
Mortal: Settled in Mo Mansion at the Beginning
凡人:开局入驻墨府
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- Completed
- Length
- 745k Words
- Genre
- Cultivation
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fantasy Cultivation
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Why don't you take the Mohist woman to cultivate immortality? Do you think readers will like it if it's turned into a ghost and an infernal corpse?
It's not written like a novel, but like a diary
The author doesn't know how to use golden fingers
The protagonist's golden finger can download everything about people with high favorability, including talents, spiritual roots, skills, knowledge of skills and even cultivation. The protagonist, because his natural talent and spiritual roots are not bad, he also said that the sect will have his foundation building pill and he can enter the foundation building with one pill. The success rate is very high, but for the sake of the Taoist monk, Han Yunzhi's brother decided to go Bloody Forbidden Land, well, in fact, the previous paragraph is not nonsense, because of the nature of the author's golden finger, and the protagonist's subsequent incident of destroying Han Li and Nangong Wan. The protagonist said this, saying that the plot will progress the same with or without Nangong Wan, but it is not as important as the Qingyuan Sword Technique in Han Li's hand. Emm, then why don't you replace it at this time? You went through the plot in place of Han Li and took over Nangong Wan's body. Her first man, if not a high opinion, at least she had a favorable impression. Didn't you say that you can download her cultivation in the golden elixir period and your cultivation in the next foundation period and later stage will be no problem, or do you mean that you can't go on like this? Then don't give gold fingers to this kind of person. You have to give gold fingers to awesome people and keep the protagonist's level down. If you say that there will be a later stage, Han Xianzun will watch it, but you also write that Nangong Wan is not important or even as important as Qing Yuan Sword Jue. Besides, fans like you are basically bad, why do you care about that kind of thing?
It is recommended to have more female protagonists. Recommended collection: Nangong Wan, Xin Ruyin and Xiaomei, Dong Xuan'er, Chen Qiaoqian, Hong Fu, Zhong Weiniang and her master Jiang Yun, Nishang Fairy, Zi Ling and her mother Zhou Yuan, Fan Jingmei,
It is recommended to have more female protagonists. Recommended collection: Nangong Wan, Xin Ruyin and Xiaomei, Dong Xuan'er, Chen Qiaoqian, Hong Fu, Zhong Weiniang and her master Jiang Yun, Nishang Fairy, Zi Ling and her mother Zhou Yuan, Fan Jingmei, Zhuo Ruting, Yuan Yao, Yanli, Mrs. Wen, Ling Yuling and her mother Wen Qing, Yin Yue, Bing Feng, Han Zhi Xian, Mei Ning, Wen Si Yue, Liu Yu, Bing Po Fairy, Mu Peiling, Bai Yaoyi, Yuan Cha Saint, Bao Hua Saint, Dai Er, Black Phoenix Fairy, Jin Yue, Xian Xian, Liu Le'er, Bai Suyuan
If Han Paopao doesn't lick, I will! It tastes like this!
Qidian really limits the author's performance, why don't you post it to a moderator?
Mortal flow is difficult to write. It has to be both plain and climax. I still remember how good it was when I killed Doctor Mo. I also had doubles when I broke through the foundation building. Our protagonist is too stable, and Goldfinger is really strong.
It's one of the few books with good logic among mortals. It just looks a bit like a running account. The protagonist doesn't have to worry about cultivation. I hope the author can organize the story line a little better. Now comes the plot of the Sea of Stars. If the teleportation array is not broken, it will probably lead to the failure of the master. I hope the author will write more plots about the golden elixir to Yuanying, otherwise it will really become a running story. Come on.
You don't need many resources to practice, so you have to expose yourself by being some kind of villain.
Unable to understand the protagonist's behavior
If you want to download the spiritual root, can't you just wait until you are about to break through to become a god? Wouldn't it be good to get a Tianling root yourself in the early stage? And if you deliberately lower your level, you can download the cultivation level. During the Qi training period, it is normal to upgrade quickly, right? What is the protagonist doing?
At present, I feel that I can go up to the sky all the time, to the God Realm, the Holy Realm, the Chaos Realm, and the Hongmeng Realm. . . Keep going up
Watching the protagonist is like a bear breaking a stick
Brother Han, is it really impossible to cultivate as an immortal without spiritual roots?
Not only does the author not add updates, he also dares to delete updates!
The writing is very good, and I use the treasure to push down the mortals: I am a Taoist and a cultivator.
I think Goldfinger can only add insights, spiritual roots and physical constitution. This can not only allow the protagonist to level up reasonably and quickly, but also reasonably suppress the protagonist's progress, so as to prevent the plot from going crazy and ending prematurely.
The women in the harem are all chickens. They fall in love with women whenever they see them. Are they still cultivating immortality?
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Where did the protagonist's golden finger come from? How did he travel through time? It's best to fill in these pitfalls, don't just finish it.
Writing is too slow. How about asking AI to help speed up the progress?