Start with Ling Zhifu and Add Some Cultivation Skills

Let me just complain, what kind of chamber of commerce is that? Is that stupid? The protagonist knows how to practice elixirs, and then others will kill him. If you compete with the Chen family, why don't you hunt down other people's geniuses and seize other people's territory? You spend so much effort to chop down a person who is said to be a slave. Is that ancient insect invincible? The protagonist knows how to make elixirs. If the Chen family had known about it, they would have already taken control of it. If they didn't know about it, it means they don't have the same intention. In this case, what they want is not to win over, but to kill him as soon as possible. Are all the chamber of commerce like fools?

Is the cost of your alchemy too high? The cost is 35 spirit stones and the sale is only 70 spirit stones. How can the success rate be 50% to break even?

Dozens of locusts destroyed three acres of spiritual rice in one moment! If you come in the evening, leave right after eating! There is no need to farm in the world of immortality

It's all between farmers. Where can there be so many conflicts? It's too deliberate.

After reading ten chapters, can the dialogue be streamlined? There is so much nonsense in the fight!

I want to go to the head of the Li family. If I capture the protagonist, I'll first chop off both of the protagonist's legs and control them. Anyway, I just have the skills to practice elixirs.

I have already practiced Qi for 8 levels, but my longevity is still 90.

Most people can't control themselves when making plug-ins. Basically, in the later stage, the author will be under pressure.

The subject matter is good. I hope the author will not write a female protagonist for the male protagonist. If he wants a woman, he can accept a few women at the end. The male protagonist can get rid of the poison in his body as soon as possible and hide his cultivation. If the Chen family discovers the talent of the male protagonist, then the Chen family will definitely not let the male protagonist leave. There will be many ways to control marriages. If the male protagonist accepts a daughter of the Chen family because of this, then It's really disgusting. If you write it like that, it can only prove that the male protagonist is a licker. He will change the map as his cultivation gradually improves. It is really not good to have a woman. It is a drag and has no practical use. Like those who write about how beautiful the woman is, how good the figure is, there is no use, whether she can have amorous feelings, can't the male protagonist be written in such a way that he is not moved by beauty, and is dedicated to cultivating Taoism? If you can't bear this temptation, why should you become an immortal? There are also novels about cultivating immortals. Even if you want a woman, you can't ascend until you ascend. When your cultivation is low, it will be a drag. I don't know what to think. It's because the women in the immortal world are not beautiful, or the women in the immortal world are not high in cultivation. It's okay to write female protagonists in the immortal world. At least the female protagonist has a high starting point, so it's not a drag. I hope the author doesn't want the male protagonist to have a woman before he ascends.

Killing style plug-in, I will change my profession later

The main reason is that I don't understand the level classification. For example, the second-level high-level formation is almost as powerful as the middle stage of Qi refining, and the first-level high-level elixir can be used in the later stage of Qi refining, and the Foundation Establishment Pill is the second-level high-level elixir. What do you think? Then, a family only has one Foundation Establishment period. Foundation Establishment Pills are too cheap. There are only ten or eight. If you want to write that Foundation Establishment Pills are difficult to obtain, at least they should be fourth-level pills. And there is absolutely no need to divide them into upper, middle, and lower grades.

This type of novel is like a movie. The protagonist has a fantasy before his death. The world revolves around the protagonist. He will succeed in whatever he does. If he does something, it will be worth ten times.

In another week, I will forget about the main character's death.