The Law of the Supreme God Game

There is a kind of beauty like a bad version of Huang Tao... I hope to see you in future recommendations.

Male protagonist

The story is a good story, the plot is smooth and normal, but the writing style is a bit naive, and you can see the feeling of trying to imitate the blood of the kingdom, but the overall style is more frivolous. The idea of ​​the flesh and blood technology tree is very unique, and depending on the situation, players will appear in the later stages of the plot. I hope you can grasp it later. The pacing is a little bad, too fast, but considering that it is a new author, it is understandable. On the whole, it is considered to be more of a grain than hay.

You can take a look at the current map.

My whole life, I have been walking on thin ice. Do you think I can make it to the other side?

The author could really read the novels in the front row of light novels and learn the rhythm and layout. At first glance, I thought it was from the Western Fantasy Zone. The light novel is famous for its volume. If you write it like this, not to mention it will be a sudden death, at least it will be an unknown one. The first book is very important to the author, especially if you are a full-time writer. You would rather work slowly and carefully than be rough. I can't say much about 1234. After all, I'm just a reader. I can only give you some pointers here to satisfy myself ()

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I can't stand it any longer. The author of "About to Have It" is a talented person. I can't help but laugh.

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What you are about to own is still less than 9/10

I asked if the main character had any unique abilities that no one knew about. Don't tell me that all abilities are acquired locally, and everyone's identity and feet are known to others.

The dialogues and descriptions of the characters' behaviors and psychology are too awkward, and not very enjoyable. The plot is like a running account, with compromise and cooperation all the way. When I read the introduction, I thought it was an emperor's parallel stream, but it turned out to be a clone. Also, I seem to have posted it once. Did the author delete it?

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About to have one? Really own it!

The protagonist is a tyrant. He uses more than a hundred little girls to make candles. It's not enough to make just one, but he also mass-produces them. It's a mess.

It's so beautiful. I can't stand it anymore. I want a monthly pass. It turns out I don't have a monthly pass. That's okay.

A shout every day helps the author to resurrect: The soul is back... 𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌 The soul is back... Driving the long whip and riding the six bridle... 𓀌𓀎𓀠𓀤𓀫 The soul is back... Over the mountain Sing... Come back... Soul comes back... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠 soul comes back... Sing high and triumphant... We share the same robe with glory... 𓀋𓀠𓀤𓀥 soul comes back... Soul comes back

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It feels good, the only drawback is that the writing feels a bit... White? But I'm an amateur reader and can't give you any advice.

It can be seen that the author's current writing style is relatively immature, and the plot is a bit... Dull, especially the war scenes, which are a bit incomprehensible. It may be that the environment is a little less background, and the expressiveness of the characters is not enough. However, there are really many jokes, the creativity is also good, and it is quite interesting. At least I am looking forward to the development of the subsequent plot. The author can refer to the description and plot arrangement of the head author, and look forward to the improvement of the author's writing and the growth of plot design, come on!

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It feels better if you can't see it, but it's depressing if you can see it.

Didn't you say that the first V will be released today?