The Heavens: from the Age of Stars

Before he died, he told the school beauty that they should go their separate ways, and told the so-called "love rival" monitor, "I know, I will stay away from her." After failing, I feel that the school beauty is a good match for me🤔️ I even tolerated the vulgar beginning, and I just quit in the third chapter, comment, goodbye👋

It's already the Galaxy Era, why don't you go to the Galaxy Emperor's world for further training 😏

The historical trend of Yangshen Weekend and the Early Qian Dynasty is very similar to that of the late Ming and early Qing dynasties. The Da Qian rebelled from the east, while the Manchu and Qing Dynasties were in the northeast, and the Manchu and Qing were in the south of Dingding. The killings were too heavy, and the same was true for Da Gan. When Shen Ji wrote it, I felt that Da Qian was Dai Qing with a new skin. In this volume of Yang Shen, I basically planned to write a fantasy fairy tale version of the late Ming and early Qing dynasties, depicting the all-round collapse of an empire.

If this book doesn't hit me, I'll eat it up 🤫

Those who are not time travelers are commonly known as aborigines. Colleagues can watch it according to their own preferences.

I thought it started with the Galaxy Emperor 😂😂😂

I lost all my brains. I started with a woman. At first I said I had no idea about the school beauty, but I wanted to pursue him soon. Why don't you write a world-traveling novel without a female protagonist?

Is it possible to write a novel even if you are not so poisonous?

I'm convinced, you're a pure novice, full of poisonous points, a lot of old routines, deliberately filtering out readers, right? You haven't screened anyone yet, and they've all run away.

"Yang Shen"

Don't point at an idiom and use it randomly! After reading two chapters, "gags" appeared several times. . Illiteracy is the deadliest thing when it comes to culture! Baidu's definition is for you: Gagqie Pronunciation chā kē dǎ hùn  Explanation Ke: ancient opera term; Gag: refers to the expressions and movements of the people in the play; Ji: joke; joke; Ji: use humorous language to make fun of each other. Refers to inserting some funny actions and witty language into the play to make the audience laugh. Now also refers to joking actions or words inserted into solemn occasions. Also known as "Sa Ke Da Ji", "Mix Ke San Ji". The protagonist deserts in class and sleepwalks. Can this idiom be used to describe it? ? ?

In the past there were ten-step saints, but now there are low-strength yangshen.

It can only be said that it is a very old-fashioned routine. In addition to the hero saving the beauty, the hero saves the beauty, and there must be a villain in the class. Ten years ago, this book was okay, but now it can only be said to be a flop.

This was probably written by intelligent AI. The writing is too poor.

It feels so cliche, that the rich and powerful Bai Fumei can go to school with a poor and powerless orphan.

If you want to enter the heavens, don't write about women. Writing about women is a waste of readers. More books with female protagonists in Zhutianliu are abandoned. Having a female protagonist is a disadvantage rather than a necessity. It would be better without a female protagonist. Or don't go out of your way to describe the female protagonist. The better you portray the female protagonist, the more mistakes you will make.

This name made me think it was the world of the Emperor of the Galaxy. I was looking forward to it in vain. Moreover, the beginning is still the old love rival routine from ten years ago. I am speechless😑

If you don't set up a person who makes enemies for the beautiful class girl at the beginning, you won't be able to write a book, right

Is it interesting to copy the settings for the Galaxy Emperor?

My personal preference is towards a harem, one heroine per world, and I don't have to worry about the Shura field, which is cool, hehe.

It's a mess, the preface doesn't match the subtitles, even the stitching monsters are better than you.

I can only say that the writing is too poor, the storyline is unsatisfactory, I have no desire to read it, and I don't want to see Dou Po anymore.

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Good guy, there are a lot of poisonous points. If you are not interested in women, don't write a heroine. You can watch it without a heroine, but in Dou Po, why don't you play Medusa in a supporting role? She is also a supporting character who has not been written in the original work. It is simply amazing. The plot of giving away a daughter is simply poisonous to Shennong. There is also the licking to relieve inflammation. It is simply incredible. I can't imagine what kind of brain the author is using to write such an extremely poisonous plot. . . .

Make a picture. Seeing that others have already done it, I'd better make a picture

Is this all a routine from 10 years ago?

Who is as beautiful as Medusa in the Dou Po Snake tribe? Give me a daughter

There are still more than 200 years, I can't wait any longer

Author, can you write a 180-year-old "Emperor"?