Raising a Hong Kong Entertainment Mogul

Stop writing. Even if you copied half of Old Wang's techniques and mastered them, you'd write better than what you're doing. I read over ten chapters that were illogical and awkward.

Shaw Brothers operated under a large studio system. Shaw Brothers actors and artists never received high salaries for films produced by their own company. If a film made a lot of money upon release, they were lucky to receive a bonus. Although Shaw Brothers actors and artists received high salaries for films produced outside the company, the company took a cut.

I read a few chapters, but the writing felt stiff and awkward, making it quite difficult to read, so I gave up.