Naruto: The Divine Art of a Hundred Refinements

There is a problem with the plot arrangement, the characters were not written well at the beginning and the plot fell apart. Capricious, bully the weak and fear the strong, and the inferior will overcome the superior. Villains don't look like villains, and decent guys don't look like decent guys. Shuangwen is not like Shuangwen. Eunuch, please re-open a book.

It's written as if the protagonist has a lot of brains, but nothing he does is thought through.

The plot arrangement is unreasonable. During the war, you are called the commander, and you are neither humble nor arrogant. You can summon a ten-meter-long snake with an inexplicable amount of chakra. The root makes inexplicable redundant movements, and then it inexplicably wants to kill the protagonist. What the hell, the conflict is too deliberate, don't engage in that kind of pretentious slap-in-the-face plot from the retro period. After reading a few chapters, there are so many flaws, the author still has to work hard.

If you want to be a villain, then be a villain. If you want to survive, then survive. Why did you suddenly go to a duel with Kyuubi and save Minato? Is there any benefit? I stopped watching it after I went to challenge Kyuubi. Maybe there is no comment. Haha

He's completely like an idiot. With Orochimaru, you just moved Orochimaru out. Why do you have to force yourself to face Danzo? He has no strength and loves to show off.

Shen Ji Bai Lian, you didn't write his character at all, man,

Well, two words of evaluation, rubbish

It's outrageous. At the beginning, only fifteen people were transporting supplies, but Suna Ninja dispatched more than two hundred ninjas. The original article said that more than 180 people were killed, and some of them escaped into the mountains. Are you planning to fight a dozen against one? Two hundred people, in the case of a sneak attack, each with one ninjutsu, I don't believe that fifteen of the protagonists can survive. Only the captain knows the outcome of the mission to send someone to death. The outrageous Aburame Jounin also said that you, the transportation captain, took it all and know what the outcome will be. But he wanted to die, so did the unknowing transport team members want to die? Also, since everyone is surrounding the protagonist, even if he is suddenly attacked by ten thousand snakes, how can the protagonist survive? Ten thousand snakes can't tell the difference between friend and foe, and in an encirclement, I don't believe that there are 200 people without a jounin to lead the team. Can't the protagonist be replaced before death? The most important thing is that the scroll explodes, and the protagonist must be within the range. Also, I want to know if there is not a sentient ninja among these two hundred people? I was hit with bread and there was no reaction at all. The commander of the opposite side, Orochimaru, must have arrived as well. The leader of the Suna ninja team did not think about how to withdraw first, but first talked about it and thanked the opposite side for the supplies. The most outrageous thing is that the author An said that those who died were all elite puppet troops. I was confused. I didn't just grab supplies and then rob my family.

Man-machine integration

This idea is indeed very good, but the author's writing skills are not strong enough, and he cannot quite grasp the characters in the original work. The secondary creation is too superficial and taken for granted, and the dialogue of the characters is too thin, but a small amount of thought is devoted to ambiguity.