yuanzhang is just one. Princes and generals have the ability to be peaceful, and only a few people can achieve it.

It's well written, it just depends on whether the author can stick to it or not.

From the beginning to Dong Zhuo's execution, it is very exciting. There is no need to consider the rest.

After finishing reading, I feel that the writing is okay and not poisonous. After all, novels are meant to pass the time, so it's okay to be serious and sophisticated.

The author is completely consistent with my views on brainwaves and some historical figures. It was really enjoyable to read 😊😊😊Does Mr. Pig know of any similar good books?

What you write is really wild and unconstrained, awesome

The author's group portrait scene is well written🌹🌹

The writing method couldn't create a three-dimensional villain boss, so the author had to create a reverse one. Is it difficult? A sneak attack by special forces is acceptable, but the stolen explosives were given to Cao Cao. Is it necessary to make technology diffusion so difficult?

It's beautifully written and logically consistent.

The writing is beautiful, good luck to you, author! More, it's not enough! 🥺🥺🥺