Douluo Dalu: It Begins with the Martial Soul's Time Worm

It's a pity that the only supporting role in Douluo that was acceptable in the end was Yan Jin, and even her younger brother was not good. I felt that her sister was dead and she immediately rebelled. Finally, when I realized that the protagonist's plan was successful, he was worthy of being Mr. Amon. I felt that he was capricious. In the end, Yu Xiao just entered the divine world. I don't want to comment, I can only I personally don't like this character, and I have a lot of opinions about him. After reading the beginning of "Dou Po Chapter", I felt that I was too flattering to Xiao Yan. To be honest, I feel that this character is just like Tang San, and then there is a clone dressed as Xiao Yan's maid. I can understand the protagonist, but I feel that this kind of scene has a poor viewing experience. So I really can't stand the fighting chapter. Overall, the flaws outweigh the merits. Except for the last point, Douluo can be said to be very exciting. I wish you write better and better in the future.

From the perspective of Douluo fan fiction, this is a unique book. First of all, the writing style is relatively sophisticated, not at the embarrassing level of most Douluo fans. Different from the scientific research flow of Soul Guidance Horror Beast and Blue Silver Grass, this book is more inclined to the behind-the-scenes flow, but it is not completely hidden behind the scenes. The development strength is hidden in the early stage, but the strength in the later stage is enough to make a blockbuster. There are all the fight scenes that should be done to show the strength, the writing of the sage in front of others is not inconsistent, and the writing of the intellectual battle scenes is also reasonable, and there are no major flaws. The cool points about Douluo have basically been written down, but the occasional choice of words and sentences still needs to be pondered. As for the characterization of the protagonist, I have not watched Lord of Mysteries, but I have deeply experienced the terror of Amon here (who knows when the person closest to you will take out a monocle and put it on). The author based on the prototype of Amon, Lord of Mysteries, and merged it with the soul of the indigenous Amon, giving it a little more humanity, which is quite good. The absence of emotional scenes is a plus point, and the writing style is also a plus. Most of the Douluo fandom writers are not good at writing, but they like to write extremely awkward emotional scenes. I can tell that the author of this book is not good at this aspect either. Yan Jing, who is described the most in the book, is cute but still lacks spirituality. But the author avoided this aspect, and another reason is that using Amon as the protagonist is not suitable for writing emotional dramas... Finally, the space is limited. Judging from the current progress, the story of Douluo Dalu, which is more than one million words, will be over. This may be a big regret for book friends who are only dedicated to Douluo fans, but more people will be attracted by Amon's next story. Still looking forward to the fight...

666, even your own apprentice is parasitic, you Amon has pure blood.

Xiao Yan's character was okay when he was a child. Those who said that Xiao Yan relied on his talent and arrogance to look down on others when he was a child, so he was criticized after losing his talent, are all fan fictions. Payne here thinks that Xiao Yan treats their servants as gently and as before (this is under the premise that they don't know that Xiao Yan's talent has been restored), and even feels sorry for Xiao Yan's loss of talent. Xiao Yan Losing his talent and being ridiculed is a must-have characteristic of a potato protagonist. Lin Dong was ridiculed and bullied by his tribe, and Yuan Zun turned into a satirist; Your book is the best Douluo fan I have ever seen. I have always praised and recommended this book in post bars and other book review sections. What I like most about this book is that it restores the original character, whether it is an enemy or not. I hope the same is true for Douban Chapter. I personally think that Xiao Yan has some shortcomings in the early stage. After a series of growth, he is decisive in killing, taking soft rather than hard, and attaches great importance to kindness. Also, his intelligence has been certified by Tuoshe Ancient Emperor. Talents such as learning ability, creativity, fighting talent, and ability to break situations and seize opportunities basically belong to the ceiling of the Dou Qi continent, but his physical talent is average

How do you post Amon's monocle expression?

To be honest, Gou Sanjia is still not suitable as a martial spirit for Douluo fans who write about the Lord of Mysteries. The most suitable one is actually the Dragon of Fantasy of the audience.

Damn it, the little medical fairy has no background and relies on his own cultivation, and he still talks about friendship. The ending was not good in the first place, and why did you kill him?

Please follow up and read, please everyone🙏🏻. The number of follow-up readings determines whether there is a recommendation spot.

Douluo is well written, but the fighting spirit is out of place. After all, Xiao Yan is a decent protagonist, famous enough, and always has a status in the hearts of book friends, but Amon is a behind-the-scenes conspiracy person. Whether he is an enemy or a friend, it is a conflict that is difficult to reconcile. To write it well, you probably have to write a copy of your own world. I suggest writing a new book, a version with weakened abilities, about the world view of film and television. There is enough material, and most of the main and supporting characters are not likeable, so you can just mess with it.

It's so amazing. It's the first time I've seen a fan novel that instead of forcibly reducing the intelligence of the original characters, it actually increases their intelligence. I can only say that the average IQ of Douluo World is really worrying. The author can't continue writing without adding some intelligence to them. Otherwise, if they still have the same intelligence level as the original novel, Amon will kill them casually.