Ge Xiaolun Under One Person

In summary, the idea is pretty good, but it seems like it was written while drunk. It feels like a layer of bricks is sandwiched between a multi-layered cake, too much shit!

There is no detailed description, just like reading an outline. Secondly, the language is confusing and rambling, and the outline is not explained clearly. It is really confusing to look at. I can only say that there is quite a lot of room for improvement!

I read the latest chapter intermittently, and this book is like a roller coaster The first ten chapters are uphill, and then downhill. If you like to read the comment section first, you should listen to the author's advice and jump to the second volume. It is really dissuaded The beginning of the second volume also persuades me to quit. If it weren't for my 100 yuan reward, this book would have been abandoned I read it in a hurry, and I finished it slowly. Is this a very new and trendy thing, or is it overturned

When writing novels, you really shouldn't show off your own views and thoughts. You don't even understand the real world when you're hiding personal stuff. You just pretended to do it in just a few sentences? Almost done

It looks like it was written by two personalities, backwards and forwards, and it looks a bit like vomiting blood.

Brother, stop writing. It's really a mess. Stop writing. Go out and see beautiful women, relax and feel bad!

What is this? She is babbling. Writing about anything and everything is completely self-indulgent, and you don't care whether readers can keep up with your unbridled imagination. No one can understand what else to write 😂

The gods among the super gods have already skipped the step of using biological energy to drive dark energy. Are they going backwards? There must be too much private knowledge about angel justice. Yan was communicating with Zhui about the internal affairs of the Super Seminary. Despite being held accountable by Kesha, Yan went to Earth to ask if he was willing to return to the order of justice. 🙂What kind of autonomy is there? If Taotie is allowed to fight freely, the earth will be gone in less than an hour.

The creativity is OK, but the plot is not, and the reading is not coherent.

The creativity is actually pretty good, but the writing is terrible.

I really don't know what the author thinks. Now that Ge Xiaolun has awakened the super gene, his invincible body is immune to attacks below nuclear. What kind of A-level and S-level attacks can he use against porcelain nuclear weapons? Even Taotie's big mecha uses a flame-level weapon. It was Ge Xiaolun who broke through the defense with the God-killing Martial Arts. Ge Xiaolun stood and let them hit him, but they couldn't even kill Ge Xiaolun.

The writing is really messy. My eyes are dazzled when I read it. I can't stand it anymore. I can't stand it anymore. I retreat.

It's serious that you're carrying private goods, what the hell?

The introduction is wrong. He, Ge Xiaolun, does not have the qualifications of the Lord God, but he is the Lord God, the future Lord God of the Milky Way, the kind he will definitely become. The gods of science and technology recognize that genes will not die anyway. There is plenty of time to wait for you to grow up. If you are beaten to death, you will have to wait for your atoms to reorganize and come back to life.

This is the novel with the greatest room for improvement that I have ever read.

In this book review section, the book isn't that bad, right? Shu Huang can read it and won't accept refutation.

Fortunately, after more than ten chapters, I started to guess the riddles. Too many homophones made me dizzy, and I felt that the focus was wrong. I couldn't stand it even before I saw it on the shelves. Don't be obscene, okay?

Looking at the title of the book, I thought that Ge Xiaolun lived under one person, but the content is like a narrative.

There are too many originals, and it can't keep up with the brain circuit. What do you think? In the beginning, they were almost all originals.

YY is too serious. I don't know what the protagonist's brain is like. Especially the process of making the heroic core by myself at the beginning. It was just a simple YY and it was completed in one go. I imagined that the concept of using the Void Engine that has not been turned on to increase energy turned into a heroic core system.

Even though the super gods are so cool, the Deno conspiracy theory still endures. Nowadays, old people and young people like to write about their own Qing Dynasty in books. Is it still alive? It's been a hundred years, but the braid in my heart still can't be cut off. "Those who are not of my race must have different minds." As soon as it came out, I knew that Tazi was going to conspire with the Super Seminary again, and sure enough. This time there is something new, about why Liu Chuang, one of the three great gods, is completely a gangster. As everyone knows, before Liu Chuang awakened the gene, he was an ordinary person, and his identity as an ordinary person could only be changed by himself. And the Super Seminary does not have a script in hand, how do they know that Styx is coming to invade? If Liu Chuang is in a high position and holds great power, the elders will say: Look, the Super Theological Seminary really has evil intentions, and letting Liu Chuang hold great power is clearly to alienate China.

After looking at it for a long time, the idea was pretty good, but I just couldn't understand it.

Is it a harem? There are so many amazing and famous beauties, if you don't accept them, this fandom will look boring 😃

I don't quite understand. The energy levels of one person and a super god are so different, how can they be integrated? Isn't this two children's pissing day? How to build an antimatter energy station with this hand-operated generator blueprint?