The Arrival of Magical Intelligent Machines

The five powerful void nations in charge of the highest plane of the star realm are set as follows: United States of Shansha, race: human, Main plane: the highest plane of Ankaron, capital: Ankaria·Pillar of the Void. The Republic of Fierce Land, race: dragon, Main plane: the highest plane of molten core, capital: Astral Wall·Steel Wing City. Moro Necromantic Empire, race: Lich, Main plane: the high plane of Cerberon, capital: Syberia·Dead Sea Star Abyss. Loy elemental alliance, race: Elf, Main plane: High plane of Eretha, capital: Erelia • Rift Cloud Court. Pan-plane commercial complex, races: dwarfs, dwarves, Main plane: Noxi supreme plane, capital: Nordania·Free Sky.

I haven't started reading the second volume yet, but I thought I wanted to read it when I saw the title, so I came here to write a review. I think the author himself is capable, and the previous narratives are actually quite good. I think the core of the previous questions actually failed to live up to the readers' expectations, such as how to solve the protagonist's soul problem, when to start engaging in magic technology, and where is the dimensionality reduction impact of high technology on the original plane. If there is a gun hanging on the wall, he will definitely fire in the end. The original fantasy story is just an appetizer for this book, especially for me. What I want to read may be simpler and more crude, which is this technological dump truck, hurry up and create people! The long appetizer stage made me lose all my expectations. I couldn't catch up. It's like a sister telling you, giegie, there is something good to watch tonight, so come quickly. I followed it eagerly, only to find that there are thirty days of daylight here, and the fire was extinguished at that time. However, I was really intrigued by it, so I gave up and felt unwilling to do so. In the end, I put it on the bookshelf to read it when I am in the mood. More than a hundred chapters later, the only place where the dimension reduction strike is shown is the artillery range, and this is only a very superficial touch. The focus of the plot is still the nonsense of the fantasy ethics drama, even if you write two more sentences about the dwarf workshop? I have spent too much ink on human relationships, but the most attractive selling point of this book has never been developed. I only smell the fragrance of flowers but not the color. I hope that once exhausted, I will leave quickly. Author, I believe you have this ability. Just write freely and stop nagging so many parents. I want to see the protagonist return to the Glittering World!

If the recently popular "Technology + Cultivation" is a delicacy that is hard to refuse, then the book "Magic + Technology" is a new height above the delicacy. The content of the book belongs to modern technology in the era of magical science fiction, and there are various original technology examples based on this. No wonder the author's channel belongs to science fiction, there is no shame in it. The protagonist is a person from the Galaxy Federation in another universe. No, it should be called a digital life (it has no will to respect when it is resurrected). Coming to this universe due to accidents and wars, I saw the highest-end civilization in the magic technology universe at the beginning. However, on the way to guiding others to help me rebuild my body and build my soul (I don't believe the protagonist didn't have this purpose when he first came into contact with the tool girl), the so-called friend girl was too greedy and couldn't return to the world of advanced magic technology civilization. She is currently in the original plane trying to find a way to go back. The article unfolds the macroscopic view of scientific and technological development in the universe step by step. The disadvantage is that it is completely insufficient at present, and the progress cannot be advanced too fast, otherwise it will be counterproductive. The specific operation depends on the author.      ,,,, There is a sense of distortion caused by the beauty of translation of Western literature and the unsuitable Chinese understanding, but those who have read foreign masterpieces feel that this is a small Karami. Good to read, can't stand it, people who like: fantasy, science fiction, such as "I Have a Magic Dice of Destiny", "Pillars of Eta", and "The Three-Body Problem" will definitely like this book "The Arrival of Magical Omnics" Good luck to the author, I hope it will be seen by many people soon. 🙂🙂🙂

This novel is indeed very good, and has the qualifications to become a hit, but firstly, there are too few of them, and secondly, the new author has no fan base. Whether it will become popular depends on recommendations to increase exposure.

Originally, the farming novel was developing very well from low-level civilization to high-level civilization, but the sudden jump on the map drove away all the original readers. If you want to start a new book to practice, you have nothing to say but blessing. The new fantasy book can't be seen anymore.

Visual inspection is at least high-quality, and the probability of ordering 10,000 orders is also very high. If you keep writing in this state, the future is promising, and you might even witness the rise of a future great 😎

I finished reading it in one go, and I can only say that it may be the first time for the author to write online articles, but he definitely has a lot of experience with daily writing. The text is very smooth and looks very comfortable. The setting is not stiff, but it is very addictive to watch. A few sentences enrich the world view and add a lot of realism and epic feeling. For example, elves will not gain weight if they eat desserts. Another example is the Blessing Festival in these two chapters. The differences between the magical world and reality are known to people. Such small details can also be seen in subtle ways, making the whole world more real. Including the character logic, it is all tenable so far. It is really a great reading experience.

So far it looks pretty good, good luck to the author! Another suggestion is to develop a group of protagonists as soon as possible. A single protagonist in a big world like this cannot control it. The friendship I had with the Shansha girl was good (although the girl was a bit poisonous), but her sudden death surprised me.

Take your time, as long as you write at this pace, readers will slowly accumulate. You can't reach a thousand miles without taking small steps. Come on, keep an eye on you!

Let me talk about my feelings. The writing is relatively detailed. I feel that the writing is okay, but there are a few problems. 1. The protagonist has a relatively low level of technological civilization and magic energy civilization. It feels very boring, but the actual performance seems to be average, and I don't feel that he is very powerful. 2. Then, maybe the author wants to write more detailedly, to have the feeling of the Lord of Mysteries, but the mystery is explored from bottom to top. You are basically standing on the shoulders of giants according to the setting, and the rhythm of the plot feels a bit strange.