Dragon Ball: Starting from Adding 1 Combat Power Per Second

There are too few stories and too many personal dramas about the author, which seriously affects reading. No matter which character there is, there are problems with the way of speaking and diction that are seriously inconsistent with Dragon Ball itself. The protagonist's character is contradictory. The original character's character and language are seriously inconsistent (repeat to strengthen the statement🫠). This is the first book that I have abandoned outright since I started reading it. It is also the first book that I was disgusted enough to write a review for your reference. It's so disgusting that I want to find a place to report this book. It may be an overreaction as a Dragon Ball fan.

It looks good, it's fun to play like this 🤓

Brothers, let's exchange pictures

In order to mourn the teacher Akira Toriyama, the world of Chapter 210 and Chapter 211 is crying to send the teacher off. Please forgive me and let our Dragon Ball World see the teacher off.

No. 18

I don't understand why Vegeta was brought to Earth. Isn't it okay to just live there? Frieza also heard it. You can't write it without following the plot, right?

This book is a piece of garbage. The protagonist came to Earth, and as soon as he left the house, he encountered a famous scene. Goku grabbed Raditz, and Piccolo charged up the magic piercing light to kill the cannon. The protagonist went over and stood there for a moment. After taking a move from Piccolo and Sun Wukong's Turtle Style Qigong, he stood there and watched. The process took less than 5 minutes, and he directly won 6 cards. Twenty to thirty thousand words. The psychological description keeps repeating that a lot of rubbish is meaningless, and still dares to lift the pole, and there is also a supermarket that recalls a certain character's life, oops, it only lasts a few seconds in reality, so it is a rubbish hydrology.

Bulma

I looked at the table of contents. You said one second adds 1, and that day means adding 86,400. Your first chapter is 15,000, and your thirty-three chapters are 30,000. So these 33 chapters have not even passed the first day, right?

Can this novel also be a masterpiece? It's all just talk, no level at all, just like a primary school student's composition.

The author made me see the limits of water. Jumping from the first chapter to the tenth chapter has no impact on the plot at all. I can only convince

This is starting from Chapter 50! As other comment areas have said, the first 50 chapters are meant to purify readers. The first 50 chapters can still be retained, and the following poisonous points will not be poisonous points... I personally was purified in Chapter 3, I jumped directly to the beginning of Chapter 50. Advantages: (These are not the only advantages, but the advantages that other authors have are not considered advantages, so I won't mention them more.) 1. The author writes very carefully, and even spent 40 points on the previous chapters, which is really awesome. 2. How should I put it? Maybe it's water, or something else. Anyway, the quality and quantity are not lost. Anyway, this is an advantage. (The quality above alone can actually leave a lot of readers who are short of books, provided that the first 50 chapters have not been purified.) Disadvantages: 1. Is it because the author has read too many fantasy novels or something, and what happens sometimes (the appearance is extremely domineering, the huge breath shatters the void, the breath reaches the sky, the arrogance breaks the sky) and the like? Fortunately, there is no such thing as saying that all the avenues have been wiped out... Anyway, it should be because I have said too many words in fantasy and am too sensitive, so just think of me as a quarrel... 2. The author has written the arrogance, conceit, pride and unruliness of the protagonist as a Saiyan very well. The calm character of the time traveler has not suppressed these...? Example (1). The normal combat power is just over 1 million. I wanted to try Super 4 before I even became Super 1. After the failure, I went to try Super 1. After I failed again, I felt strange that I didn't have enough S cells. I can't change or anything like that, almost a chapter was lost... Afterwards, when I saw the protagonist saying that he was a time traveler, he was self-aware and would not aim too high, I really wanted to laugh when I read it 😅 Example (2). After meeting Xiangpa, the God of Destruction, he was fooling around, saying that you came to the seventh universe to break the law, and that you didn't dare to kill people, etc. His unruly and provocative appearance was right in front of him, and the angel also followed up with inexplicable wisdom and said in a roundabout way. Trying to protect the protagonist with some insignificant rules of the universe, it makes me crazy... 🤔 When they were forced to fight at the same level, they were still talking trash, saying that you only have the position of God of Destruction, why do you think you are strong? While fighting and provoking, I felt that I was very good at the same level. I couldn't beat him in terms of physical skills, energy, etc. Then when someone at the same level turned on the God of Destruction mode, I said that I couldn't afford it and didn't have martial ethics. See how this reveals the author's age, or his IQ? I don't understand the world at all... Does it give you face or confidence when you are put on the same level? It turned out that the protagonist's immortality was outrageous. Xiangpa suddenly transformed into a Ninja Turtle when he met the protagonist's aura, which was quite impressive 🤫 Then the author also wanted to create a threesome with a shameless personality of asking his master to ask the Kame Sennin's martial arts realm. This inconsistency is serious enough. Then the same situation occurred again when fighting the God of Destruction in the ninth dimension. What is this called? Introduction: Look down on the God of Destruction and lick the Turtle Sennin...? 3. In traditional novels, everything is an afterthought, or: the protagonist still doesn't know what will happen to someone in the future because of his decision. This is okay, but as long as this comment area appears, people will basically complain about it. Just remember to fill in the pit. (The above three points of poison are more impressive to me personally. Maybe one will be added who can't write emotional dramas? But it's normal that Longzhu can't write emotional dramas.) Summary: The four female protagonists will not give away daughters (Buma, No. 18, Tentatively No. 21? There is one more that has not appeared yet.) The combat power setting part is non-toxic and rigorous, and too serious minefields will not appear, which is highly recommended by Shu Huang!

