I Am Ma Su, at Jieting

I have written dozens of chapters about the Battle of Jieting, and I am still planning to expand it to more than 200 chapters. Is Jieting important during the Battle of Chibi and Guandu? Even Lao Luo is not that good. You are like playing a game and getting stuck in the street booth...

Clearly there is a fundamental error in the outline of this book. I only know that there is a political struggle within Shu Han, but I don't analyze what they are earning? The only major event in the Shu Han Dynasty was the Northern Expedition. Facing the Northern Expedition, we can know that there were several Northern Expeditions. The local factions do not support the Northern Expedition? I don't think it's supported, but can we still do the Northern Expedition so many times? It means they are nothing. Does the Dongzhou faction support the Northern Expedition? I think that during the first and second Northern Expeditions, they might support the subsequent Northern Expeditions if they had the chance. I don't think the Dongzhou faction would. But there were so many Northern Expeditions, which shows that they are nothing. Does the Yuan Cong Department support the Northern Expedition? I think they definitely support it, but they definitely want to attack Wu State more. After all, Liu Guanzhang died directly or indirectly in the hands of Wu State. Then why didn't they attack Soochow? On the one hand, the Yuan Cong faction knew the general situation better, and on the other hand, the prime minister was really strong. What did the Jingzhou faction say? The Jingzhou faction said it depends on what the prime minister said. Abba Abba Abba. Also why do I think it is the Yuan Cong Shi body rather than the local school and Dongzhou school. You will know why the Shu Han did not make the Northern Expedition in the later period. The second part of the mistake is why a general must start from a small soldier? The person who grows from a soldier to a general is like a crucian carp crossing a river. Is it true that only a small soldier can become a general? Putting aside that, why didn't Cao Zhen start as a soldier? There are countless nobles who have become famous generals. Is it the same path in Huashan since ancient times? The third mistake: I read before that Ma Di was the leader of the Jingzhou faction, which is correct, but this was based on excluding the prime minister. Does Ma Su need to consider how the Jingzhou faction operates? Isn't there a prime minister? If you can't even figure out the way out for your faction, you would rather believe what is said on the Internet about the struggle between Shu and Han than the Prime Minister. The last sentence, you would rather believe that the internal struggle between Shu and Han was fierce during Zhuge Liang's reign, but you don't believe that I am Qin Shihuang. VI will make you a general for 50 yuan.

It's really hard to self-defeat. The author really relies on imagination to write about politics... No matter how much an elephant self-defiles, it can't avoid the impact of its huge size on its surroundings. As the successor of the prime minister, I don't want to use my merits to establish prestige. Instead, I think about the inexplicable factional struggle... Brother, do you understand that military is an extension of politics? Military itself is a political means. Besides, as the successor of the Prime Minister, your job is to be the arbiter, not the vanguard of a certain faction🤮🤮

According to Mr. Tian Yuqing's research, the factional conflicts within the Shu Han were almost eliminated during Zhuge Liang's first Northern Expedition. There are always folk historians who like to talk about factional struggles.

The writing is good, but you want to taint yourself for no reason. You are tainting yourself under the hands of Prime Minister Zhuge of the Shu Han Dynasty. It is really poisonous. The Shu Han is going to die. How can there be so much internal fighting! The author thought of the chapter names very carefully, but one chapter is finished in seven pages. This is very uncomfortable. Have you ever seen any high-end author do this? It's all done by the fool Quanqin. Why do you want such neat chapter names when you are ready to fool around? You make readers unhappy, but you still want to feel happy? To be honest, you can't cultivate loyal fans like this, so be it.

Ma Su wants to taint himself. What political capital does Ma Su have and what capital does other people have? Who do you want to show yourself to? No matter how I think about it, I can only think that you think the Jingzhou faction wants to destroy Shu Han and is ready to commit suicide and run away.