Before testing the poison, if you have any doubts, post it first and try to ask and answer it yourself. If you don't answer, you will probably be poisoned to death. One second adds a little bit of combat power, which is about 30 million seconds in a year. So, with more than 30 million combat power in one year, Frieza's 100 million combat power can be achieved in three years. Oh, but if you think about it carefully, the Cell chapter is already tens of billions, and the Muppets chapter directly reaches 700 billion. If you want to defeat the Muppets, it will take ten thousand years. . .

Come on, let's talk about Raditz's measured combat power, which is only 5, and whether his combat power has the element of a shotgun. I don't think so. Either the minimum meter is 5, or the farmer really has a combat power of 5. There is just no shotgun component.

If it weren't for the fact that few people had written on the subject of Dragon Ball, it would have been impossible to get even this result based on the author's level.

Ah, here, the title is 86,000 plus one per second and one day. It was only 15,000 until this day, but it will only be more than 3 billion when it is 100 years old. It is incredibly weak. It seems very strong in the early stage, but it is actually incomparable with others later.

After reading a few chapters, I didn't see any payment because I couldn't stand it anymore. The beginning is really a bit poisonous to me, the character creation is really a bit white, and a Chinese name is forced to be used as a Saiyan name... Vegeta spends most of the show calling Kakarot, and even when asked by others in the Tournament of Power, he still calls him that. Sun Wukong knows that he is Sun Wukong, but he will also respond to the name Kakarot. The protagonist himself has announced his home as Mentalus, and he has to emphasize his Chinese name later. Just say you can't watch this operation.

In your words, a guy like Raditz has become a peerless genius no worse than Sun Wukong. How many people in the entire region and universe are no worse than Sun Wukong? If Raditz is as talented as Sun Wukong, then all of the millions of Saiyans are almost as talented as Sun Wukong.

Starting the first chapter, the combat power is 1.5W, and the combat power of Chapter 33 is 3W. The system adds 1 point of combat power every second, which equals 8.6W combat power per day, which means that these 13 chapters are filled with dozens of chapters and only take 2 hours. Author, you are no longer in the water, you are directly in the sea. This means that the writing is at an elementary school level and the plot is so unoriginal that it's just a pretense to slap people in the face. If it's not about being a fan, it's because the characters in the plot slipped away. You should believe that the people in the comment section are really cheap. I was disgusted again today.

I couldn't stand it anymore when I reached Chapter 8. I listened to it at twice the speed of the book listening mode, and I felt it was too watery and had too many inner dramas, which made me nervous. I was so upset that I couldn't listen anymore.

I feel numb. I feel that the main character's combat power is almost over. When the finale is approaching, I find that the author is still setting up the box. The most disappointing thing is that the progress has only reached 37%, and it has slipped away.

The setting of Dragon Ball's combat power values ​​is retained, which makes people feel like a hollow drama. The heart and the plot description are overlapped repeatedly. A refreshing article cannot fully capture the invincibility of a refreshing article, nor is it as exciting as a combat article. The subject matter is very good and makes people's eyes bright.

You've really reached a new level

Not to mention that GT is just a fan, even if it is considered as official history, the GT has changed from Super 3 full power to Super 4. . You went directly from super one to super four... It's too big a span, it's too fake. There is absolutely no way to write this later chapter, alas. Collapsed

Although Dragon Ball is the only comic I like, the author's writing style is really bad, and he also talks a lot of nonsense. He explains the same meaning over and over again, and he also likes to write awkward things everywhere. It's awesome that he can write a chapter for something that is only one sentence.

What is your first wish? Ask everyone for their opinions On the premise that it does not affect the follow-up outline, good wishes can be directly reserved 😁

It doesn't look good Water, it's all water, nothing but water is still water!

Let me ask a question, what would happen if Ginyu swapped bodies with a fused person, like Gotenks, and when the time comes to understand? If Ginyu swapped bodies with a big ragdoll, and someone pulled out the fat ragdoll inside the big ragdoll, what would happen to Ginyu, would he be replaced by a pure ragdoll? What would happen if Ginyu swapped bodies with Laiki's undead warrior?

Four hours of cell phone battery wasted. And a good mood for the last few minutes.

Too much praise for Vegeta. Many fan authors like to suppress Goku and promote Vegeta.