Why are you still in the water? My dear, I have almost written about the second Northern Expedition. Are you still running around in circles 😥

The last chapter is just random. Without seeing any gunpowder, Zhang He was able to gather an army when encountering a landslide caused by a strange weapon and blowing up the camp?! Do you think Zhang He is a god? Or is the Wei army a heavenly soldier and a heavenly general?

The author is really speechless about killing four birds with one stone 1. The swing between two cities is just that there is this letter in history, and it does not necessarily mean that people are really swinging; after all, if someone can appoint a high position on the front line, it may not be clear to future generations whether it is to show weakness to the enemy or to be sincere. Moreover, the protagonist only has objects such as helmets. The objects can be forged without the most important heads. As long as the Wei army stabilizes the city lord and does not let the gastritis attack quickly, your street pavilion will be in danger. The general is not here, and elite soldiers must be sent to protect the general and escort the items. It is really difficult to do another wave. This plan is very unstable, and it is difficult to tell without asking the prime minister. 2. If you want to learn and choose to delegate, the opposite faction is offended by you, and the people in the same faction don't recognize you just now. If you go down and join other factions in taking the position, is he willing to let you sit back in this position? It's even more nonsense to make friends with gastritis. All three factions don't like you. How can you still study at the bottom and go back? 3. The political influence is very poor. You are at least the leader of the younger generation of the factions. Even if you get a high position in the future, how can the Sichuan faction obey you? The Sichuan faction is a local snake, and you can't kill the local faction now that their base camp is in Sichuan. In the future, when the prime minister dies, you will take over the banner of developing productivity and cultivating scientific talents. With such a record, will Liu Chan dare to delegate power to you? 4. The character design is strange. You dare not stick to one side, but you dare to use unstable plans to influence the Northern Expedition. I'm surprised. It's not like every toilet in Warcraft requires a commander to clear it. The support of the Ma family and factions allows you to have loyal direct descendants. Your identity as a time traveler allows you to recruit talents before you know it. You have enough manpower to guard the place. You can even sell favors to the Jingzhou faction to get some people to come over for gold plating. Isn't it obvious which one is more stable and which one is easier to succeed? Your act of grabbing credit almost puts a knife in the Prime Minister's hand. Whether the punishment will be used again in the future depends almost entirely on the Prime Minister. You dare to hold your life in the Prime Minister's hands, but you are unwilling to tell the Prime Minister the identity of the time traveler. Even if you make up a nonsense, Yimeng has learned the new and forgotten the old. It is easy to win the Prime Minister's trust by saying that the main figures in the Wei State died at the same time. As long as you tell the Prime Minister that these learning problems are easy to solve, the Prime Minister will definitely not put you in a high position in the early stage. In the mid-term, you will find more talents to receive the Prime Minister's training together. You will learn more and better than you at the grassroots level. This wave of operations is strange anyway. I think it kills four enemies with one stone. This is just like a game. You will be given a strong character to try out first, and then you will be reduced to level 0 and have to practice again; but you have laid the groundwork and described it for a long time. Everyone has developed a sense of development for this character. Now it is difficult for people to accept it. After defeating the enemy and achieving great achievements in the climax, there is a negative incentive. The combination of the two makes the reading experience very unpleasant. It is difficult to set a goal in the plot arrangement of your fall and predicament. It is difficult for everyone here to set a target and revenge goal, and give readers a clear goal to defeat this person and future excitement. If you return to the top, you will only slowly get back your previous things, not to mention that you gave up on your own, so the original enjoyment is not enough. Moreover, you are short in terms of code and the description is too detailed to quickly get the protagonist out of the predicament. I feel that the results after you put it on the shelves will be ugly. Unless you write brilliantly in the next "Three Sessions Trial". It can establish the image of Zhuge Liang, write the feeling of being both an enemy and a friend of the Sichuan faction, draw out the allies of this faction and establish the character. It is best to have a sense of intense conflict that is unexpected by our readers, and give the protagonist a clear goal that makes people want to watch. If you can do this, just think I farted a series of loud farts. If you can't do this, I suggest you review the outline again.

Who can you expose yourself to, Ma Su? To Zhuge Liang?